Unit3Languageinuse. (3).pptx

Writing Anyrules Yes 九年级复习课 体裁写作 Fromreadingtowriting Aletterforadvice 五十中西校张丽 Thesecrettosuccessfulwritingcomesfromalargeamountofreading ByMoYan DearJack Howiseverythinggoing IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer ItisnotnecessarytoworryaboutyourChinese I dliketosharemyideas whichIthinkmighthelp First bebraveenoughtospeakChinesewhenyoucommunicatewithothers It sofgreatimportancetobeconfidentaboutyourself WeChineseareveryfriendlysoyouneedn tbeafraidofmakinganymistakes Second it sbettertospeakslowlyandclearly Inthiswayyoucanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily What smore sometimesyoucanusedrawingsorpictures andasyouknow bodylanguageisalsowidelyusedacrossculturesandveryoftenitreallyworks Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful Bestwishes Yours LiHua Whichoneisbetter Why morewords bettersentences betterstructure Toreadlikeawriter DearJack Howiseverythinggoing IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer ItisnotnecessarytoworryaboutyourChinese I dliketosharemyideas I dliketosharemyideasandIthinktheymighthelp First bebraveenoughtospeakChinesewhenyoucommunicatewithothers It sofgreatimportancetobeconfidentaboutyourself WeChineseareveryfriendlysoyouneedn tbeafraidofmakinganymistakes Second it sbettertospeakslowlyandclearly Inthiswayyoucanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily What smore sometimesyoucanusedrawingsorpictures andasyouknow peopleusebodylanguagewidelyacrossculturesandveryoftenitreallyworks Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful Bestwishes Yours LiHua hisChinese giveJacksomeadvice brave confident slowly clearly drawings pictures bodylanguage Toreadlikeawriter Waystoofferadvice 1 Theimperativesentence 祈使句 2 Itisofgreatimportanceto 3 Itisbetterto 4 Sometimesyoucan bebrave It sofgreatimportance it sbetterto sometimesyoucan 5 Weshould 6 Let s 7 Don tforgetto 8 Itisagoodideato 9 Howabout 10 Whydon twe you 11 if条件句12 Youshould Tip Avoidrepeating Q WhydoesthewriteradviseJacktospeakslowlyandclearly Tip Givereasonstosupportyouradvicetomakeitmorepersuasive Thinkdeeply Rewritetheunderlinedsentence 1 Rewriteitusinganattributiveclause 2 Rewriteitusingthepassivevoice I dliketosharemyideaswhichIthinkmighthelp bodylanguageiswidelyusedacrosscultures Tip Includeoneortwoadvanced 高级的 sentences Toreadlikeawriter Thinkdeeply Howtoexpressthewritingpurpose 2 Howmanysuggestionsaregivenintheletter Howdoyouknow DearJack Howiseverythinggoing IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer ItisnotnecessarytoworryaboutyourChinese I dliketosharemyideaswhichIthinkmighthelp First bebraveenoughtospeakChinesewhenyoucommunicatewithothers It sofgreatimportancetobeconfidentaboutyourself WeChineseareveryfriendlysoyouneedn tbeafraidofmakinganymistakes Second it sbettertospeakslowlyandclearly Inthiswayyoucanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily What smore sometimesyoucanusedrawingsorpictures andasyouknow bodylanguageisalsowidelyusedacrossculturesandveryoftenitreallyworks Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful Bestwishes Yours LiHua 1 I dliketosharemyideaswhichIthinkmighthelp 2 I mwritingtoofferyousomeadviceon 3 Hereissomeofmyadvice first sencond what smore moreover firstly besides lastbutnotleastmostimportantly Tip Makefulluseofsentencesandwordstoconnect Toreadlikeawriter A I mwritingtoaskyoutoconsiderthefollowingsuggestions I mwritingtoaskyoutoconsiderthefollowingsuggestions Letmegiveyousomesuggestions B A I dliketosuggestthatthereshouldbe You dbetterprepare B I dliketosuggestthatthereshouldbe A couldthecentreopeninoursparetime youcanopenthecentreinoursparetime B couldthecentreopeninoursparetime wehopethecentrewillbefree A wewillbemorethanhappyifthecentreisfree B wewillbemorethanhappyifthecentreisfree Tip Use ifsentence andquestionsinaformalletter Towritelikeareader well organized logical advanced polite 1 A Rewrite 2 weshouldn tgotoswimalone becauseit sdangerous 3 becausewewanttokeepourselvessafe 4 5 teachersdon tallowustocrowdeachother Connection Expressions I mwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonit itisdangeroustogotoswimalone What smore Besides sothatwecankeepourselvessafe wearenotallowedtocrowdeachother B Voiceyouradvice Anyproblems Speakitout Pairwork Peer evaluation Paragraghwriting 4 Romewasnotbuiltinaday Practicemakesperfect Homework 完成一封写给小组同学的建议信 Tips 从结构 句子 连接词和写作风格上组织好这封信 Dear Itisgreattohearfromyou Iunderstandyourworriesverymuch Yourstruly THANKS Profile 个人简介 Name JackNationality AmericaAge 14Plan HewillcometoChinathissummervacation Problem HeisworriedabouthisChinese DearJack Howiseverythinggoing IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer BebraveenoughtospeakChinesewhenyoucommunicatewithothers Youshouldbeconfidentaboutyourself Youshouldspeakslowlyandclearly Sometimesyoucanusedrawings pictures orbodylanguage Bestwishes Yours LiHua DearJack Howiseverythinggoing IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer bebraveenoughtospeakChinesewhenyoucommunicatewithothers beconfidentaboutyourself speakslowlyandclearly sometimesyoucanusedrawingsorpictures Bestwishes Yours LiHua ItisnotnecessarytoworryaboutyourChinese I dliketosharemyideasandIthinktheymighthelp First It sofgreatimportanceto WeChineseareveryfriendlysoyouneedn tbeafraidofmakinganymistakes Second it sbetterto Inthiswayyoucanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily What smore andasyouknow peopleusebodylanguagewidelyacrossculturesandveryoftenitreallyworks Findoutthedifferences transitionalsentences bettersentences supportingideas clearstructure linkingwords DearJack Howiseverythinggoing IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer YoushouldbebraveenoughtospeakChinesewhenyoucommunicatewithothers Youshouldbeconfidentaboutyourself Youshouldspeakslowlyandclearly Sometimesyoucanusedrawings pictures orbodylanguage Bestwishes Yours LiHua