高中英语书面表达讲评赢取高分技巧与策略课件.ppt

书面表达讲评之赢取高分技巧与策略 一 welcometoourclass 今年南京市做出决定 允许居民在春节期间定点燃放烟花爆竹 这一决定受到了大多数人的欢迎 也遭到了部分人的反对 最近 你班就春节期间该不该燃放烟花爆竹进行了一场讨论 请你根据以下信息 给一家英文报纸写一篇短文 客观介绍你们的讨论情况 并就如何安全燃放烟花爆竹提出你的看法 需要用的词汇 燃放烟花爆竹setofffireworks要求 1 短文必须包括所给要点 2 短文的开头已为你写好 3 字数100左右 thegovernmentofnanjinglifted 解除限制等 thebanonfireworksduringthe2006springfestival recently recently ourclasshavediscussedwhetheritshouldsetofffireworksduringthespringfestival about60 ofusareapproveofsettingofffireworks thosewhofavortheideathinkitaddstothefestival satmosphere besides itisthechinesetraditionalcustom however about40 againstthegovernment sdecisionwithseveralreasons ononehand settingofffireworkscanputpeopleindangerous ifnotcarefullydealingwith itwillprobablyhurtus ontheotherhand ithasbadeffectstotheenvironment inmypointofview iagreewiththeformerbecausesettingofffireworkscantakealotofhappinesstous asyouknow seeingfireworksintheskyarereallyafeasttooureyes we a are danger dealt on bring watching is tipsforwriting agoodcompositionshouldn tcovertoomanymistakes 词汇 句型 高级 和语法多样化 较复杂 1 审题是关键2 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 如何写出一篇好文章 今年南京市做出决定 允许居民在春节期间定点燃放烟花爆竹 这一决定受到了大多数人的欢迎 也遭到了部分人的反对 最近 你班就春节期间该不该燃放烟花爆竹进行了一场讨论 请你根据以下信息 给一家英文报纸写一篇短文 客观介绍你们的讨论情况 并就如何安全燃放烟花爆竹提出你的看法 需要用的词汇 燃放烟花爆竹setofffireworks要求 1 短文必须包括所给要点 2 短文的开头已为你写好 3 字数100左右 thegovernmentofnanjinglifted 解除限制等 thebanonfireworksduringthe2006springfestival recently 2 fromthegraphwecanfindoutthat60 ofusareinfavorofit 1 recently opinionsaredividedonthequestion 3 inmyopinion iwanttosetofffireworksduringspringfestival butnoreason 俞 错误的审题例子 recently ourclasshasheldameetingtodiscusswhetherornotfireworksshouldbebanned accordingtothediscussion wecanfindoutthat60 ofusareinfavorofit 黎 tipsforwriting agoodcompositionmustcoversomeadvancedwordsandsentences 词汇策略 一 词义要确切 addthefestivalatmosphere toomany 2 causewidepollution 柯 3 accordingtothesurvey 杨 王 4 besides childrenshouldbecompaniedbyadultswhensettingofffireworks 叶 赖 addto severe discussion accompanied 词汇策略 二 用词要通俗易懂 thosewhostandforthedecisionratherthanresistitoccupy60 ofusall 罗 2 theyarguethatwhatfireworksposetotheenvironmentisaconceivablethreat 罗 areinfavorof favor support arefor bring 词汇策略 三 选词要多样化 1 intheiropinion fireworksshouldbebanned weoughttoraisetheawarenessofprotectingenvironment 蔡佳宏 forbidden 2 weoughttopayattentiontoprotectingenvironment 词汇策略 三 选词要多样化 3 itmayhurtpeopleaswellascauseafire itmayhurtpeopleaswellascontributetoafire 陈晓慧 黎玲飞 itmayhurtpeopleaswellasgiverisetoafire 词汇策略 四 适当运用表感情的副词 1 another40 takethesideofthepreviousban 2 settingofffireworkscanincreasethefestivalatmosphere 3 fireworksmightcauseseriousinjuriesanddeathsifsetoffcarelessly even firmly absolutely 句型策略 一 合并句子 besides environmentalpollutionisabigproblem wemustpayattentiontoit besides environmentalpollutionissuchabigproblemthatwemustpayattentiontoit 二 改变语态 recently ameetinghasbeenheldinourclasstodiscusswhetherornotfireworksshouldbebannedduringthespringfestival 1 recently ourclasshaveheldameetingtodiscusswhetherornotfireworksshouldbebannedduringthespringfestival 句型策略 三 使用省略 itmightcauseseriousinjuriesandevendeathsifsetoffcarelessly ifpossible i dratherthistraditionalcustomcanbekeptup ifsetoff ifpossible 1 weshouldbecarefulwhensettingofffireworks 2 weshouldemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingourenvironment 四 使用强调句型 wecannotbecarefulenoughwhensettingofffireworks sally wecan temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingourenvironmenttoomuch 柯 蔡 五 使用倒装句 onlyinthiswaycanweusethemtobenefitusratherthanbringustrouble 王洁 1 wecanhaveahappierspringfestivalwhenwedoitproperly 2 weusethemtobenefitusratherthanbringustroubleinthisway onlywhenwedoitproperly canwehaveahappierspringfestival 邬 六 使用非人物主语起草句子 asweallknow manyfirecatastrophesresultfromfireworks asweallknow fireworksmaycausefireaccidents 六 使用非人物主语起草句子 今天早上醒来时我想到了一个好注意 2 她哭了起来 3 我说不出话来 ithoughtofagreatideawheniwokeupthismorning agreatideaoccurredtomewheniwokeupthismorning agreatideastruckmewheniwokeupthismorning shebegantocry tearscametohereyes wordsfailedme 句型策略 七 其他一些高级结构 1 what sworse thenumberofpeoplehurtbysettingofffireworksisincreasingrapidly whichisaproblemwecan tignore 王 2 bearinmindthatwemusttakeaccountofthedanger 罗 3 peoplesetofffireworksinthehopeofhavinganotherhappyyear 何 句型策略 七 其他一些高级结构 4 theyconsideritarisktosetofffireworksespeciallywhentheyaredonenearcrowdedpeopleandoldbuilds 吴 5 toguaranteesafety itisimportanttotakenecessarymeasures 鲍 6 thereisnodenyingthatsettingofffireworksmaycauseaccidents 蔡 thegovernmentofnanjingliftedthebanonfireworksduringthe2006springfestival recently ourclasshasheldameetingtodiscusswhetherornotfireworksshouldbebanned atthemeeting about60 ofussupportthegovernment sdecision sayingfireworks asanoldtraditionalchineseculture isworthpreserving keepingup andthinkitcanaddtothefestivalatmosphere reference saying isworthpreserving as butabout40 ofthestudentsholdtheoppositeopinion arguingthatfireworksmightcauseseriousinjuriesandevendeathsifsetoffcarelesslyandalsocouldbringdangerstothepublicsafety inordertomakesureofsafety isuggestthatfireworksshouldbesetoffatthefixedtimeandfixedplaces andthattoodangerousfireworksshouldbeforbiddentobeproducedandsetoff arguing even ifsetoffcarelessly inorderto atthefixedtimeandfixedplaces goforit 学生习作 thegovernmentofnanjingliftedthebanonfireworksduringthe2006springfestival recentlyourclasshashadadiscussiononwhetherthegovernment sdecisionisrightornot theresultshowsthat60percentofthestudentsinfavorofthedecision whyaresomanystudentssupportit thereasonsareasfollows foronething settingofffireworkscanhaveagreateffectiveonatmosphere increasingofourspringfestival foranother itisourchinesetraditioalculturecustom however therearealso40percentofthestudentshaveanagainstattidudetothegovernment sdecision intheiropinion settingofffairworkscannotonlydoharmtopeople shealthbutalsocausewidepollutinoftheenvironment andwecan taffordthelossforweonlyhaveanearth asfarasi mconcerned wecan temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingourenvironmenttoomuch butwecandescreasethelosstothelowestwiththehelplofourgovernment 学生习作thegovernmentofnanjingliftedthebanonfireworksduringthe2006springfestival recentlyourclasshashadadiscussiononwhetherthegovernment sdecisionisrightornot theresultshowsthat60percentofthestudentsinfavorofthe are 学生习作decision whyaresomanystudentssupportit thereasonsareasfollows foronething settingofffireworkscanhaveagreateffectiveonatmosphere increasingofourspringfestival foranother itisourchinesetraditioalculturecustom there supporting effect thankyouforattending goodbye let spractise 1 becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable 2 weallthinkheisagreatman 3 suddenlyithoughtoutagoodidea 4 thestudentsthereneedn tpayfortheirbooks 5 asaresulttheplanwasafailure theplanturnedouttobeafailure thankstothegoodweather ourjourneywascomfortable 一 怎样使用较高级的词汇 weallthinkhighlyofhim agoodideaoccurredtome agoodideasuddenlystruckme booksarefreeforthestudentsthere 6 whensheheardhehaddied shewentpalewithsorrow 7 shewenttoaustriainordertostudymusic 8 whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited 9 inourschool therearetwenty sixclassrooms 10 youcanfindmyhouseeasily shewenttoaustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic atthenewsofhisdeath shewentpalewithsorrow themorehespoke themoreexcitedhefelt ourschoolismadeupoftwenty sixclassrooms you llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse 1whenhearrives pleasegivemeane mail 使用v ing形式 2 tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings 使用名词性从句 3 thoughi mweak i llmaketheeffort 使用倒装句 4 hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper 使用强调句型 5 ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp 用虚拟语气 onhisarriving pleasegivemeane mail whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings practice怎样使用较丰富的句式 weakasiam i llmaketheeffort itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened icouldn thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp 6 shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 使用过去分词 7 theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool 使用v ing形式 8 iwon tbelievewhathesays 使用状语从句 9 ifyoustudyhard youwillmakerapidprogress 用并列句 10 hehadnosoonercomebackfrombeijingthanhewassentabroad 使用倒装句 nosoonerhadhecomebackfrombeijingthanhewassentabroad followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutof