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书 面 表 达书面表达是用来测试学生的写作能力，综合表达能力以及运用所学知识来进行思想交流的能力的题型。书面表达在目前各省市的中考题中是必考的综合题型。一、2012年中考书面表达的评卷要求1、第一档（1315分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。2、第二档（1012分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。3、第三档（79分）能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。4、第四档（46分）只能传达少量信息，表达不通畅，只有少量句子可读。5、第五档（13分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。二、解题技巧1、认真审题，抓住要点。考生在审题时，一定要全面准确地把握题目所给的信息，加以分析、整理，明确主题，列出要点，不得遗漏。2、确定体裁，注意格式。各种文体都有自己的格式，尤其要注意各种应用文，如日记、书信、通知，便条等的格式。动笔之前，一定要搞清楚题目的要求，以便根据不用的体裁，写出不同格式的文章。3、草拟提纲，理清思路。“条理清晰”是中考作文得高分的一个条件，因此，草拟一份提纲是必要的。4、语言规范，把握时态。“语言准确，得当”是中考作文得高分的关键。在行文时，要注意：（1）切忌逐字逐句翻译；（2）学会“扬长避短，迂回表达”；（3）千万不要随意发挥。5、多用简单句，慎用长句。考生在没有把握的情况下最好少用或不用长句，以免给自己的作文带来不必要的损失。6、巧用连词，行文连贯。如果在简单句的基础上，根据各句之间的关系，适当加一些连词，可使文章自然流畅。7、拼写正切，书写规范，卷面整洁。8、全面检查，万无一失。检查包括题目、格式、拼写、大小写、标点、扣题、语法、用词、逻辑性、词数等方面。尽量做到万无一失，趋于完美。第一组假如你是李明，上周你班同学就“毕业前我们该为学校做些什么？”进行了讨论。请你根据下表提示，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David，并谈谈你的想法和理由。一些同学建议全班筹钱，为校图书馆买书或其他东西另外一些同学建议无需花钱，好好学习，让学校以我们为荣你的想法及理由注意：1、词数不少于80字，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数； 2、要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯； 3、信中不得使用真实的人名、校名。Dear David, Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions. Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for the school. Other students think that its not necessary to spend money. We should study hard and make our school feel proud of us. In my opinion, we can collect our pocket to buy some books for our school library. We can buy some detective stories and English novels. They dont cost much but they are useful. The younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so. Id like know your idea. Could you give me some advice? Best wishes! Li Ming 第 二 组某学校开展以“How to Behave Well?”为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中生的身份写一篇6080词的参赛短文。 内容包括：1、守时，不说脏话； 2、礼貌待人，热心助人； 3、遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾； 4、注意：1、文中不能出现自己的校名和姓名； 2、内容可适当扩展。 How to Behave Well?As a student, we should behave well. First, I think its important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next, we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then wed better not talk loudly in public. Dont throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally, learn to work with others. We need team work on our life._第 三 组同学们的大部分时间都花在学校了。课时，在学校能做些什么使自己的心态变得更好，从而使自己的学校生活更加丰富多彩呢？请根据下面提示词语，完成一篇词语在80100的小短文，描述一下你的学校生活吧！TimeThings to do or want to do School timebusy, tiredNoon timerelaxing, take a walk, free talk, game onlineBreakdiscuss, interesting, homeworkSports timeFull of fun I love school time very much, though it is so busy, and sometimes tiring. We, however, have more fun at school. Noon time belongs to us .We usually feel relaxed and enjoyable. We can take a walk on the playground unless its raining. We can talk about anything we are interested in and discuss it warmly. We enjoy talking about pop music, famous actors or computer games online.When we finish class work at school, sports time starts. Have fun! Its our world.! You can see me almost anytime on the basketball court after school!School life is full of fun, and I enjoy it._ 第 四 组If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be our tear.环境污染是当今世界上最大的问题，根据提示，请你用自己的话谈谈应该怎样保护我们的水资源。提示：1、生命离不开水； 2、饮用水在减少； 3、水污染严重； 4、应该保护和再利用水。注意：1、根据所给题目，请用英语写一篇短文或对话，分值相等； 2、词数不少于80字； 3、表达真实可行，内容连贯正确，语言流畅。 Water is very important to us. We can live without water. But some people dont care about this. They often waste a lot of drinking water. They pour dirty water into rivers or lakes, and they throw rubbish into them, too. So we have less and less drinking water. At the same time, many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. We must do something to stop the pollution. We must protect the water. We must find ways to recycle it. If we dont, the last drop of water will be our tear._第 五 组目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学生营养日”开展了问卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果一篇短文，倡导营养早餐。学生比例早餐情况健康状况55%有规律地吃早餐身体健康，精力充沛25%吃垃圾食品营养不均衡20%没有吃早餐感到饥饿，上课无法认真听讲，容易生病提示词：regularly; active; junk food(垃圾食品)；a balanced diet; as a result要求：1、所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法。 2、所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥。 3、词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总次数。 Breakfast Is ImportantBreakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Heres the result or our survey. About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They dont have a balanced diet. It is bad for their health. 20 percent of the students go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and cant listen to teachers carefully. Whats worse, they get ill easily.Its necessary /important for us to have breakfast and should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast._ 第 六 组请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon(低碳), Happier Life”为主题的英语短文。短文要点如下：1、自己骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班；2、在家使用节能灯，减少洗澡淋浴时间；3、将用过的课本留给下届学生；4、请你就此话题补充12个个人做法。要求：1、不要逐词翻译； 2、在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名； 3、词数80左右，短文标题和首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：节能灯 energy-saving lamp; 用过的 used; 下一届 lower gradesLower Carbon, Happier Life Its our duty to save environment. I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus. And I will ask my parents to ride bikes to work. At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower. Dont throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they are shopping. I will turn off the lights before leaving.Lower Carbon, Happier Life. Lets take actions._第 七 组据世界卫生组织（WHO）统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定，从今年5月1日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。 1、吸烟有害； 2、吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病； 3、吸烟影响青少年成长； 4、二手烟同样有害； 5、你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办？注意：1、词数：80词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2、应包含所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3、参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌；second-hand smoke二手烟 Saying No to Smoking According to the WHO, million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from second-hand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in all places both inside and out from May 1 on. As it is shown in the picture, smoking is bad for peoples health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Second-hand smoke does harm to us as well. So we do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.第 八 组健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校举行以“关爱健康”为主题的班会，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿。（1）保持健康的重要性；（2）保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；早睡早起；勤洗手；（3）自己的看法（至少一条）。注意：1、文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名； 2、内容可适当扩展； 3、词数为60-80个； 4、文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Boys and girls: It is very important for us students to keep healthy.There are many ways to be healthy. Wed better eat more fruit and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustnt drink wine or smoke. They are bad for our health.Thank you._第 九 组假如你叫张霖，暑假后就要进入高中（senior middle school）学习。由于住校与住在家里各有利弊，你想通过E-mail征求英国笔友Bill的意见。内容应包括住宿、饮食、交通等几个方面。注意：1、词数100左右； 2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 3、不要出现你的真实姓名。 Dear Bill, How is everything going? Something is troubling ne very much. So Im writing to ask for advice. Im going to study in the senior middle school in September. I can live either at school or at home. But I cant decide because both have advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have my own room. So I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 5-6 students at school, maybe I cant sleep well. Its a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates. I think its great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, Ill have to ride to school. Its a waste of time and not safe.Its so hard for me to make a decision. Ill be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.Please write back soon. Zhang Lin _第 十 组同学们，你们是怎样学习英语的？关于如何学英语，我们对50位学生学习英语的方法进行了一次调查，下表中列出了其中两种方法。请你根据下表提示的信息，结合你自己的实际谈谈你的学习方法。注意：1、所写内容必须包括下表中提到的两种方法和你自己的至少三种方法； 2、词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。We made a survey on how junior middle school students study English. Here is the result.About 30% of the students study English by reading English magazines or newspapers, and about 10% of them are interested in watching English programs on TV.In my opinion, every day, we should insist on reading the textbooks and learning words by hearts. Listening to English tapes and keeping English diaries are very useful, too. Singing English songs is also a good way for us to improve our oral English. whats more , we should often speak English .No pains, no gains. Im sure well make great progress if we keep on working hard at it.第 十 一 组假如你是九年级学生John,最近遇到了一些困扰，写信向朋友Amy倾诉，想听听她的建议。词数80字左右，内容要点如下：1、最近有困扰，不知如何处理。2、每天作业很多，除了做以外别无选择，经常熬夜完成，第二天很疲劳。3、几乎没时间给业余爱好，心情很糟，怀疑是否值得用功。Dear Amy,Im a Grade 9 student. These days I have a problem, and I dont know how to deal with it.I have a lot of homework every day and I have no choice but to do it. I often stay up late to complete the exercises and then feel tired the next day.Usually I accept so much homework, but sometimes I want to refuse to do it. I hardly have any spare time for my hobbies. I really feel bad about that. I often doubt whether it is worth working so hard.What should I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? They will be of great value to me. I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes! John 第 十 二 组好学生的标准时什么？考试成绩的高低是唯一的标准吗？大家都来说说看！请先回答下面调查表中的问题（画“”，此处不计分）。然后以“What Is a Good Student?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，表达自己的观点。 Are You a Good Student?QuestionsYesNo1. Do you often get high marks?2. Are you hard-working?3. Do you like reading?4. Are you helpful to others?5. Can you get on well with your classmates?6. Have you got anything that you are good at?要求：1、文中不能出现作者本人的真实信息； 2、词数80左右。 What Is a Good Student? In my opinion, a good student should be hard-working first. If we dont study, how can we do something for our society in the future? Then I think a good student should be helpful and friendly to others. If he is not welcome in the class, hell be lonely. And also I think a good student should not only be good at study but also do other things well, or he cant enjoy a colorful life. At last, Im sure everyone wants to be a good student. 第 十 三 组 阅读下面一段叙述，针对其中提出的问题写出你的看法。Some students think that exam scores(考试分数) should be something private(私人的) and they dont want others to know them. They think their teachers should not show them to others.要求：1、条理清楚，观点鲜明； 2、用词得当，语法正确，书法规范； 3、词数80-100。I think it is really a bad thing to let others know my exam scores.If I get a low score, some peop