2010高三二轮复习各地模拟题短文改错汇编.doc

本资料来自于资源最齐全的世纪教育网2010届高三二轮复习各地模拟题短文改错汇编（16篇）1（浙江省金华一中2010届高三上学期9月月考）文中共有10处错误，要求在错误的地方增加（使用符号，并在其下方写明所漏单词）、删除（在单词上划斜线）或者修改某个单词（在其下方划横线，横线下方写明修改后的单词）。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Lucy,Thanks for your letter. I might get use to the life in American gradually. Food here remains the same all day and the school here is more relaxed though I take 2 AP courses and have to catch up with half years courses. All the books are in English and I have to write many articles, that might seem difficult. Much more worse, I find out my oral English retrograde (倒退的). I have been out of my school only once, and I guess there are a lot of differences. There are some funny clubs, and I participate the basketball club in this semester. Its amazing. By the way, thank you and all the other classmates in China for making souvenirs (纪念品) for myself. Send it to me when you all finish and I will be very happy. Hope you will reply soon. Yours, Li Hua答案：第一行： use used / American America第二行： relaxed relaxing第三行： (half) a (years)第四行： that which / 去掉more 第五行： and but第六行： (participate) in 第七行： myself me / it them2（辽宁省东北育才学校2010届高补一模）此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear friends,It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.56. _We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the57. _English Club. Although we have been members for a short58. _period of time, we have made a great progress. That is59. _because we are all very much active and the activities are not60. _only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers61. _here work hard and try his best to make the activities62. _lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of63. _us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am64. _looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!65. _Thank you.答案：56. realreally 57. weekendweekends 58. 59. 去掉a 60.去掉 much61. andbut 62. histheir 63. interestedinteresting 64. us / greatly加 have65. seeseeing3（辽宁省抚顺一中2010届高三上学期9月月考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。A Frenchman was once visiting London. He wished to take a walk to see a city. But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English. So before he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying .Then he walked on .At last, he got lost. In several hours he found a policeman .The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didnt know the name of his hotel, however he knew the name of the street. He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook. It read : “One-way street”. 答案：A Frenchman was once visiting London. He wished to take a walk to see a thecity. But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of 去掉beingEnglish. So before he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully After atcopied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying .Then he name wherewalked on .At last, he got lost. In several hours he found a policeman .The AfterFrenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didnt know the explain-explain toname of his hotel, however he knew the name of the street. He then showed but/yetthe policeman that he copied in his notebook. It read : “One-way street”. What4（浙江省温州中学2010届高三9月月考）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily theI wascompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at amaround 8 pm in Friday evening. on A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his car stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. “Its the motor.” said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around.But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “ I said you should check yours motor,” the horse replied. The man rushed to the nearer house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained , “He didnt know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.” 答案：A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his car stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out tryingthe trouble. “Its the motor.” said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. a surprisedBut he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “ I said you should check anything yours motor,” the horse replied. The man rushed to the nearer house. With a very excited voice, your nearest in he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He what howeverexplained , “He didnt know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.”doesnt5（宁夏银川一中2010届高三上学期第二次月考）该自我介绍中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。Im eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District , not far from Nottingham. I grow up in this village, so I know everyone here. Thats the problem- the problem is theres nothing to do , and nobody of my age to do it with ! At the moments I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop as I work. Theres a bus at 7:30 in the morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30 . From September, therefore, Im going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy . I can use his room . Im really looking forward to living in Nottingham.答案Im eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District , not far from aNottingham. I grow up in this village, so I know everyone here. Thats the problem- the grew not problem is theres nothing to do , and nobody of my age to do it with ! At the moments I that moment travel into Nottingham every day to the shop as I work. Theres a bus at 7:30 in the wheremorning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30 . From September, therefore, Im and however going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy . I can with 删掉use his room . Im really looking forward to living in Nottingham.6（辽宁省开原市高级中学2010届高三第一次月考）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：1.每处错误仅限1词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Helen, Thank you so much for your party at Christmas Eve. All of us enjoyed it very much. We liked the dishes you had cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught us. We hope youll teach us a lot many songs in the future. Were leaving from our hometowns to spend the winter vacations. It seems that many of us are homesick before being away from home for such a long time. What are your plans? Will you join in the tourist group organizing by our school? We are busy prepare for our trips. Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you. We hope youll have a good time. Yours, Xiao Hua答案： 76. aton 77. butand 78. manymore 79. fromfor80. vacations-vacation 81. beforeafter 82. join后的in 去掉 83. organizingorganized84. preparepreparing 85. not able - not being able7（浙江省杭州学军中学2010届高三第二次月考）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficultiesThe main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into ChineseMy teacher advised me to keep diariesI followed her advicesHappily it workedSoon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple EnglishOne day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacherShe liked it very much that she read it to the classEveryone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words答案：When I first learned to write in English，I run into many difficultiesThe main problemranwas in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into ChineseMyandteacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advicesHappily it workedSoon I advicebegan to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple talking myselfEnglishOne day I wrote a short story and showed/to my teacherShe liked it very Somuch that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good oneI was great 去掉 a greatly encouraged by their words.8（浙江省华维外国语学校2010届高三第一次月考）文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Recently I read an article in a magazineIt was of a mother who was worried about his son just because of he always kept his hair longThe mother thought that was not fight，but the son felt there was nothing unusually about itDifferent generations have different opinions on the same thingThat is what is meaning by “the generation gap”We can see them in our daily livesMost of our parents like listening to old song while young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music，he always shouted，“Shut it offIts awful!” How can we deal the generation gap?答案：Recently I read an article in a magazineIt was of a mother who was worried about hisabout herson just because of he always kept his hair longThe mother thought that was not fight，but the son felt there was nothing unusually about itDifferent generations have different opinions on the same thingunusual That is what is meaning by “the generation gap”We can see them in our daily livesmeant it Most of our parents like listening to old song while young people prefer pop. songsEvery time my father finds me listen to rock music，he always shouted，“Shut it offIts awful!”listening shoutsHow can we deal / the generation gap? with9(安徽省安庆市示范高中2010届高三四校联考)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在刻行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行在边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意：原行没能错的不要改Last Sunday morning Mr. Wang left home early go fishing. 76_Very soon he got to a river. He sat on the bank or began 77_to fish. But he was unlucky. When sun was setting he still 78_didnt catch any fish, and they felt very disappointed. 79_Oh his way home, he thought of that his wife might 80_laugh at him because he hadnt caught any fish. How to save 81_face? He became very worrying. Suddenly he got an idea. 82_He immediately run to the fish market and bought two 83_big fish. Then he hurried home happy, thinking that 84_his wife would praise him of getting the big fish. 85_答案：76goto go77orand78sunthe sun79theyhe80thought ofthought8182worryingworried83runran84happyhappily85offor10(辽宁省葫芦岛市第一高级中学2010届高三上学期第一次月考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分Dear Brown,Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 答案：Dear Brown,Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told tookone more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join for joiningus? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We suchcan hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. happily which We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the toarea and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests interestin it, reply to me soon. 11(黑龙江省哈九中2010届高三上学期阶段测试)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over threehours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Piece of paper on my desk flew highinto the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop ofrain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I triedvery hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing sound from the back of thehouse. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom. 答案：1. sudden-suddenly 2. hotter-hot 3. is-was 4. Piece-Pieces5. out-out of 6. dropdrops 7. house前加the 8. loudly-loud9. 去掉when 10. brokebroken12(浙江省杭州高级中学2010届高三第二次月考)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily theI was completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. arein Friday eveningonUnder the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just clicking your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You neednt step out the room. It seems easy and quick. And theres always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from that you want, or the size is either too small nor too big. If you want to be different, youd better not to buy clothes online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people in the street wearing the same clothes like you.答案：under改为with; a去掉或者work改为job;clicking改为click; out后加of; And改为But; that改为what; nor改为or; to去掉; up改为on; like改为as13(浙江省湖州市菱湖中学2010届高三10月月考)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加. 删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear John,Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I