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Step1 仔细审题Step2 理清要点Step3 译写单句Step4 连句成篇Step5 检查润色Step6 定稿誊写 高考英语作文 六步法 教学 范例1 题目 Mr SmithandMr Greenusedtobeneighborsforyears OnemorningMr SmithcalledatMr Green s Thefollowingistheirconversation S Goodmorning G Goodmorning S Ihaven tseenyoursonTomforalongtime Hashemadegreatachievements G Oh Idon tknowifheissuccessful butIknowthathehasdrawnthegovernment sattentionandthepolicearesearchingforhim 分析 题目不难 但要完成两件事情 一是要把要点表达清楚 要传神 达意 二是要把直接引语转换成间接引语 要求 1 用间接引语描述如上幽默故事 2 词数为80 100 第一步 仔细审题 情景提供的方式是对话 题材是故事 内容是两个邻居之间的一段幽默对话 涉及到的词汇有 usedto callon hesitate makeachievements etc 涉及的句子有简单句 并列句 和复合句 词数为80 100 第二步 理清要点 本文是一篇记序文 发生的时间是一天下午 地点是Mr Green家 人物有Mr Smith和Mr Green 事件是谈论Mr Green的儿子 故事以Mr Green一段幽默的话结尾 所以 本文要点如下 1 Mr Smith和Mr Green是曾是多年的邻居 2 一天上午 Mr Smith去Mr Green家拜访 3 他们互致问候早上好 4 Mr Smith说他已多年不见Mr Green的儿子Tom了 相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就 5 Mr Smith踌躇了一会儿 说不知道儿子是否取得成就 但政府很重视他 警察也在全国各地找他 第三步 译写单句 1 Mr SmithandMr Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears 2 Onemorning Mr SmithcalledonMr Greenathishouse 3 Theysaidgoodmorningtoeachother 4 Mr SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr Green sson Tomforseveralyears Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements 5 Mr Greenhesitatedforamoment Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements Hesaidheknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant Thepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry 第四步 连句成篇 Mr SmithandMr Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears Onemorning Mr SmithcalledonMr Greenathishouse Theysaid goodmorning toeachother ThenMr SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr Green sson Tomforseveralyears Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements Mr Greenhesitatedforamoment Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements Hesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry 第五步 检查润色 Mr SmithandMr Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears Onemorning Mr SmithcalledonMr Greenathishouse First theygreetedeachother said goodmorning toeachother thentheytalkedaboutMr Green sson Tom Mr SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr Green sson Tomforseveralyearsandwondered Heasked ifhehadmadegreatachievements Mr Greenhesitatedforamoment Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthought said thathissonwas very important forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry 第六步 定稿誊写 Mr SmithandMr Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears Onemorning Mr SmithcalledonMr Greenathishouse First theygreetedeachother thentheytalkedaboutMr Green sson Tom Mr SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr Green sson Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements Mr Greenhesitatedforamoment Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas very important forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry 第六步 定稿誊写 Mr SmithandMr Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears Onemorning Mr SmithcalledonMr Greenathishouse First theygreetedeachother thentheytalkedaboutMr Green sson Tom Mr SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr Green sson Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements Mr Greenhesitatedforamoment Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas very important forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry 范例2 题目 根据以下提示 用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文 字数100字左右 香港位于中国的东南部 面积1045平方公里 人口600多万 被称为 东方明珠 1842年鸦片战争后 当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国 1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱 其前景会更美好 参考词汇 明珠pearl 鸦片opium 第一步 仔细审题本文属说明性文章 第二步 理清要点1 香港的地理位置 面积和人口 2 鸦片战争后香港的处境 3 1997年她回到祖国的怀抱 4 其前景会更美好 第三步 译写单句 1 HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina Herareais1 045k Herpopulationismorethan6million ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar In1997 shereturnedtomotherland 4 Herfutureisverybeautiful 第四步 连句成篇 HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina Herareais1 045k and Her populationismorethan6million ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar In1997 shereturnedtomotherlandand Her futureisverybeautiful 第五步 检查润色1 HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina shehasanareaof Herareais 1 045k and Her hasapopulationofmorethan6million populationismorethan6million Sheiswell knownas thePearloftheEast In1842 ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife In1997 shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful Her futureisverybeautiful 第五步 检查润色1之后的文章 HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina shehasanareaof1 045k andhasapopulationofmorethan6million Sheiswell knownas thePearloftheEast In1842 ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife In1997 shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful 第五步 检查润色2 HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina shehasanareaof1 045k andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand She iswell knownas thePearloftheEast In1842 thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment aftertheOpiumWar andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot livedahardlife AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997 In1997 shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina andtheywillworkhard willbeworkinghard tomakehermorebeautiful HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina shehasanareaof1 045k andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell knownas thePearloftheEast In1842 thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997 thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful 第五步 检查润色2之后的文章 第六步 定稿誊写 HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina shehasanareaof1 045k andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell knownas thePearloftheEast In1842 thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997 thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful 第六步 定稿誊写 HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina shehasanareaof1 045k andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell knownas thePearloftheEast In1842 thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997 thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful Homework 请以记者的身份 根据案件登记卡所提供的情况 用英语写一篇新闻报导稿 字数 100词左右 Possibleversion Yesterdayafternoon arobberyhappenedinabankintheParkStreet Accordingtothewitnesses statements itwasfiveminutesto5 00pm justbeforetheclosingtimeofthebank Anditwasrainingheavily withlittletrafficontheroadoutside Suddenly twoyoungmenwithmasksrushedinandthreatenedtheclerkswithguns Thentheyputthemoneyinbags rushedoutanddrovedawaywithabout20 000dollars Allthethingslas