三一口语7级自选话题稿-线上游戏赛尔号.docx

三一口语7级自选话题稿我最喜欢的赛尔号My favorite Online GameSeer云舟学员:陈楚茜 考试级别:三一四级 云舟指导教师:王晓帅云舟王老师点评：参加三一4级考试的孩子，相对来说，语言的把握程度还不是特别高，所以一定要就自己熟悉的话题去准备，而不要为了拿好成绩，而给孩子拔高，准备太多自己并不熟悉的内容，硬生生地背下来，语言质量感觉是有了，但实际上，完全达不到想要的效果。网游，本来就是个被大家熟知的话题，很多人避开这个话题，但是我们的小作者依然选择了这个话题，而且效果不错哦Today I want to talk about a very popular online game called Seer. Did you hear about it before? (开篇反问)1. When and why did I start playing Seer?I started to play this online game last year. Before I started playing, I didnt even know what Seer was. But some of my classmates always gathered聚集 together during the break and they talked about this game very happily副词的使用文章更生动，加入了描写进来，非常好）. But I knew nothing about it, so I didnt have a common共同的 topic with them. But（使用But表达转折是4级要求的一项语法点，这一连词的使用是文章句与句之间的过渡关系表达了出来，使得文章逻辑性很强） I wanted to play with them and talk about something that all of us were interested in（定语从句在这里的使用使得这篇文章在语言深度上得分很多，定语从句本是7级的语法点, 这也说明我们的考生在陈述自选话题的时候要尽可能地使用一些含金量高的语言）so I invited my friends to come to my home and teach me how to play.云舟王老师点评:尽管是一位四级的小作者，可语言功底还挺深厚的。我们知道过去时的运用是4级非常重要的一个考点，小作者对过去时掌握得还是很不错的。这一段中划线的部分都是动词的过去式2. How did my classmates teach me this game?My friends first told me how to log onto登录 its website网站（） and get registered注册. In order to为了 remember my information信息 easily, my user name is 4399nana because I think nana is a beautiful name. I didnt want to use my Chinese name because I didnt want to reveal暴露 my identity身份.（这一段小作者告诉我们玩这个游戏之前是需要注册的，为了防止身份曝光，玩家一定不要使用自己的真实姓名注册）My classmates first taught me how to get some spirits(精灵) by using capsule胶囊. I remember that the first time I tried尝试 Ive got 1 spirit. It was very easy to learn but Ive spent almost 1 day to learn it well, because I didnt play every day and each time my classmates and I couldnt play for a long time because of our homework. After two days of learning, I started to play Seer on my own(独自).云舟王老师点评:小作者讲述了自己是如何玩游戏的，字里行间流露出了自己对这个游戏的喜爱.3,What can players do on Seer?Seer is actually实际上 a virtual spaceship虚拟飞船 in which each child could act充当 as a very brave勇敢的robot called Seer. Once一旦 you get registered注册了 and have your own user name用户名, you will be the master主人 of this virtual world虚拟世界. But you are not alone, because there are many other online players. There are different levels级别 of Seer, which means意味着 you have to spend more time or even money on it if you want your Seer to be much stronger than others. 云舟王老师点评:这一段中小作者讲述了这个游戏的实质，它就是一个虚幻的世界，每个玩家在这个世界中都是一个非常强大的主人，如何让自己的飞船更强大，玩家需要联合其他的玩家共同努力.4. When can I play it?I can play it only after finishing my homework in the evening or at weekend. But I cant play Seer after 10 pm because if I sleep late and play computer games, I cant get up on time准时 the next day or I cant focus集中精力 on my study the next day. But I can play more if its a long holiday, especially尤其是 during Spring Festival when everyone is enjoying themselves. The longest time Ive played is 1 hour even though尽管 I had enough足够 time, because my mum always tells