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书面表达话题1 写人叙事类写作练兵 (15达州改编)个人的成长离不开他人的支持,请以“people who help me”为题，写一篇短文。分别谈谈老师、家人及朋友曾在哪些方面给予你关心和帮助，你将怎样回报他们。要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80词左右。people who help me _ _ _ 话题2事物介绍类写作练兵(15商丘模拟)日常生活中，我们经常会遇到需要帮助的事情，或者伸出援手去帮助别人，那么请以“helping others is great”为题，写一篇文章。要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80词左右。 _ _ _ 话题3发表观点类写作练兵(15烟台改编)随着互联网的发展，智能手机(smartphone)已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。以“refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80词左右。 _ _ _ 话题4咨询建议类写作练兵(16原创)某中学正在招聘赴英夏令营领队，应聘的条件是用英语给你的队友写一封e-mail，提醒相关注意事项。假如你是王涵，请根据要点提示，写一封e-mail，参加应聘。要点提示：1. 出行前(了解相关信息、提高英语口语)；2. 旅行中(注意言谈举止、人身安全等)；3. 要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。dear friends,im glad to be your tour leader, and im writing to tell you something important. _ _ best wishes!yours,wang han话题1写人叙事类写作练兵【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 谈论曾经帮助过我的人，故文体为记叙文。2. 写作内容包括：家人、老师和朋友给予的帮助，以及作者的感恩之情。3. 讲述自己时用第一人称，谈论他人时用第三人称。本文是在叙述事实，所以用一般现在时。4. 词数为80词左右，短文不能出现真实的人名、校名。【写作指导】帮助我的人要点提示素材串联开头：引出观点我一直都在接受父母、老师和朋友的帮助。正文：分别描述父母、老师和朋友怎么帮助我。1. 从不考虑他们自己（never consider themselves）2. 使高兴起来（cheer. up）3. 温暖 (warmth)4. 缺点(shortcoming)5. 亲密的、紧密的(be close)6. 肩并肩（shoulder to shoulder）结尾：我不会忘记帮助我的人。1. 不会忘记（never forget）2. 在我心里（in my heart）【高分范文】 people who help me during these years, i have got lots of help from my parents, teachers and friends. parents love is the greatest thing in the world. they teach me life knowledge with their rich experiences. i think the best way to repay them is to visit them often in the future. my teachers are also helpful in my life. they not only give knowledge to me, but also teach me how to be a good person. maybe the best present for teachers is to be outstanding and successful in the future. i will never forget my dear friends. they are really the ones who grow up with me and understand my tears and laughter. just as the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. so lets help each other and encourage each other whenever in difficulties. thanks for those who help me in my life. i will always remember them.话题2事物介绍类写作练兵【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 这是一篇命题作文，可从介绍帮助别人的一件事中谈论自己的感受，升华文章的主题。2. 在叙述事情时注意时态要用一般过去时，主语是用第一人称。3. 动笔前首先根据提示组织材料，确定写作内容，然后用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。注意叙述的条理性，适当使用连接词。4. 字数应为80个左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息。【写作指导】帮助他人是伟大的要点提示素材串联开头：开门见山我在日常生活中经常乐于助人（help others）正文：举例可以详细讲述我是如何帮助别人的，并且给出一两个例子。结尾：原因帮助他人是伟大的(helping others is great)【高分范文】helping others is greatto tell you the truth, i really enjoy helping others. to me, helping others is a behavior that shows ones kindness and politeness. for this reason, i often help others in my daily life. helping others makes me happy. last sunday, when i was shopping with my mother, i found a small boy crying in a corner.so i went to him and asked him why he was crying. he said that he didnt find his father.he didnt know where his daddy was. so i comforted him and took him to find his father. later on, we found his father.the little boy and his father were very happy, and i was happy, too.what a meaningful day!i understand that helping others is great.话题3发表观点类写作练兵【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 根据要求以“refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇短文,体裁为议论文。2. 本文写我们身边的“低头族”，写作时用第三人称，可穿插使用第一人称。3. 时态通常用一般现在时，可适当穿插一般将来时。【写作指导】拒做“低头族”要点提示素材串联开头：描述现象1. 随着互联网的发展，智能手机已被广泛使用。(are widely used)2. 我们身边的“低头族”随处可见。(phubbers； here and there)正文：论述弊端1. 影响与家人、朋友的关系(relationship； have effects on)2. 容易引发交通事故(traffic accidents)3. 对健康有害(do harm to)4. 不利于学习和工作(be bad for)结尾：表达观点1. 正确利用手机(make good use of)2. 面对面交流胜过网上聊天(face-to-face conversations)【高分范文】refuse to be phubberswith the development of the internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. phubbers can be seen here and there.however， it is bad for our daily life. first of all， smart-phones have effects on relationship with family and friends. besides, if phubbers concentrate on playing smart-phones, traffic accidents will happen easily. whats more, if phubbers play phones too much, it will do harm to health and it is also bad for study and work. so phubbers should make good use of smart-phones to open our eyes and enrich our knowledge. we should communicate more often by face-to-face conversations rather than chat online.话题4咨询建议类写作练兵【审题指导】 细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 根据材料内容可知本文是要写一封提醒夏令营的队友准备相关工作的电子邮件。2. 根据要点提示可知：邮件中首先要提到出行前所做的准备工作，比如要了解夏令营的时间、地点和内容，去英国进行夏令营所需要携带的东西，提高英语口语能力和了解英国相关人情风俗等。其次是在旅行中，要注意言行举止得当，保障人身安全,遵守当地的有关规定等。3. 以王涵的名义写信，人称为第一人称。4. 本文是在给夏令营如何做准备提出建议，所以时态以一般将来时为主。5. 词数80词左右，不得出现真实的人名和校名。【写作指导】电子邮件要点提示素材串联开头：表明身份，首申内容很高兴作为你们的领队，我将告诉你们一些重要的事（im glad to be your leader, and im writing to tell you something important.）。正文：为夏令营做好准备的具体建议1.了解夏令营（learn about the summer camp）；2.提高英语口语(improve ones spoken english)；3.准备好夏令营所需的东西(prepare all the things for the camp)；4.注意言行举止(pay attention to ones behavior and words)；5.保障人身安全(protect oneself)；6.遵守当地规章制度(follow all the rules in england)。结尾：表达愿望希望能在英国表现良好（i hope you all do well in england）。【高分范文】dear friends,im glad to be your tour leader, and im writing to tell you something important. firstly, everyone needs to make your own preparation for the summer camp to england. you can call me or e-mail me to learn about our summer camp. well have our camp in england, so i believe you must improve your spoken english. youll be your own translator. at the same time, you also need to prepare all the things for the camp.secondly, you must pay attention to your behavior and words while you are in england. and you need to protect yourself carefully. i think youll