书面表达范文(适用于九年级学生).doc

书面表达范文（一）：应用文 Editors note:同学们是否还在为书面表达不知从何下手而发愁？Teens已经为你准备了内容丰富的写作范文，赶快把它们牢记在心里吧！一、通知假设你们班定于4月21日周六这一天去位于城东的岩石公园春游。在公园里大家可以进行多种活动，如划船、钓鱼、玩游戏和野餐等。同学们需要自带食物于早上8点在校门口集合。请结合以上信息，给全班同学发个通知。【范文】NoticeAttention, please!This Saturday, April 21, well go to the Rock Park for this years spring trip. We hope all the students in our class will take part. The Rock Park lies in the east of the city. It is a big park. There will be a lot of activities, including boating, fishing, playing games and having a picnic. Well gather at the school gate at 8:00 am. Please take some food and drinks with you and dont be late.二、邀请信及回复Mark将在家里举办一个生日聚会来庆祝他十四岁的生日。聚会将在3月3日周六晚6：30开始举行。请你帮Mark写一封邀请信给Tina，请她来参加这次聚会。同时以Tina的名义接受Mark的邀请，并写出回信。【范文】发出邀请Dear Tina,Im turning 14 this coming Saturday. I would like to invite you to my birthday party on Saturday, March 3, at 6:30 in the evening. I hope to see you there!Mark接受邀请Dear Mark,I was so happy to receive the invitation to your birthday party. Ill be there on time. Thank you for your invitation.Tina三、感谢信假设你是留学生Naomi，你的房东王太太请你吃了一顿传统的中餐，并介绍你和一些朋友认识。请你以Naomi的名义给王太太写一封感谢信。【范文】Dear Mrs Wang,Thank you very much for hosting such a nice dinner. The traditional Chinese food was a surprise to me. It was a great night with good friends and delicious food.Thanks again.Naomi四、寻物启事假设你叫刘明，是三年(2)班的学生，你于3月2日中午把一块黑色手表丢在图书馆里。请你用英语写一则寻物启事，贴在学校布告栏里，请捡到者交给你。【范文】LostI left my black watch in the library on March 2. Will the person who finds it please send it to me in Class 2, Grade 3? Thank you very much.Liu Ming五、请假条假如你叫王峰，因患重感冒，医生让你卧床休息两天。请你给你的班主任李老师写一张请假条，告诉他你需要请假两天，并说明原因。【范文】Dear Mr Li,Im sorry to tell you that Ive got a bad cold. The doctor says I should stay in bed and drink plenty of water. So I cant go to school today. I have to ask for two days off.Thank you!Wang Feng六、留言条假设你叫Lily，你去Mary家还书但她不在家，于是你把书交给了她的妈妈，并给她留了一张条说明情况，表达你的谢意，同时邀请她明天和你一起去逛街。【范文】Dear Mary,I came to your house to return your books. Since you were not in, I had to leave the books with your mother. Thank you for lending them to me.By the way, would you like to go shopping with me tomorrow morning? Please call me if you want.Lily（二）：描写人物 Editors note:同学们是否还在为书面表达而发愁？Teens已经为你准备了内容丰富的写作范文，赶快把它们牢记在心里吧！描写人物1. 在即将过去的初中三年里，那些陪你共同经历成长的挫折与成功，与你分享欢乐与忧愁的正是你的同班同学。请通过一件事的记述，让我们认识一下你的某位同学吧！【范文】 My classmateI couldnt have gotten through the last three years without her help. She is my classmate - Mary. She is a really kind girl who never fails to make others happy. She often helps us with our lessons. At first, I wasnt very happy to be her classmate because she was so excellent. I thought that this would put too much pressure on me. However, something changed my opinion and we became close friends.It was a cold winter morning, and I had a bad cold. Nobody noticed that I was sick and I felt very sad. When Mary learned that I was ill, she ran to the school clinic and bought some medicine for me. Then she gave me some fruit and poured hot water for me. Watching her doing these things, I was moved. Thanks to her help, I spent the terrible day happily.That is my classmate. She gave me help and warmth. I feel lucky that I have such a good classmate. She is the sunshine of my world!2. 请以My favorite teacher为题，写你最喜欢的一位老师，要求写出你最喜欢这位老师的原因，词数：80词左右。【范文】My favorite teacherEveryone has his or her favorite teacher, so do I. My favorite teacher is Miss Wang, our English teacher.Miss Wang is beautiful. She has big eyes and curly hair. She wears glasses. Most of all, I like her because she is very kind and patient with us. Three years ago, when I started at my school, I found English very difficult. At first, Miss Wang seemed very strict. But she invited students with difficulties to her office where she helped them face to face. Little by little, I began to see that she was very kind and patient. She explained everything to us until we understood it. She never gave up on students like me who had trouble with English. She told us not to worry and never give up. She inspired me and made me do my best to study English. I have made great progress over the last three years.Time flies! Im going to graduate soon and I really want to say: “Thank you, my beloved teacher!”3. 假如你是王成，你校英语校刊Voice招聘摄影师的启事引起了你的兴趣，请根据下列信息，用英文给招聘人Marcia写一封申请信。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，开头和结尾已给出，不计算在总词数内。姓名 王成 性别 男 年龄 15 年级 初三 兴趣 摄影、协作、户外运动 性格 活泼、开朗、精力充沛曾获上海市摄影比赛青少年组二等奖应聘目的 参加社会实践活动，丰富业余生活 Dear Marcia,Im writing to apply for the position of photographer for Voice. _I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely,Wang Cheng【范文】Dear Marcia,Im writing to apply for the position of photographer for Voice. Im Wang Cheng, a 15-year-old boy in Junior 3.In terms of hobbies, I enjoy writing and outdoor activities, but photography is my favorite. I even won the second prize in the youth group of the Shanghai Photography Contest. My hobbies have also helped me build some good qualities I am outgoing and energetic. In addition, I am always enthusiastic and good at communicating, and many friends of mine ask me for help when they have problems.In order to take part in social activities and enrich my life, I am eager to work for Voice. I believe I am the very person that you are looking for.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely,Wang Cheng（三）各种文体考试临近，同学们是否还在为书面表达不知从何下手而发愁？Teens已经为你准备了内容丰富的写作范文，赶快把它们牢记在心里吧！一、叙事类在每个人的成长过程中，父母的爱无处不在，它让你的生活充满阳光。请以Fathers (或Mothers) love为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，叙述一件你和父母共同经历过的事，及这件事带给你的感悟。【范文】Fathers loveWhen I was young, my dad was always busy with his work. I could only see him on holidays and some weekends. He was strict, busy and cold. I felt little of his love.But things changed one night when I was 10. I was very ill and couldnt stop coughing. When I was almost asleep, someone came into my room and sat next to my bed. Even though I knew who it was, I moved away from him immediately. When I opened my eyes, I could see tears on his face. The next morning, I found some pills on my desk. Looking at the calendar, I suddenly realized that the day before had been Fathers Day.I had thought my dads heart was like a rock. But everyone needs love. I learned a lot. Silent love comes from a silent father.二、计划安排假设你是Lucy，给你美国的笔友Evan写e-mail告诉她，今年9月你即将升入高中，面对新的学习和生活，你打算如何安排，你有些什么计划。词数：80左右。参考词汇：be excited about; my plan foris; glad to tell you that【范文】Dear Evan,How are you these days?I am pleased to tell you that Ill start high school this September. Im very excited about it. My plans for the new school are as follows:First, Ill arrange my study time by making a timetable for what I should do every day.Second, I will form some good habits, such as being on time for school and active in class.Last, Ill develop my interests and do more sports. If I make more close friends, I think I will have a great school year.Im really looking forward to the next three years. Be sure to stay in touch!Cheers,Lucy三、发表观点现在有很多中学生沉迷于网络游戏，有的同学甚至因此而导致学习成绩下降，但也有人却说玩游戏会锻炼人的思维能力和创新能力，那么你对青少年玩网络游戏有什么看法？请谈谈你的看法及理由。不少于80词。参考词汇：沉迷 be addicted to，网络游戏 online game【范文】Nowadays, many teenagers are becoming addicted to online games. Some of them even lose interest in their studies.In my opinion, teenagers shouldnt spend so much time playing online games.To begin with, if you spend a lot of time on games, youll have no time to do your homework. Also, sitting in front of the computer for a long time may hurt your eyes. To make matters worse, you will have less time for your friends, sports and sleeping. You may become unhealthy.Although some people say playing games can improve your creative abilities and critical thinking, I still want to advise teenagers not to waste any more time on them. There are more important things than playing online games.成长的烦恼 【本期主题】成长中每个人都要遇到烦恼。假设你叫李华，最近你收到了你的美国朋友Amy给你的电子邮件，请根据邮件内容给她回复，帮助她解决烦恼，同时根据她的问题提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。Dear Li Hua,I dont have anyone to play with at school. Im very lonely and shy, and its hard to make friends. It seems that everyone in my class has a friend except me.AmyDear Amy,Im glad to hear from you. _I hope what I said can help you.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】看到这个题目，同学们首先要做的是审题。本题是一封关于人生烦恼并提出建议的文章。通过读信，我们可以得知，Amy目前的问题是没有朋友，感到孤独。因此文章要围绕如何帮助她克服孤独感为话题。 信的内容要求包含三个要点：回复文章提到的问题、提出建议及表达观点。其次，谋篇布局，遣词造句。根据审题的结果同学们可以确定本文文体为书信，因此写作时应以第一、二人称来写。时态以现在时为主，在给出建议时，如需以自己为例，具体实例可用过去时。例如：谈论自己如何克服孤独感的：I didnt have any friend when I got to a new school, but I tried to talk to classmates around me after class.在文章的开头，同学们可以首先表达对Amy目前状况的同情，然后宽慰她。之后开门见山、言简意赅地告诉她你可以给她一些建议。这通常用一个有总括性的句子来表达，并作为文章的中心句，为下文的提建议做铺垫。文章的主体部分则是给出建议，在题目没规定的情况下，一般23条建议比较合适。可先进行头脑风暴，罗列出能够想到的一切建议，然后选择最有把握写好的建议，并且在建议后可通过描述给出这条建议的原因、观点或实例来加细节，丰富文章内容。下面是可行的建议：1. talk to the classmates who look friendly first2. take an active part in class activities3. invite some classmates to your house4. play sports with other students5. join some school clubs to know more people6. try to study in a group在这一段可使用表达层次的关联词，使得主体部分层次清晰，具有逻辑性。与此同时，在使用表达建议的句式时注意句式的多样性。例如：First, you could / should / had better doThen, why not / why dont you do?Finally, you are supposed to do文章的最后一段要发表对这件事的看法，可以简要地谈谈对朋友的看法，也可谈谈如何对待烦恼的看法。最后用一句总结性的句子来总结全文内容。最后，修改、润色文章。写完后阅读自己的文章，进行检查、润色、修改。【学生习作】Dear Amy,Im glad to hear from you. But Im sorry to hear that you feel lonely and have no friends now. Dont worry! Its not difficult for you to make some friends. I have some ideas that may help you.First, dont always think you have no friends. In fact, the students around you are all your friends. And you can talk to those who look friendly first so that you are not afraid while talking.Then, why not take an active part in your class activities? Its a good way to make your classmates know about you.Finally, joining in some school clubs helps a lot because you can know more people there and they will become your friends. When I first came to my school, I had no friend, either. But after I joined a chess club I knew my best friend.In a word, dont feel shy when you talk to people. If you are kind to others, others will be friendly to you in turn. Friends are important to a person so dont miss any chance to make friends.I hope what I said can help you.Yours,Li Hua【教师点评】这篇文章条理清晰，要点齐全，建议内容逻辑性强。作者紧扣题目要求，从身边的friendly people开始，突破心理障碍，到班级到学校的社团，给出了循序渐进并且行之有效的结交朋友的方法。在建议后又加入了观点和细节，使文章内容丰富。作者在语言上也能够做到基本准确，并且恰当地使用了表达层次的关联词。用词虽然简单，但句式很丰富，表达也很流畅。是一篇结构、语言和逻辑都不错的文章。怎样保持健康？ 【本期题目】拥有健康的身体才能更好地学习。现在，你们学校正在举行以Keeping Healthy为题的主题班会，请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。80词左右。1. 保持健康的重要性；2. 保持健康的方法：多吃蔬菜水果；每天锻炼一小时；早睡早起；保持良好的心情等。3. 自己的看法(至少一条)【写作指导】本题目要求同学们根据提示写一篇关于“如何保持健康”的短文。从题目要求得知，除了要写出健康的重要性，还要写出保持健康的方法，并谈谈自己的看法。文字说明给大家提供了写作思路，但是不能仅仅限于书面翻译，可以发挥自己的想象力。写作时要根据所给的要点，有条有理地进行写作，同时注意文章的结构和逻辑，语言要做到简洁明了。介绍保持健康的方法，谈论的是现阶段的情况，所以用一般现在时。另外写作的要求是为他人提供“保持健康的方法”，因此可采用第二人称来写。在谈论要点的时候，为了使方法醒目具体，可采用一些表示顺序的关联词，如：first, second, whats more, finally等，如果能用上有关健康的一些谚语，文章将更加出彩。此篇文章可以采用三段式：在文章的开头，我们可以直接写出健康的重要性，中间部分重点描写保持健康的方法，文章的结尾写出本人对这一话题的看法。可采用的句式有：1. Keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.2. Health is more important than wealth.3. We can do nothing well without a healthy body.4. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.5. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise6. Exercise is good for our bodies and studies as well.【学生习作】Keeping HealthyKeeping healthy is one of the basic ways to lead a happy life. Without health, we can do nothing.There are many ways to keep healthy. First, you should eat plenty of fruits and vegetables because they contain rich vitamins. Second, you should exercise an hour a day because