高中英语写作之道歉信课件(17).ppt

WritingLetterofApology ByVictoriaWei 2 3 TwokindsofLetterofApologyapersonalapologyletterabusinessapologyletter 4 Task1Appreciatealetterofapologythenfigureoutthefollowingquestions 1 Howmanypartsdoesanapologyletterusuallyconsistof 通常来说 道歉信由几个部分组成 2 Whatdoeseachpartdealwith 每个部分的内容是关于什么 5 DearAnne Thankyouforyourinvitationtodinneratyourhometomorrowevening Unfortunately itismuchtomyregretthatIcannotjoinyouandyourfamily becauseIwillbefullyoccupiedthenforanimportantexamcomingthedayaftertomorrow Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofsuchahappyget together andIhopethatallofyouenjoyagoodtime Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingafterward Ifso pleasedon thesitatetodropmealineaboutyourpreferabledate Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain yours LiHua 6 DearAnne Thankyouforyourinvitationtodinneratyourhometomorrowevening Unfortunately itismuchtomyregretthatIcannotjoinyouandyourfamily becauseIwillbefullyoccupiedthenforanimportantexamcomingthedayaftertomorrow Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofsuchahappyget together andIhopethatallofyouenjoyagoodtime Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingafterward Ifso pleasedon thesitatetodropmealineaboutyourpreferabledate Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain yours LiHua 1 表示歉意 2 说明具体原因 3 提出补救办法 4 再次致歉 希望得到理解 7 3 提出补救办法 2 说明具体原因 道歉信写作4步走 写信的一般要求1 内容要简单对于题中所给的内容 全面对于自己发挥的内容 简单写熟悉的 会写的 2 结构要清晰开头段 中间段 结尾段 3 语言要精彩 4 注意内容之间的连接 1 表示歉意 总结提升 4 再次致歉望理解 造句能力 高分套话 8 Basicstructureandexpressions第一段 简明说明写信目的 为自己的过失表示歉意 希望得到对方的谅解 道歉的表达 Ifeelsorryformyfailureto IamawfullysorrythatIcannot IamverysorryforIamwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyformy 5 IregrettoinformyouthatIamunableto 6 IfeelguiltyforwhatIhavedonetoyou pickyouupattheairport attendyourparty myrudeness thoughtlessness badmanners 9 第二段 详细说明当时情况 解释原因 语气要诚恳 1 Nowletmeexplainwhathappenedtomethatday 2 Ihadintendedto 3 IamafraidwhatIhavedonehascausedmuchinconveniencetoyou 4 Iamtoblameforthissillymistake 5 Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords 6 Ifeelawfullysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened 10 第三段 提出补救方法 具体提出自己的想法 希望能弥补过失 消除误会 1 Inordertoremoveourmisunderstanding Iwouldliketoinvite 2 Tomakeupformyfault Iwill 3 Tocompensateforyourloss Idecideto 4 Iwishyoucouldgivemeachancetomakeupformyfault 5 Ihopethesettlementofthismattercanmeetyourwishes 11 第四段 再次表示歉意 愿意为此负责 希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件 1 Pleaseacceptmymostcordialapologyagain 2 IpromisethatIwillnevermakesuchastupidmistakeagain 3 Iassureyouthatitwillneverhappenagain 4 Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies 5 Onceagain I msorryforanyinconveniencecaused youhavesustained 12 道歉信模板一DearBob Iamtrulysorrythat 道歉的原因 Thereasonisthat 介绍的原因 Onceagain Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation Yourssincerely LiHua 13 道歉信模板二DearBob Iamexcessivelysorrytosay tellyouthat 道歉的是由 Now Iamwritingyouthisletterofapologytoshowmydeepregret Pleaseacceptmysincereapology Ihopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemefor 请求对方原谅的事由 Thereasonformydelay absencewasthat 过失的原因 Ihadnowayoutbecause 自己当时的外境和情况 Therefore it snotinmypowerto 过失导致的结果 Naturally Iwanttosuggest 建议下次实现愿望 Yourssincerely LiHua 14 假设你是李华 你国际学校的朋友Paul邀请你下个星期天去他们学校参加文化交流活动并介绍中国传统绘画 但是你爷爷生病住院 不得不谢绝他的邀请 请根据下面的要点给Paul用英语写一封信 要点 1 谢绝Paul的邀请2 说明你的理由3 推荐你的同学Anna参加注意 1 字数100左右2 可以适当增加细节 让行文连贯3 开头 结尾已给出 不计入你所写字数 Ps 介绍中国传统绘画 introducetraditionalChinesepaintingDearPaul Thankyouverymuchforyourinvitation Yours LiHua 15 DearPaul Thankyouverymuchforyourinvitation IwouldlovetoacceptitandtakethisopportunitytointroducetraditionalChinesepaintingtoforeignfriends butIamsorrytoinformyouthatIcan t MygrandpaisseriouslyillinhospitalandIhavetoattendhim Asfortheintroductionspeech IstronglyrecommendmyfriendAnna whoisthemostsuitablechoicetotakemyplacenextSunday ShebegantolearnpaintingatanearlyageandhasagoodknowledgeoftraditionalChinesepainting which combinedwithheractivepersonalityandperfectspokenEnglish willhelpmakeyouractivityasuccess Sorryagainforanyinconveniencecausedbymyabsenceandallthebestwishestoyou Yours LiHua 16 Thankyouverymuchforyourinvitation Fromyourletter IknowthatyouwantmetointroducetraditionalChinesepainting Ireallywanttoacceptitfromthebottomofmyheart butIamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan t Mygrandpahasbeenillinhospitalthesedays Onaccountofthis Ihavetogotothehospitaltoattendtohim Asfortheintroductionspeech IstronglyrecommendthatmyclassmateAnnashouldtaketheplacetomakeit Asanexcellentstudent AnnahasagoodknowledgeoftraditionalChinesepainting Whatismore shecanspeakfluentEnglish whichmakesitpossiblefortoreceivemanyprizesindifferentspeech Therefore Ibelievethatsheisequaltothejobandyouwillbesatisfiedwithher SorryagainformyabsenceandIhopeyoucansucceedinholdingtheactivity 17 IwouldlovetojoinintheactivitytointroducetraditionalChinesepaintingtoforeignfriends butIregrettoinformyouthatIcan t MygrandpaisseriouslyillandIhavetocareforhim Consideringthefactthatyouwantsomeonetomaketheintroductionspeech IstronglyrecommendmyclassmateAnnashouldgiveitinsteadofme AsfarasIknow shehasgotthehangofmuchknowledgeabouttraditionalChinesepainting Besides