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On College Degree 开头开宗明义，没有许多题外话。这点很重要，因为有的同学写作文开头会写很多，而真正重要的分析问题往往因时间不够会草草了事。 Many years ago, graduates could fmd satisfactory jobs after their graduation. However, now things are totally different.New graduates usually are under great pressure in finding jobs. They always say that graduation means unemployment. 中间分析问题要有条理，连接词不一定要用“first”、“second”，本文的连接词“to begin with”、“洒addition”同学也可以借鉴。 This kind of pressure that new graduates have to endure is mainly caused by these reasons as follows. To begin with, most of college students are the only-child, who are more mentally dependent. Once they begin to find jobs by themselves after graduation, they really dont know what to do. If their first try fails, they will think that it is really difficult to find jobs. In addition, some umversity students are not qualified for desiTable jobs. Owing to spending too much time on computer games or others unimpmtant things, their study is neglected. As a result, they havent gained the knowledge those desirable positions require after four years of university life. 解决问题部分最好用到上文分析的结果，再根据分析的结果提出解决问题的方法。比如本文提出的解决方法“Students should attach greater importance to their study than trivialiti6s”就是针对上文的分析“Owing to spending too muchtime on computer games or others unimportant things, their study is neglected”，这样提出的解决方法才让人信服，也让文章结构更加紧凑。 This situation can be improved, although the govemment is increasing the growth of enrolling undergraduates yearly.Students should attach greater importance to their study than trivialities. Besides, undergraduates can gain more social experience by doing some part-time jobs during weekends and vacations. 点评：该文是一篇议论文范文。文章结构为开头提出问题，中间分析问题，结尾解决问题。议论文一般都町参考该结构。另外，“owing to”、“spend- - - on”、“as a result”等词组和句型的正确使用也使文章增色不少。Graduate Study or a Job To land a decent job, or to pursue graduate study? It is really a dilemma(左右为难)are presented in front of us.when the altematives(供选方案) It is beyond doubt that some active and ambitious（雄心勃勃的）students will not hesitate a moment to choose the former.They are eager to demonstrate(展示)their abilities and value. They assert(声称)that a college education is enough. Think ofBill Gates, the Microsoft Chairman, whose success raises doubts about the worth of a MBA degree. As far as Im concerned,I believe that we have every reason to prefer the latter choice in such an era when knowledge isexpanding at an astonishing speed. The demands for us to promote（提升） both our knowledge and skills are becomingincreasingly urgent(急迫的).So we should keep exploring in the treasure house of knowledge to enrich ourselves and make usmore adapted（适应）to the competitive society. Needless to say,a graduate study is a wise choice. If we hurry into the societybefore we get well prepared, we will only find that our knowledge is so limited in this increasingly competitive society.Keep on leaming and you will never regret! Overseas StudyingIn recent years, overseas studying is very popular. More and more people go abroad in the hope of studying for various reasons.Different people have different opinions on this phenomenonSome people think that overseas studying is not necessary because they insist that the knowledge in our own country is advanced enough. However, some other people approve of overseas studying. They think overseas studying is helpful for improving themselves in learning and working.In my view, overseas studying is beneficial. First, for those who want to make progress in their specialties，studying abroad provides many chances for them. Foreign countries have new and advanced knowledge in many subjects. Besides, some countries have the most advanced equipment(设备)which is lacking at home. With these advantages, students abroad can study further. Second, overseas studying is also a mind-expanding experience. Students abroad can obtain the culture, customs and scenery of those foreign countries. And those who are at home do not have such chances. Third, facing with the vocational pressure nowadays, people who have ever studied abroad usually have priority（优先权）in finding jobs. Because of the important opportunities overseas studying provides, I think studying abroad is very useful.Generation Gap Generation gap seems a hot topic between the old and the young. Parents complained that children didn t show them proper respect and obedience(服从), while children complained that their parents didn t understand them at all. Often they discover that they have very little in common.One cause of the generation gap is the opportunity that young people have to choose their own life. In traditional societies, children live in the same area as their parents, marry people their parents know and approve of, and often continue the family occupation（职业） In our society, people often move out of the home at an early age, marry or live with people their parents have never met, and choose occupations that are rather different. Parents often expect their children to be better than them. However, these ambitions for their children are another cause of the division between them. Finally, the speed of change in our society is another cause of it. In a traditional culture, people are valued(评价) for their wisdom, but in our society the knowledge of a lifetime may become out of date.No doubt, the generation gap will continue to be a feature of our life. Its causes are rooted in the freedoms and opportunities of our society, and in the rapid pace(速度) at which society changes. Is Frustration a Bad Thing? According to The New Oxford Dictionary of English, frustration, by definition（定义），means the feeling of being upset orannoyed, especially because of inability to change or achieve something. Since frustration seems to be a negative feeling, somepeople may be tempted to think that frustration is had for people. They helieve that constant frustration maY cause senousmental health problems. People suffering from such psychological（心理的）problems often resort to（付诸于）violence orsuicide（自杀），which poses a big threat to the people around them and thus causes instabi：lity（不稳定性）to the wholesociety. However, others hold a different view. They maintain that it is rather beneficial（有益的）to people. It goes side by sidewith（并驾齐驱）success. It inspires（激发）people to overcome hardships and difficulties and achieve the final success.People with this view even go so far as to say that no frustration, no success. They often cite(引用)Thomas Edison as a casein point(例证) From my perspective(视角)，frustration itself can not be regarded as good or bad. It is peoples approach（方法）to itthat matters a lot. Frustration is part of our life experience. In our process of growing up, we may inevitably experience it whenconfronted with(遭遇)situations that dont come up to our expectations. It is a test of our courage when it befalls on(降临)us. If we let it control us, we may fall into the abyss（深渊）of being inflicted by(施加)serious psychological problems. Butif we harness（驾驭）it and take it as our source of inspiration, wc may ultimately enjoy the glory（荣耀）of success. - 202 -Therefore, it is safe to say that it is improper to view frustration as good or bad and that it is our attitude toward it that makesmuch differenceDear Sir or Madam I am writing to inform you that l wish to move into a new room next semester.1 would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharingI must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is myFor one thin;, his friends areconstantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisyparties. In these circumstances,I find it difficult to concentrate onmy studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move intoa room of my own.Therefore,1 would be ;rateful if you could find asingle room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near tothe college campus as possible.Im writing to complain about a train. I took the T435 train from Beijing to Tianjin on January 14th for an important business appointment in Tianjin. I was supposed to negotiate a business contract with a German company. But due to the train delay l was an hour late and the negotiators from the German company had already left when I finally arrived. As a result, my company suffered great loss and I received punishment consequently.Train delay is a common phenomenon in our country and has caused many losses and inconveniences. I think the railroad company first of all should take effective measures to reduce the occurrence of train delay. In addition, the railroad company should compensate the passengers in case of a train delay.I am looking forward to a satisfying reply soon. Yours Sincerely, Zhang QiangDear Lawrence, It has been five years since we met each other last time. How time flies! How are things with you? The happy time we spent together is always on my mind and I really hope to meet you again. As you know, Spring Festival Lunar New Year, is the most favorable holiday for us Chinese. With its colorful and rich traditions, it is celebrated almost in every part of China. Everyone is indulged in the dominant atmosphere of joyous family reunion and with the fresh and vigorous look people greet the New Year. The celebrations vary from place to place, but there are three traditions that have never differed throughout the country. First, the New Years Eve dinner is a symbol of family reunion, with all family members sitting around the steaming table, tasting a variety of delicious food and wishing each other health, success and happiness. Second, people, during the holidays, will visit each other to express their best regards and wishes. And finally, we can enjoy the marvelous lion and dragon dances symbolizing happiness, good fortune and prosperity. The day is drawing nearer, my families and I sincerely invite you to join us for this years Spring Festival. If youd like to, we can make further arrangements. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Yuan ChaoOn keeping Dogs as PetsNowadays more and more people are beginning to keep dogs as pets. Not infrequently you will come across a lady or a gentleman who walk with their dogs in the street. In the neighborhood, the elderly and children are seen in the evening playing with dogs. Why does keeping pets become more prevalent now?There is a definite link between the rise in the number of people keeping pets and the rise in people s standard of living. For the purchase, the health