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仔细阅读说明该笔记请结合视频观看，笔记已经标出哪些内容适合英语1或者英语2适用。视频讲解是先从大作文第二段开始讲解，然后第一段讲解，接着第三段，最后第四段。笔记难免有未到位之处还请以视频为主。该笔记第二段和第三段、第四段的内容讲解适合英语2的同学，英语1整个笔记都适用。英语2的同学第一段请看补充的视频，时间仅37分钟。A、第二段：英语一和英语二均适用S1、原因段共5句1、数据写法：in accordance with the most updated statistics conducted by Newsweek, a famous newspaper concerned with public health in america, smoking is the biggest killer today for us, causing over 3 million lives a year.2、理论写法： based on the most widely accepted theory concerning public health and smoking by professor Alexsandra Coffman, a leading expert in the research of health, smoking is causing huge disater for human beings today.3、伦理写法：respecting the old was, is and will be a cherished value for every chineserespecting the old was, is and will be a cherished value for every chinese, old or young, rich or poor, son or daughter.Miss Gao句型n, n+从1，n2+从2，n3+从3，+原句Miss Gao, a teacher who taught me english when i was in school; a friend who helped me a lot when i was in trouble; a lady who is always nice to her students, died now.S2、实践中的好处和坏处smoking is like openning a pandora box, causing tremendous harm for everyone, old or young, rich or poor,men or woman.潘多拉it will hurt not only your health but the environment as well.smoking will bring so many harms, in which hurting your health is only a tip of an iceberg.冰山一角playing cards may seem funny, yet it is nothing but a blessing in disguise 斗地主smoking is the last thing a young person shoud do.the negative effect that smoking may bring is never a flash in pan, but long-lasting and far-reaching. 昙花一现if a young person get addicted to smoking, he will be trapped in the shell of his own making. 作茧自缚if a young person falls into smoking, it will become the waterloo of his life.滑铁卢（象征失败） 省略句用于具体化，一定用被动写 smoking will bring so many harms, in which hurting your health is only a tip of an iceberg. With years of smoking, your physical health will be damaged, and with it your ability to focus in study.If somkingcan not be controlled,a better tomorrow will be nothing but Utopia.一个美好的明天将是一个幻象。（乌托邦）a tempest in teacup小题大做smoking is like digging your own grave.自掘坟墓比喻写法1、 否定 not.any more thana collection of facts can not be called science, any more than a pile of bricks can be called a house.money is not important to the young,any more than comb is important to the monkI can not understand you any more than the day can understand the night2肯定 no less thantime is important to the young, no less than sunshine is important to plants teamworking is necessary to success no less than petrol is necessary to a car.S3、举例子（用简单句）具体看视频S4、例子虚拟反述if they hadnt smoked that much, they wouldnt have gone to such an early tomb.S5、启下something need to be done, and it is now or neverfacing thechallenge of( 主题词）it is not the time to ask what can be done for you，but what can be done by youa better tomorrow is shared by all, yet made by each, and it is time to do something now.人人为我，我为人人B描述段（首段）英语一的同学参看S1、引出：1、奥巴马版1 if there is anyone who still doubts the value( harm) of ( ); who still wonders what to do; who still questions the power of ( ), the picture above is your answer!2、莎士比亚版to smoke, or not to , that is a questionto smoke, or not to, that is a question, a question raised in the picture, and a question to be answered by all of us, old or young, rich or poor. (加入描述细节）my answerto that is simple and definite: 加观点句3、专业版based on the theory of butterfly effect, a tiny defect today may end up with huge disaster in future, and this is exactly what the picture is showing us:4、网络版the biggest distance in the world is not between truth and false, but when truth is before you, like we can see in the picture, yet you fail to understand.5、顾城诗歌版a dark night gives us dark eyes, yet we use them to search for light; a simple picture shows a simple story, yet we use it to search for truth.S2、描述（简单句，3句以内，用现在时态）观点句可以使用的简单句：such a story/ picture is telling us thati believe that第三段（方法和建议）英语一和英语二的均适用C方法/建议段1、态度although the way to ban smoking is filled with ups and downs, the tide is unable to return.although the way to ban smoking is filled with ups and downs, the dominoes are starting to fall.the only thing for the triumph of mislead cause is good people do nothing.sometimes in life we are called to do great things, but everyday we are called to do samll things, with great love.it is time to put thoughts into words, and words into action.2、具体方法the government is due to paly a positive role tofunctional laws and regulations must be set up to regulatefor the sustainability of a program against smoking, sufficient fund is so important and inevitable.参考：Scientists must communicate their message to the public in a compassionate, understandable way-in human terms, not in the language of molecular biology. We need to make clear the connection between animal research and a grandmothers hip replacement, a fathers bypass operation a babys vaccinations, and even a pets shots. To those who are unaware that animal researc