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Section Writing介绍景点或家乡的说明文 技法指导本单元的写作话题是介绍旅游景点，要求学生用书信的形式写关于旅游的说明文，向不同民族的朋友介绍异国的旅游景点、风土人情，并提出合理的旅游建议。内容常常是有关目的地情况的基本介绍，包括推荐旅游景点和游览项目，以及旅途注意事项等。介绍旅游景点时，通常按以下步骤进行：第一部分为导入部分，即针对“对方”的一些情况，引出相关旅游目的地的话题。第二部分为对旅游目的地的介绍。这是文章的主体部分。列举旅游目的地的特征，找准切入点，采用合理的说明顺序，将特征有条理地呈现。第三部分通常为旅游建议。行文时，可以就旅游安全，包括人身安全和财产安全等作温馨提示。最后可以用“表示愿意提供帮助，并祝旅途愉快”等语句结束全文。在写作时要注意：1客观、科学地介绍某一个城市或地点，应该突出其特点，给人以可信的感觉。2所用语言要准确、地道，以事实服人。因而事例应客观真实、准确详尽，且要注意双方情感的交流，体现语言的交际功能。3层次清楚，条理分明：应该由浅入深、由易到难、由外到内、从上到下、从左到右、从远到近、由表及里，先写外观，再写内在的特征、特性以及作者的感受和给读者留下的深刻印象。4注意合理地运用过渡词语，将各自然段有机地结合在一起，使整篇文章过渡自然、条理清晰。5要准确使用表示方位的词及短语，同时要注意详略得当，重点部分要突出。黄金表达1问候语Hello, my dear visitors. Welcome to . Its so nice to meet you here!I feel it a great honour to be your tour guide today.Id like to take this opportunity to give you a brief introduction about . 2景点介绍It was built in . so it had a very long history.It is located/situated ., with an area of . It has become a most popular tourist attraction since . With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and picturesque scenery, . is one of Chinas major tourist cities.3结束语Please allow me, then, to take this opportunity to thank you for your cooperation and understanding.Wish you have a good time and enjoy yourself.If you have a chance to visit it, you are sure to have a good time there.典题演练假设你是李明，你想邀请你的笔友Tony来益阳旅游。请给他写一封信，为他介绍你的家乡益阳。要点如下：1空气和水质量好，绿化面积大，环境未被污染，气候宜人，是全国宜居城市；2民风淳朴，益阳人民热情好客；3著名的食物与景点有擂茶和周立波故居等。注意：1.词数100左右；2切勿逐字翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：擂茶grinding tea；周立波故居 former residence of Zhou LiboDear Tony，Welcome to Yiyang of China. Yours，Li Ming谋篇布局1体裁：说明文2话题：介绍家乡益阳3时态：一般现在时4人称：第一人称和第三人称为主联想词汇1气候宜人 _答案：pleasant weather 2绿化面积 _答案：green space3原来的环境；未被污染的环境 _答案：original environment; unpolluted environment4当地居民 _答案：local people 5传统食物 _答案：traditional food 连词成句1益阳气候宜人，是全国宜居城市之一。Yiyang is one of the best cities to live in in China and it is warm.Yiyang is one of the most desirable places to live in China which enjoys pleasant weather.(升级句)2益阳人民热情好客，民风淳朴。People in Yiyang are kind and welcoming.The people in Yiyang are kind and welcoming, and they have simple folk customs.(升级句)3著名的食物与景点有擂茶和周立波故居等。The famous food is grinding tea, and Zhou Libo once lived there.The famous food is grinding tea which is delicious. And Yiyang is the former residence of Zhou Libo, a famous writer of China.(升级句)连句成篇Dear_Tony，Welcome_to_Yiyang_of_China. Do you know about it? And now I would be very pleased to tell you something about this small citymy hometown.Yiyang is one of the most desirable places to live in China which enjoys pleasant weather. It has fresh air and excellent water as well as more green space and original environment. Im sure you will be fascinated by its unique scenery and beautiful environment.And the people of Yiyang are kind and welcoming, and they have simple folk customs. There are also many traditional foods. The famous food is grinding tea which is delicious. And Yiyang is the former residence of Zhou Libo, a famous writer of China.I am looking forward to your arrival.Yours，Li_Ming跟踪训练假定你是李华，是北京欢乐谷的一名导游。请你根据以下要点，向一个英国中学生旅游团作一个简单的景点介绍：1北京欢乐谷主题公园占地560,000平方米，于2006年7月对外开放；2游客可以参与多项活动，多种设施可以满足不同年龄段人群的需要；3可以观看多种精彩表演；4参观时要注意安全。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：设施 facility 精彩范文名师点评I feel honoured that I have the opportunity to be your tour guide today. that引导原因状语从句，不定式短语to be your tour guide作opportunity的后置定语。opened to the public in July, 2006是过去分词短语作Beijing Happy Valley的后置定语。which will surely impress you deeply是which引导的非限制性定语从句，用来补充说明 performances。总评全文涵盖了写作要求中的每一个点，条理清楚，重点突出。同时文中语言流畅，句式结构丰富多变。课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。(2019合肥市高三调研性测试)Classical Chinese garden design aims to create a natural landscape on a small scale and emphasize the perfect harmony between man and nature.A Chinese garden _1_ (be) like a scroll (卷轴) painting, _2_ (show) a series of carefully composed scenes. New views are revealed as one walks along the pathways. In the gardens, _3_ most frequently meet the eye are winding paths that seemingly lead to nowhere. There, a path seems to end, but all of _4_ sudden, a new world is rolled out before you: pavilions (亭子), rock formations and spring waterall combined to provide a pleasant surprise! At the _5_ (enter) to a Chinese garden, there is usually a huge stone or wall _6_ (use) to screen your view so as to later produce unimaginable delight when you turn around the wall. A Chinese garden may have windows on all _7_ (it) four walls. And it is _8_ (interest) that, through the windows, visitors may see different views from different angles, and thus the composition of the garden becomes enlarged.A Chinese garden is a place where culture is both created and enjoyed. All plants mark the shift of _9_ (season). Si