2014年成都市中考作文之说明文.doc

2014年成都市中考作文之说明文完美收官导读：成都市中考说明文文完美收官之作将以2011年为例，从以下三方面总结一、学生错误统计二、2011年中考说明文剖析及范文三、中考说明文注意事项一、学生错误统计（3方面）（一）语篇类1、不明确文章要点，要点缺失或不易寻找。 The Lantern Festival has long history in China. We can eat sweet rice dumplings with my family.（无When we spend it提纲） What do you usually do during Christmas要点缺失。2、文章组织混乱，所写内容与文章无关。 We also play with firecrackers, it was beautiful, and it can leave animals. Some old saying said, the firecrackers can make people safety. We also eat sweet rice dumpling, because it was very beautiful and it saying good news. However， in the Lantern Festival, we can watch the Lantern festival party with our family. I am sorry that I couldnt get back to you sooner. And in the lantern Festival we can get along with our families. Watch the light party We are too fun in the festival. We should eat sweet rice dumplings. Maybe you never ate it before. Its very tasty, I think. When we finished the dinner we always play with firecrackers. I love it. Most people love this traditional Chinese festival. Why? Because we can stay with family we can laugh and talk all day. Now, do you love the Lantern Festival? We also have to watch the Lantern Festival Evening. We eat a kind of sweet rice dumpling called yunxiao. If you ask why we like it, I would say that I like it because I can have a day off.3、缺乏基本常识，张冠李戴节日习俗。 Actually, it is the first day of the new year. After the spring, we have the Lantern Festival. In the morning, we are supposed to visit friends, little kids can get lucky money from olders. Its on February 15th. It is said if we call to our friends at 0:00 on January 1st, we will keep our friendship forever, because it seems to spend two years being with friend. The result of Quyuan. He is a good man. And we like to play with firecrackers. But I prefer to Hua Long Zhou.4、中文表达 Whats your activities during Christmas? The other activity is watching the Lantern Festival meeting. It has long long year history. The reasons of we like it has two. The reasons we like the Lantern Festival are that it comes from Chinese history. It is the first day of the new year. I heard that in your country also has such a traditional festival.（二）语法类1、主从句 This can be a way to talk with our parents. Because they are usually too busy. This is a festival that every family together. We all like the Lantern Festival. Because we can eat with family. Can you tell me what will you do during Christmas for me?2、冠词使用 It is a traditional Chinese festival with long history.3、作文中的祈使句 Please write to me soon.4、多动症 All the people are stay together on the day. The other activity is watch TV. Play with firecrackers usually make us feel very happy. It make me cant forget its taste.5、主谓一致 Here are something about it. There is many activities on the day. Every Chinese love festival.6、一个句子有且只有一个谓语动词 It the last Spring Festival. I also have a question, can you tell me something about Christmas?7、介词误用 At that day8、6也 Also, I wonder what you usually do We also can watch the Lantern Festivals play on TV. We shouldnt use it, too.9、情态助动词 We can eating with family. We will sweet rice dumplings.10、=2，3 We both like this day.（三）单词拼写类1、together toghter2、secret secrits3、customs custums4、watch wath5、people peaple/pleople6、China Chain7、lantern lanter/latern8、dessert derest9、snack snake10、beautiful beaufiful11、guess gass12、joyful joyous13、heard heared14、result realutes二、2011年成都市中考作文评分标准及范文（一）内容要点：1、我们喜欢元宵节的原因。（3分）2、我们过元宵节的时间（2分）3、我们在该节日进行的活动（至少写出3项，每项3分，共计9分）4、询问Maria怎样过圣诞节（1分）（二）范文We like the Lantern Festival because we can enjoy beautiful views at night. We have it at the end of the Spring Festival. Usually, we eat sweet rice dumpling. We also play with firecracker or enjoy firecracker show. Whats more, we go out to watch colorful lantern with our family members. When it gets dark, it looks beautiful everywhere w