高一读后续写练习.ppt

ContinuationWriting 读后续写 ShiyanHighSchoolMissWang 读后续写 提供一篇350词以内的语言材料 原文多是情节丰富的记叙文 偶有少量的议论文 要求考生依据该材料内容 所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写 150词左右 将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接 情节和结构完整的短文 满分25分 新高考考试说明 第五档 21 25第四档 16 20第三档 11 15第二档 6 10第一档 1 5 评分原则 本题总分为25分 分5个档次给分 Step1 ReadthepassageStep2 Getthemainidea who When Where What Why How Step3 Predictthepossibleplotdevelopment theplot logical reasonable thegiventwosentences Step4 Begintowrite theunderlinedwords Step5 Polishyourwriting 词汇 句式 语法的多样性 Howtowriteacontinuation When Where Who what Why how howtogetthemainidea Basicformsofthe6questions Whendidthestoryhappen Wheredidthestoryhappen Whoisthemaincharacter Whathappenedinthestory Whywasthemattercaused Howwasthemattersolved ended 读后续写练习IIWhenIwasalittlegirl everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer andmeanwhile haveaconversationwithme Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning nomatterwhat SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80 degreesummerheat Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim ButIwasalwaysbusy unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately Iwasinahurry soourconversationwasshort Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad注意 1 所续写短文的词数应为60左右 2 至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3 续写部分只有一段 开头语已为你写好 4 续写完成后 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 When Where Who What Why How whenIwasalittlegirl mydad I haveaconversationwithme mydadtakescareofmyfamily Step1 ReadthepassagePara 1WhenIwasalittlegirl everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer andmeanwhile haveaconversationwithme Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily Mainidea WhenIwasalittlegirlmydadliketohaveaconversationwithme whotakescareofmyfamily 13 可编辑 Step1 ReadthepassagePara2 Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning nomatterwhat SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80 degreesummerheat Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim ButIwasalwaysbusy unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim Mainidea WhenIgrewup mydadwanttotalktome ButIwasbusy unabletohaveaconversationwithhim Step1 ReadthepassagePara 3OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately Iwasinahurry soourconversationwasshort Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital Mainidea OneSundaymorningcameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital Para 4ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad whenIgottothehospital Step3 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment Inagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop Topredictdoesn tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike Continuationwritingmustbedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated Step4 Begintowrite 注意 1 所续写短文的词数应为60左右 2 至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3 续写部分只有一段 开头语已为你写好 4 续写完成后请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 Theunderlinedwords Idadconversationtalkunablehospital 参考词汇 passaway die vi dead adj losesb regretdoingsth 后悔做过某事 findsb lyingonthebed burstintotears burstoutcrying onlythendidIrealize getovertheillness recoverfromtheillness myheartisbroken selfless beworriedabout beconcernedabout Possibleversion1 WhenIrushedtohospital Ifoundmydadlyingthere weakandhopless Holdingbackthetears Italkedtohimgently Hisfacelitup OnlythendidIrealizetheconversationwasmorethanconversation Itwaslove IwasgratefulthatmyfathergotovertheillnessandnowitisIwhoalwaysenjoystartingthecoversation 62字 Possibleversion2 BythetimeIgottohospital myfatherhadpassedaway Nowitwashewhodidnothavetimeforaconversationwithme IrealizedhowlittleIknowaboutmydad hisdeepestthoughtsanddreams AfterhisdeathIlearnedmoreabouthim andevenmoreaboutmyself 53字 Step4 Polishyourwri