基础写作学案-健康饮食写作.doc

基础写作学案健康饮食写作 班级：_ 姓名：_ 学号：_Part 1：命题预测介绍某种食物；甲流的预防措施；近视/肥胖的现状、成因与预防；怎样实施急救；订餐(叫外卖）的各种方式；早餐的重要性；健康饮食的基本做法；介绍中国饮食文化；养成健康饮食习惯之前与之后的对比；学生对体重的看法；睡眠与健康；吸烟与健康；酗酒与健康；饮食与情绪；心理健康的重要性；绿色食品的基本概念；介绍一种医疗保险等。Health is important.Part 2: StructureHowever，Bad habits/phenomenon and effect.In order towe shouldHow can we? Here are some tips on.Suggestions/advice and the function/ importanceIn conclusion，EndingPart3: 合并句子1. with +宾语 +宾补（doing/to do/done/adj/prep短语） 随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人逐渐意识到了饮食与健康之间的联系。_, more and more people have realized the link between food and health. With the improvement of peoples life2. 恰当使用定语从句或者分词结构，润色文章1) 众所周知，保持身心健康对我们中学生非常重要, 尤其是对我们的学习很重要。_, keeping healthy in body and in mind is very important to our middle-school students, especially for our studies. As we all know2) 他们的饮食含有丰富的蛋白质、维生素等。（使用定语从句） They eat food _.which contains lots of protein and vitamins 3) 少吃垃圾食品，含有太多卡路里(calory). （使用分词结构） We must eat less junk food _.containing too many calories3. 衔接词的运用1)然而，还有很多人仍然没有意识到健康饮食的重要性。_, many people havent known _.However the importance of a healthy diet2)结果：一些人开始发胖, 由于这种不健康的饮食习惯。_, many of them are becoming fat _ such an unhealthy eating habit.As a result due to / because of3) 还要注意适当锻炼，比如散步和做早操。_, we should take exercise properly, such as walking and _.Besides doing morning exercises4. 倒装句的运用1) 只有以这些方式，我们才能变得越来越健康。Only in these ways _ healthier and healthier.can we become2) 我们应该吃不同种类的食物，并且我们应该在恰当的时候吃合适的食物。Not only _ different kinds of foods, but also we should eat proper food at a right time. should we havePart 4 阅读一篇关于健康的写作范文，判断划线部分所用的写作技巧。 A. With结构 B. 定语从句 C. 倒装句 D. 分词结构 1. （ ）With the improvement of people s life, more and more people have realized the link between food and health, and they eat 2. （ ）food which contains rich protein, vitamins and so on. However, 3. （ ）not knowing the importance of a healthy diet, some people often eat some 4. （ ）food containing high calories and fat. As a result, many of them are becoming fat and weak because of such an unhealthy eating habit.As far as Im concerned, 5. （ ）not only should we eat different kinds of foods, but also we should eat proper food at a right time. 6. （ ）Only in these ways can we become healthier and healthier.1. A 2. B 3. D 4. D 5. C 6. C 1现象：随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人逐渐意识到了饮食与健康之间的联系。他们的饮食含有丰富的蛋白质、维生素等