高三英语二轮写作专项.ppt

Welcome Writing 大纲要求 考生根据提示进行书面表达 1 准确使用语法和词汇 准确程度是评分标准中的一项重要内容 2 围绕一主题 使用一定的句型 词汇 清楚 连贯地表达自己的思想 考试形式 要求考生根据所给情景 用英语写一篇短文 情景包括 目的 对象 时间 地点 内容等 提供情景的形式有 图画 图表 提纲等 满分 30分词数 120 150参考时间 25分钟 命题趋势 开放性加强 07年书面表达要求考生对是否愿意成为一名免费师范生表明观点并陈述理由 题目并没有提示什么理由 学生可以自由发挥 因此开放性加大 贴近学生生活 08年的写作题形式比较老套 是写信 但内容贴近考生 使每个考生均有内容可写 充分发挥自己的水平 09年写作 要求写一封书信 命题具有真实性和交际性 题目既有明确的写作内容上的限制 又具有一定的开放性 给优秀考生提供了更多的写作空间 便于发挥 10年写作 书面表达不同题材分类 支持与反对观点陈述类B 数据式图表类C 看图说话类D 应聘类E 提示议论文类F 应用文类G 表示今昔对比类写作套语类H 地图 路线图类I 介绍某人 某物 某地 某计划 某项目类 Sixstepsofwriting 书面表达的六个步骤 Readthedirectionscarefully lookthroughallthewordsorpicturesgiventoyouandfindthemainsubject 仔细审题 找出主题 2 Listthekeypointsandfindoutthekeywordsforeachpoint 列出要点 找出中心词 3 Arrangeparagraphs 分段 4 Extendeachkeypointtosentences 把要点扩展成句子 5 Arrangethesesentencesintoapassage usingsomelinkingwordsorsentenceswherenecessary 把以上句子编排成段落 在必要的地方加入一些连接词或句子 6 Readthroughthewholepassagetomakesurethatnomistakesaremade 通读全文 仔细检查 Let sPractice 现在越来越多的中学生在使用网络 不同的人对此有不同的看法 请谈谈你的观点 Step1 Findthemainsubject Step2 Listthekeypoints Yourownopinionaboutstudents usingtheInternet 1 entertainourselves2 gainknowledge3 doshopping beaddictedto2 visitunhealthywebsite Step3Arrangeparagraphs Fact Advantages Disadvantages Ending Step4Extendeachkeypointtosentences enjoymusic seemovies playcomputergames sendemails 1 ByusingtheInternet wecanenjoymusic watchmovies sendemailsandplaycomputergames 1 entertainourselves 2 ByusingtheInternet wecansendemailstoourfamilies relativesandfriends enjoyallkindsofmusic seemoviesandplaycomputergames 3 UsingtheInternet wecankeepintouchwithothersbysendingemailsandrelaxourselvesbyappreciatingmusic seeingmovies playingcomputergamesandsoon 2 gainknowledge learnEnglish readnews gainotherknowledge 1 WecannotonlyreadnewsathomeandabroadbutalsolearnEnglishthroughtheInternet 2 WiththehelpoftheInternet wecannotonlylearnthelatestnewsathomeandabroadbutalsohaveaccesstolearningEnglishbyourselves 3 TheInternetnotonlykeepsusstudentswellinformedofwhat sgoingonathomeandabroadbutalsoprovidesusachanneltolearnEnglishbyourselves 3 doshoppingconvenient withoutleavinghomes Disadvantages 1 beaddictedto behookedonbegluedto belostin 2 affect haveanegativeinfluenceon doharmto beharmfulto bebadfor physicallyandmentally Para 1FactPara 2AdvantagesPara 3DisadvantagesPara 4ClosingAdvantages1 entertainourselvesenjoymusic seemovies playcomputergames sendemails2 gainknowledgelearnEnglish readnews3 doshoppingconvenient withoutleavinghomesDisadvantages 1 beaddictedto behookedonbegluedto belostin 2 affect haveanegativeinfluenceon doharmto beharmfulto bebadforphysicallyandmentally Step5Arrangeyoursentencesintoapassage Step6Readthroughthewholepassagetomakesurethatnomistakesaremade 1 要点是否齐全 2 是否有语法错误 如句子结构错误 动词形式错误等 3 格式 人称是否正确 4 字数是否符合要求 5 大小写 标点是否正确 PossibleversionNowadays withthepopularityofcomputers moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsareusingtheInternet Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutthis AsfarasI mconcerned I mnotopposedtoit Asweallknow theInternetisplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinourdailylife Thereisnodoubtthatitbringsusalotofbenefits Tobeginwith withthehelpoftheInternetwecannotonlylearnthelatestnewsathomeandabroadbutalsohaveaccesstolearningEnglishbyourselves Besides byusingtheInternet wecankeepintouchwithothersbysendingemailsandrelaxourselvesbyenjoyingmusic seeingmovies playingcomputergamesandsoon What smore wecandoonlineshoppingwithoutleavinghomes whichisveryconvenient However thedisadvantagesoftheInternetcannotbeneglected Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline someevenareaddictedtoit whichwastesalotofvaluabletimeandseriouslyaffectstheirstudies Tomakethingsworse someevenvisitunhealthywebsites whichhasverybadeffectonthem Allthese undoubtedly areharmfultotheirhealthphysicallyandmentally Inconclusion Ithink everycoinhastwosides TheInternetalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages Butifweuseitproperly itwillsurelybenefitusalot OnlyinthiswaycanwemakefulluseoftheInternet 书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档 25 30分 完全完成了试题规定的任务 准确 清楚地表达了短文的内容 要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误 但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致 具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的 第四档 19 24分 完成了试题规定的任务 比较准确 清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确 少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的 Howtopolishyourpassage TipOne Usemoreadvancedwordsorsentences 多使用高级词句 1 Weallthinkheisaverygoodman 2 Asaresulttheplanwasafailure 3 Hefinallywentbackhome verytired Weallofhim Theplantobeafailure thinkhighly turnedout Hefinallystruggledhome exhausted 1 Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 使用过去分词 2 Thisvillageisasmallone Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people 使用定语从句 bymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab Followed Thisvillageisasmallonewhichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people PossibleversionNowadays moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsareusingtheInternet Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutthis AsfarasI mconcerned I mnotopposedtoit Asweallknow theInternetisplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinourdailylife Thereisnodoubtthatitbringsusalotofbenefits Tobeginwith withthehelpoftheInternetwecannotonlylearnthelatestnewsathomeandabroadbutalsohaveaccesstolearningEnglishbyourselves Besides byusingtheInternet wecankeepintouchwithothersbysendingemailsandrelaxourselvesbyenjoyingmusic seeingmovies playingcomputergamesandsoon What smore wecandoonlineshoppingwithoutleavinghomes whichisveryconvenient However thedisadvantagesoftheInternetcannotbeneglected Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline someevenareaddictedtoit whichwastesalotofvaluabletimeandseriouslyaffectstheirstudies Tomakethingsworse someevenvisitunhealthywebsites whichhasverybadeffectonthem Allthese undoubtedly areharmfultotheirhealthphysicallyandmentally Inconclusion Ithink everycoinhastwosides TheInternetalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages Butifweuseitproperly itwillsurelybenefitusalot OnlyinthiswaycanwemakefulluseoftheInternet TipTwo Uselinkingwordstomakeyourpassagemorefluent 运用关联词使文章更为流畅 PossibleversionNowadays moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsareusingtheInternet Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutthis AsfarasI mconcerned I mnotopposedtoit Asweallknow theInternetisplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinourdailylife Thereisnodoubtthatitbringsusalotofbenefits Tobeginwith withthehelpoftheInternetwecannotonlylearnthelatestnewsathomeandabroadbutalsohaveaccesstolearningEnglishbyourselves Besides byusingtheInternet wecankeepintouchwithothersbysendingemailsandrelaxourselvesbyenjoyingmusic seeingmovies playingcomputergamesandsoon What smore wecandoonlineshoppingwithoutleavinghomes whichisveryconvenient However thedisadvantagesoftheInternetcannotbeneglected Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline someevenareaddictedtoit whichwastesalotofvaluabletimeandseriouslyaffectstheirstudies Tomakethingsworse someevenvisitunhealthywebsites whichhasverybadeffectonthem Allthese undoubtedly areharmfultotheirhealthphysicallyandmentally Inconclusion Ithink everycoinhastwosides TheInternetalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages Butifweuseitproperly itwillsurelybenefitusalot OnlyinthiswaycanwemakefulluseoftheInternet TipThree Dowriteneatlyandclearly 一定要书写工整 卷面整洁 山东省教育厅在全省中小学中推行素质教育 对此不同的人有不同的看法 请谈谈你自己的观点 Morepractice Assignment Pleasefinishthecompositionafterclass ThankYou 日前 针对学生的零用钱 pocketmoney 的消费方向 你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查 得出数据如下表 现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信 反映这一情况 并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观 注意 1 书信中不必一一列举具体数字 只要抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可 2 字数 120 150 Morepractice Deare