高一上期末英语作文汇编rdfz.doc

ContentEverything needed included which is related to your view.StructureGood beginning and ending (好的开头结尾)Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)Proper linking words between sentences (恰当地使用连词)Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式as far as I am concernedOn the contraryAs a consequenceas far as I am concernedon the contraryas a consequencehoweverSince thenthis passage, as far as I am concerned,Something is essential.Based onmaking a plan before doingBased on this passage,making a plan before doing something is essential.I have realized the vital importance of a strong plan.As an old saying goes, “no pains, no gains”, I think, only by taking pains to complete our goals with a plan, can we attain success.Without a detailed plan, I couldnt even allocate my time sensible, making me idle away the entire vocationAlthough beavers are always the symbol of working hard, their unplanned working are always useless, leading to the waste of both their time and superb ability.Language* No Chinglish * No Grammatical mistakes* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns记叙文写作1明确“五个W和一个H”。_ 要写好记叙文，首先要确定先写什么，再写什么，最后写什么，然后开始布局谋篇。我们可以借用英语新闻写作中经常用到的“五个W和一个H”的概念，即what(什么事)，who(什么人)，when(什么时候)，where(什么地点)，why(什么原因)，how(怎么样)。整个写作内容的确定、写作材料的筛选，都要围绕这五个W和一个H进行。What activities have U taken part in?basketball match 篮球赛sports meeting 运动会the chorus competition 合唱比赛broadcast gymnastics competition 广播操比赛tug-of-war competition 拔河比赛debate 辩论赛singing contest 唱歌比赛one possible example I still remember the chorus competition organized by our school last month. Hoping to win, a lot preparation had been done. First, we had to choose songs that suited us. As we all know, well begun is half done, a good song would surely benefit us. The next step was to practice more. Spending a large amount of time both in class and after class, we made a great progress after a month. Just as we had expected, we won the first prize at last.I found the activity impressive because its interesting and all of us had done our best. It taught me that life is full of joy and reward, what we ought to do is to seize them.黄金模板I still remember how (心情) I was (事件发生的时间), when I (什么事件).(事件发生的过程). The smile shone in the whole day and the following days. A week later, (事件的结果). Thanks to _， I (谈谈自己的看法).参考范文： The summer holiday we are looking forward to is drawing near. The past holidays brought me many wonderful memories. The most unforgettable experience is the party held last year to celebrate the golden wedding anniversary of my grandparents. Before the party, I made a careful plan for it with my parents. All our relatives got together for this special occasion when my cousins and I gave my grandparents some nice handmade presents. My grandparents were so happy that they sang and danced like young couple. As a Senior 2 student, the coming summer holiday is sure a busy one. Ill make good use of it to work hard at my lessons, getting ready for the college entrance examinations. Ill also try to spare some time to do some exercise to keep fit. In addition, I can watch my favorite TV programmes with my parents, Ill visit my grandparents and help them prepare food for the family gettogether. I hope Ill have a joyful and fruitful holiday.Letter I will be available for interview at any time, and look forward to hearing from you. 称呼（后面的标点是逗号,冒号）:Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, 签名：sincerely yours书信写作的五点要求：1、开门见山说意图2、咨询/ 建议1、2、3、不同内容可分段4、感谢客气不可少 期待回信成老套1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你）Dear Sir/ Mr. Smith, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department./ I am a at your / I am a at your college, enrolled in the course./ My name is, I am2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）Dear Tom, Hello / Hi. How are you? / I hope everything is fine. / How are things going with you?/ How are you getting on in / getting along with?3. 解释写信的原因（1）致谢： Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada./ I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for/ I would like to thank you most sincerely for（2）抱怨： I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room./ I wish to make a complaint about/ I am writing to draw your attention to.（3）致歉： I am writing to you because I am unable to./ I am terribly sorry that./ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to（4）询问： I would like to obtain /request/seek/inquire some information about/ I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor. / I would like some detailed information on/about.（四）结尾段：1、发出请求（1）Please give this matter your immediate attention.（2）I would very much appreciate it ifas soon as possible.2、提供帮助（1）I hope thesewill be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information.（2）will be taking responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance, she/he will be pleased to help you3、再次表示歉意或感激（1）Thank you for your kind assistance.（2）Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.（3）I am sorry that I cannot, and trust that you will understand.（4）In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.（5）Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4、期盼回信：（1）I look forward to your prompt response.（2）Looking forward to a prompt reply,（3）I expect to hear from you very soon.（4）I hope to receive your reply shortly24th March, 2000 Dear Mr. John Brown, Thank you very much for your letter dated 12th March.Could you come over to my company so that we can discuss the details of our cooperation? If yes, please inform me of your flight. I have arranged for Miss Li of my company to meet you at the airport. Wish you a pleasant journey.A Letter of Apology 24th Oct. , 2008 Dear Mr. Wang, I am writing to apologize for my late homework. The paper which you assigned to us last Monday was due this Friday, but to my regret, I havent even started it yet. I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and for the inconvenience it would bring to you.I caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days. Therefore, I couldnt go to the library to get the necessary referential information which was needed for my paper. As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time. Fortunately I have finally fully recovered. I will finish the paper as soon as I can and try my best to hand in homework on time in the future.June 17th ,2006Dear Xiao He, Thank you so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province.