SectionB2a-3b.pptx

Unit7Where smyschoolbag writing执教者 齐继凤七台河市新兴区长兴学校 LearningGoals 学习目标 1 Masterkeywordsandlanguagesintheunit Andusethemcorrectly 2 Bywritingwecandevelopourabilitytowriting Guess 猜一猜 What sinmyroom Aradioisonthebed apenboxisonthedesk Atapeisunderthedesk Booksisinthebookcase Pensareinthepenbox CDsareunderthedictioary Aschoolbagisonthechair Wherearethey Name DengChao Hewantsmetoshowhimaroundmyroom Pleasehelpmewritealettertodescribemyroom 他想参观我的房间 请帮助我写一篇描述我房间的作文 Yourcompositionshouldbe 1 Ingoodhandwriting 字迹工整 2 Neatandclean 卷面整洁 朗读文章 找出错误 并修改 自我欣赏与修正 Evaluating 评价 1 Thefirstletteratthebeginningofasentence 大小写 2 Spellmistakes 拼写错误 3 Grammarmistakes 语法错误 Doyoulikeit Canyoutellmeaboutyourroom please Abed adesk achairandabookcaseareinmyroom Thisismybed Ajacket aradioandamodelplaneareonthebed Thereisamapandapictureonthewall Thisismydesk Acomputer adictionary apenboxandsomeCDsareonmydesk CDsareunderthedictionary Pensareinthepenbox Booksareonthebookcase Aschoolbagisonthechair Aballisunderthechairandonthefloor Thereisatapeunderthedesk Thisisabike Ahatisonthebike ThingsinMyRoom Ihaveaniceroom Comeandhavealook Thereisabed adesk achair andabookcaseinmyroom It sbigandIlikeitvery Thejacketisblack Thisis Youcanseeajacket aradio andapictureonthewall Thereisamap Hereismy desk Acomputer adictionary apenboxandsomeCDsareonmydesk CDsareunderthedictionary Pensareinthepenbox Booksareonthebookcase Ilovethem Aschoolbagisonthechair Aballisunderthechairandonthefloor mybed much andamodelplaneareonthebed Look Thereisatapeunderthedesk Thisisabike Ahatisonthebike Doyoulikeit Canyoutellmeaboutyourroom please Differences 不同 Ihaveaniceroom Comeandhavealook Thereisabed adesk achairandabookcaseinmyroom Abed adesk achairandabookcaseareinmyroom It sbigandIlikeitverymuch Thejacketisblack Youcanseeajacket aradio Hereismydesk Ajacket aradioandamodelplaneareonthebed andamodelplaneonthebed Look Thisismydesk Beginning Ending HighmarksinEnglishwriting 英语写作高分攻略 1 Ingoodhandwriting neatandclean 字迹工整 2 Nomistakes 无错误 3 Richinvocabulary 用词丰富 4 Expandreasonable 拓展合理 Doyoulikeit Canyoutellmeaboutyourroom please Differences 不同 Ihaveaniceroom Comeandhavealook Thereisabed adesk achairandabookcaseinmyroom Abed adesk achairandabookcaseareinmyroom It sbigandIlikeitverymuch Thejacketisblack Youcanseeajacket aradio Hereismydesk Ajacket aradioandamodelplaneareonthebed andamodelplaneonthebed Look Thisismydesk Beginning Ending 依据评价标准提出修改意见 并修改 Evaluating 评价 同伴互助 1 Isitingoodhandwriting neatandclean 是否字迹工整 2 Arethereanymistakes 是否存在错误 3 Isitrichinvocabulary 是否用词丰富 4 Isitexpandreasonable 是否拓展合理 Rewriting 重写作文 根据自评 互助后的修改情况 自我提升 美化文章 以 ThingsinMyRoom 为题进行第二次写作 Doyoulikeit Canyoutellmeaboutyourroom please Differences 不同 Ihaveaniceroom Comeandhavealook Thereisabed adesk achairandabookcaseinmyroom Abed adesk achairandabookcaseareinmyroom It sbigandIlikeitverymuch Thejacketisblack Youcanseeajacket aradio Hereismydesk Ajacket aradioandamodelplaneareonthebed andamodelpla