高考作文评分标准示范.doc

高考作文评分标准示范 全国卷1 假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2：005：00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话44876655）欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右。Dear Mrs. Smith,-Li Hua标准范文Dear Mrs. Smith, Im Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishesLi Hua内容要点1自我介绍 2 邀请做评委 3 演讲主题 4 比赛时间 5 参赛选手 6 联系方式高考英语高考作文评分标准 1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 【各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档(很好)；(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(好)：(16-20分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档(适当)：(11-15分) 1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第二档(较差)：(6-10分) 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 第一档(差)：(1-5分) 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 6. 信息未能传达给读者。 不得分：（0分） 未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。 下面是2010学生的高考作文，按照以上要求给出了省专家的打分，请对比，把握自己的写作档次。1 Im Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union in Yucai middle school. Our school is going to hold an English speech contest with Men and the Nature as its topic. As is known to all, you are a very famous foreign teacher in the university, so I wonder if you would like to be the judge of our speech contest. The speech contest will be held in Room 501 from 2;00 p.m to 5:00 p.m on June 15. There will be in total 10 students competing in the contest. If you are interested in the contest and agree to be our judge, please get in touch with me. My phone number is 44876655. Im looking forward to your call. 242Im the president of the students union of Yucai middle school. Our school is going to hold an English speech contest, its an honour to invite you to judge our performance and give us some advice. The topic of this contest is about human and nature. As we know, the environment is getting worse and worse, so we want to discuss the proper relationship between nature and human . The contest will be held from 2:00 to 5:00 in the afternoon on June 15th. Ten competitore are expected to compete in Classroom 501. It must be interesting and I will appreciate it if you would like to come. Please reply to me soon. My telephone number is 44876655. 233 Im Li Hua, chairman of students union in Yucai high school. Our school will hold an English speech contest, which is about Human and Nature. It will be held at 2;00pm -5:00 pm.on 15th June. And the place is in the No.501 classroom. There will be 10 students attending the contest. I think it will be a close contest . I have heard of you for a long time. And i hope you can spare your valuable time to be our judge. If you have something to ask me , please call me at 44876655. My phone is open for you anytime. Ill appreciate it if you could come. Looking forward to your early reply. 23 4 It is a great honour for me -the chairman of the students union of Yucai school, to give you an invitation about our schools speech contest. I sincerely hope you to be our judge. Considering the fact that nature is of great importance to us human beings, we decide to hold a speech contest on People and Nature. The contest will be held in the classroom 501. Whats more, there will be 10 students giving us their perfect speeches from 2:00 to 5:00 p.m on 15th, June. I believe firmly that you are to enjoy the speech contest. In addition, Id like to give you my telephone number 44876655 in case that you have any problem. Were waiting for your instruction. 235I am a student called Li Hua,who come from Yucai Middle school. Im writing to invite you to our school as a teacher when our school holds the . The purpose of the speech contest is Human and Nature and what the aim is to make students know the nature and make a difference for protecting the nature. It will be held from 2:00 p.m to 5:00 p.m on June 15th in 501 room. Whats more, there are ten students taking part in the speech contest. When you come to our school, you can call me at 44876655 Im looking forward to your coming . 226 Hello, Im Li Hua, who is president of Students Union. in Yucai Middle School. Im sorry to interrupt you when you are busy with your work. Our school is going to hold an English speech contest named Man and Nature .there are ten students debating on this theme. We are going to hold this contest from 2:00 p.m to 5:00 p.m on 15th June . As for the place , we think the classroom which is called 501 is the best . And all students are welcome to take the contest. Owing to your special skills and knowledge in English, we hope you can come and judge us. We all want to make progress from this contest. If you promise it, please call me 44876655 and we students cant thank you too much. Wait for your reply. 21-me 237Im president of Yucai middle school students union. And my school is going to hold an English speech contest. The theme of the contest is Human beings and Nature. Id like to invite you to attend the contest to act as the judge. The time is arranged from 2 pm to 5 pm on June 15. And the contest will take place in the 501 classroom. In addition, ten competitors will join in the contest. What is worth mentioning, if you cant attend it, please get in touch with me as soon as possible. My telephone number is 44876655. Im looking forward to your coming. 218 An English speech is to be held in our school. Its hoped that you can come to act as a judge. Here is some information about this contest. The topic of it is human beings and nature. And it is due to begin at 2:00 p.m on June 15th. It will last for about three hours in Classroom 501. In addition, ten students will compete in this contest , which is believed to be wonderful. There is no doubt that with your participation it must be more interesting. Lastly, you can give me a call after you have made a decision. My telephone number is 44876655. I will appreciate it very much if you can turn up. 209 As is known to us, English is more and more important, therefore, its high time that we should take measures to improve students English skills. For one thing, it can draw students attention, for another it can make our life meaningful. The English speech contest to be held in our school is drawing near. I expect you can come with us working as a judger. The topic of the English speech contest is human beings and nature, besides, you can come here at 2-5 oclock p.m, 15th June, whats more, contect will be held in class 501 and ten students will join the contest. As far as Im concerned. It would be successed if you were to come, please call me at 44876655. Im waiting for your reply. (fuhao 19)10 Im Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union in Yu cai middle school. Our school is going to hold an English speech contest, whose theme is People and Nature. And we have made it from 2 to 5 on 15th June in Class 501. Besides, it will be held in the afternoon. There will be 10 students participates in it. So Im sincerely hoping that you can come and act the role as a judger, which will not only do good to improve our English, but also increase our spirit. Here is my telephone number 44876655. Im looking forward to your reply. Thats all. thanks. 1811 Our high school will hold a speech contest on June 15th. Its theme is Nature and People. I invite your warm-heartedly to be our judger. Its great honour to us if you are willing to join us. The contest will start at 2:00 p.m and finish at 5:00 p.m . The place is at classroom 501. My name is Li Hua and if you have problems , please call me at 44876655. Ill give you a hand without thinking. I believe that our wonderful speeches wont let you down. Also, the 10 students will leave a great expression on you. 17 12 Im a student in Yucai School. My school will host an English Speech Contest about person and nature . We hope you can come to my school help us. The speech contest will start at 2:00-5:00 pm in 15 June . And it is host in 501 class. We have 10 students take part in this English Speech Contest . 44876655 is my telephone number. If you have spare time in that day, you can call me. Our school students looking forward to you come. Thank you very much. 1613 My name is Li Hua. Im chairman of students scioty in YuYing middle school. Our school will hold an English speech contest. We are looking forward to you can come to give us some advice. The speech contest theme is people and nature. Well hold it on 15th June from 2:00pm to 5:00 pm. Therere 10 students attend the speech contest. I think it will be very exciting. And it be holded in 501 classroom. I must believe that we can have a good time in there and learn something from it. You can keep in touch with me. The telephone number is 44876655. Im looking forward to your letter. Welcome to you! 1614 My name is Li Hua. I come from Yucai middle school. I am students chairman. On the 5th Jun. afternoon our school will hold a English speech contest. The speech theme is Person and Nature. We had know your name early. We know you are great English teacher and you are a warm-hearted woman. We expect you can join us and help point out our English grammer mistakes. There are 10 students who join in the speech contest. With you attend our speech contest will hold succeed. This is my phone number 44876655. The time is during 2:00 to 5:00 at 501 class. We are looking forward to your attending our speech contest. 16 -15 How are you ! Im the president of students in Yucai middle school. Im Li Hua. Our school will hold an English speech contest. Its an honour if you can act as the judger. The speech contest will hold from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm in June 15, and it will hold in 501 class, The main topic about it is the human beings and nature. There are 10 students will attend it. My telephone number is 44876655, you can tell me whether you come through it. I believe we will be able to hold it successfully. Welcome to it! Thank you! 15 16 With the speech contest around the corner. Our school want to invet you come to our school. This speech contest is a English speech contest. It is about people and nature. I know you are a good English teacher from other country we are very glad if you will come now. Let me tell you something about the speech contest. The time is from 2:00 to 5:00 afternoon on July. Where is it. Its in 501 class. There are 10 students join it. If you will come. You can call me. My phone is 44876655. 1417 My name is Li Hua, I am a monitor of Yucai medal school. Our school will hold a speech contest, so we wish you give our some advice. The theme is people with natural, and the time is on the afternoon of June 15, from 2:00 to 5:00. The place is in 501 class and there will be ten students join the contest. I believe there will be a heated competitive in June 15. If you make a decision, you can get a touch with me, my telephone number is 44876655. We are expecting your coming. 1318 Im glad to write the letter to you. Im a chairman from De Yu middle school. Our school are going to hold the speech contest , in order to develop students English applicatin skill. There is human and nature. So , we wish you can attend the contect and give us some advice. Ten students can join in the final speech contest. About 2 pm in the June 15. Have you ever join in the speech contest. If you willing to coming, please call me. 1219 Our school will hold a English speech contest at 501 class, on May 15. at 2:00 to 5:00