英语科技论文写作方法与教程(南开大学)课件.ppt

Scientificwritingandpresentation Prof MarkBartlamCollegeofLifeSciences NankaiUniversityE mail bartlam Tel 23502351 Anaturalist slifewouldbeahappyoneifhehadonlytoobserveandnevertowrite CharlesDarwin Clearthinkingisthekeytoclearwriting 清晰的思路是写作的关键 Courseaims Helpyoutocommunicateworkmoreeffectivelythrough publicationspresentationsHelpyoutothinkaboutandplanresearchmoreclearly Coursedetails Language EnglishDuration 18lectures 9weeksTeachingassistant YingyingWang 王莹莹 Aboutme MarkBartlam博士 男 教授 博导 1995年伦敦帝国理工学院获理学学士学位 1999年 英国牛津大学获博士学位 2000年到清华大学结构生物学实验室进行博士后研究 2003年为清华大学副教授 2007年起为南开大学生命科学学院特聘教授 申请人同时还是外专局认证的海外专家 中科院生物物理所大分子国家重点实验室客座副教授 Aboutme 申请人长期从事与重要病毒及与肿瘤相关蛋白质的结构和功能研究及新药创制等研究工作 参加及主持国家 973 863 重大专项 和 自然科学基金 等多项基金项目 在蛋白质表达 晶体生长 结构解析 结构与功能关系研究和以结构为基础的药物分子设计方面积累了丰富的研究经验 得到了大量的科研成果 迄今已在 Cell Nature EMBOJournal PNAS PLoSBiology NucleicAcidsResearch JournalofVirology 等国际著名学术刊物上发表SCI论文90余篇 Courseoutline Lectures1 2 Introductiontoscientificpresentationandwriting Outlineandobjectivesofthecourse Introductiontodifferenttypesofscientificcommunication reports thesis dissertation papers talks posters grantapplications Principlesofscientificwritingandpresentation whatinformationtoinclude Ethics plagiarismandfraud Courseoutline Lectures3 6 Effectivewriting IandII Clearthinkingisthekeytoclearwriting Rulesofscientificwriting Managingyourtimeeffectively Literaturesearch reviewandcitation Refiningandproofreading Commonerrorstoavoid Courseoutline Lecture7 8 Howtowriteascientificpaper Howtoplanandlayoutyourpaper Writingagoodabstractandintroduction Methods Results discussionandconclusions Authorshipsandacknowledgments Gettingfeedbackfromothers Courseoutline Lecture9 10 Howtopublishapaper Choosingtherightjournalforyourpaper Impactfactors immediacyfactorsandcitations Howascientificjournalworks Therolesoftheeditorandreferees Submittingyourpaper Peerreview howtorespondtoreferees Courseoutline Lecture11 12 Howtopresentaposter Whatisaposterandhowdopeoplereadthem Howtoorganizeyourposter Howtowritethetextforyourposter Howtopresentyourdatainaposter Examplesofgoodandbadposters Courseoutline Lecture13 14 Howtoprepareascientifictalk Howtoplanandorganizeyourpresentation Howdoesascientifictalkdifferfromapaper Howtopresentyourdata Howtomakeyourtalkexciting Examplesofgoodandbadpresentations Courseoutline Lecture15 16 Howtogiveaneffectivetalk Whatmakesagoodpresentation Whattosayandhowtosayit Definingyouraudience Copingwithnerves Howtorespondtoquestions Courseoutline Lecture17 18 Coursesummary Reviewofwhatwehavelearned Howthecourseappliestoyourdissertationanddefense WritingyourMaster sdissertation PreparingyourMaster sdefense Courseevaluation Afterlecture10 writeashortreviewpaperonasubjectofyourinterest MSWordformat Afterlecture16 prepareashortPowerpointpresentationonasubjectofyourinterest Whyisscientificwritingimportant Bringsresearchtocompletion Ethicalobligationtofundingsources Establishprofessionalreputation Writingreachesthewidestaudience Professionalrewards 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