写作技巧点拨系列(五).ppt

写作技巧点拨系列 五 完美衔接过渡 编织流畅作文 典例呈现 阅读下例 体会其中的过渡性词语 假设你是星光中学的李华 将参加主题为 Let sRideBicycles 的英语演讲比赛 请撰写一份演讲稿 内容主要包括 1 目前汽车造成的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题 2 骑自行车的益处 如节能环保 有利于健康 是一种低碳的生活方式等 Goodmorning everyone I mLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool Thetopicofmyspeechis Let sRideBicycles Asisknowntoall 众所周知 withtheimprovementofpeople slivingstandards carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife However 然而 theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen 那么我们怎么才能解决这些问题呢 AsfarasI mconcerned 据我所知 ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution Foronething bicyclesdon tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy saving Foranother bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon tgiveoffwastegas What smore 此外 而且 ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth Therefore 因此 let staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalow carboncitybyridingbicycles Comeonandjoinus Thankyou 核心点拨 能使书面表达的整篇文章浑然一体的就是一些过渡性词语的使用 这些衔接过渡性词语在句与句之间 段与段之间起承上启下 使文章前后连贯 结构紧凑 过渡自然的作用 从而提升了表达的层次 成为增分的亮点 具体使用时 请注意下面两点 一 使用过渡性词语1 表递进关系的过渡词besides inaddition moreover what smore what sworse等 2 表转折对比的过渡词but however yet instead ontheotherhand onthecontrary despite inspiteof whereas nevertheless等 3 表结果的过渡词so thus therefore asaresult sothat等 4 表换一种方式表达的过渡词inotherwords thatistosay toputitanotherway等 5 表达普遍规律generallyspeaking ingeneral allinall等 6 表总结的过渡词inaword inshort tosumup finally inconclusion insummary等 7 表特定的顺序关系的过渡词first firstly second secondly third thirdly aboveall firstofall then next finally intheend atlast eventually等 二 使用过渡性句子段与段之间除了借助于一些篇章层次上的连接性词语 如however ontheotherhand onthecontrary similarly therefore inconclusion inshort等以外 还经常需要使用一些表示过渡的句子来确保其连贯性 常见的过渡性句子类型有 1 设问引出下文为了引出下文所要表达的内容 作者有时采用设问的方式引出下文 2 总体陈述不同观点有时作者在前一个段落列举各种现象或者引出某个要供大家讨论的话题 接下来就要从整体上论述人们对此持有的不同看法 然后再具体论述各种观点 如Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit 等 3 举实例佐证有时为了增强某个观点或者现象的说服力 我们可以使用实例加以佐证 可以使用forexample instance suchas asfollows等来引出下文 写作指导 常见的逻辑连接语有 表示平行 对等或选择关系and both and aswell aswellas either or notonly butalso等 表示转折关系but yet however nevertheless inspiteof although onthecontrary ontheotherhand otherwise while等 表示因果关系so therefore asaresult of because owingto dueto thanksto onaccountof seeingthat等 表示时间顺序关系shortlyafter first second then next finally immediately suddenly soon intheend eventually等 表示空间顺序关系here there ontheright left onthesideof ontheothersideof inthemiddle center frontof nextto等 表示对称关系ontheonehand ontheotherhand foronething foranotherthing等 表示递进 强调关系besides furthermore what smore inaddition moreover worsestill aboveall certainly importantofall tomakemattersworse afterall infact等 表示解释 说明关系namely actually suchas forexample instance thatistosay inotherwords andsoon totellyouthetruth accordingtothis believeitornot等 表示结论inshort inbrief inaword asyouknow asfarasIknow onthewhole inconclusion等 对点训练 根据句意填入适当的过渡性词或短语1 Forthem theimprovementofstudentsisthebestreward Iwanttosay HappyTeachers Day sincerelytoteachers 2 Insummerdays theweatheristoohottostand studentshavetostayoutsidealltheday thetrainingisveryhard 3 heunderstoodwhatIsaid Therefore But Inaddition Asaresult 4 Comparedwiththewestern theChinesechildrenareshyerincommunication astheonlychildinthefamily theycan tenjoythehappinessfrombrotherorsister 5 Inthisaspect workingisnotonlyawaytomakealiving butalsoawayforustoachieveourselves workingcanbringsatisfactiontousinspirit 6 Theboywasn tallowedtoenterschool hewastooyoungtogotoschool 7 thecoldestweathercomesinJanuary Ontheotherhand Inotherwords That stosay Generallyspeaking 8 Wedislikepeople him 9 Idon tdislikehimatall Iamveryfondofhim 10 Myaimwas todeterminewhatIshoulddonext suchas onthecontrary firstofall 阅读下列短文 选择适当的过渡词或短语填空so as dueto but inaword inasense 2013 重庆高考 Thismotherisnottheonlyonethathastheproblemofthegenerationgap differentattitudesandopinions asolidgenerationgapappears Theteenagersthinktheirparentsdon tunderstandthem theyprefertotalktotheirfriendsratherthantelltheirparentstheirproblems Dueto so thegenerationgapisasignofsocialprogress italsoresultsindifficultiesincommunication Boththeparentsandtheteenagersshouldmakeeveryefforttosolvetheproblem tee