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1.就业类2.品质类(勤俭)Direction:Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning and3) give your comments. (一)介绍背景段：失业人群巨大，暗示再就业十分必要(二)论证分析段：失业人群的现状，再就业的重大意义(三)个人评价段：如何让中国的就业状况稳定发展 分步写作： 第一段1. 介绍背景2. 描述图片3. 介绍文字4. 过渡1、介绍背景在这样一个激烈竞争的社会，很多人处于失业的状态 In a world moving on the wheels of fierce competition, many employees have lost their jobs.2、描述图片 如图所示，一个求职者正站在梯子旁边，期待着自己能找到一份新的工作，梯子能帮他进入再就业的碗里 As is illustrated in the sketch, an applicant is standing beside a ladder, expecting to find a new job/saying wonderful, with the ladder helping him.3、文字描述在图片的中间的碗上写着中文汉字：再就业In the middle of the cartoon lie some Chinese characters reading: re-employment.4、过渡 尽管图片很简单，但却生动显示出下岗员工对于再就业的渴望 Despite its simplicity, it vividly reveals the desire of being employed again from the bottom of the laid-off workers heart.第二段：1. (主题句)：再就业J 2. 列举因素3. 举例论证4. 本体喻体1、 (主题句)毫无疑问，大量的待业状态不利于社会稳定 Undoubtedly, the existence of large number of unemployment is adverse to the social stability. Undoubtedly, finding a job/employment, exerts a profound impact on both the unemployed and the whole society. 2. 列举因素(原因结果) 由于缺乏职业技能或者其他原因，有些员工被解雇 Owing to the lack of professional skills or the like, many employees were fired.2. 列举因素(普遍特殊) 更糟糕的是，越来越多大学生刚刚毕业就面临失业 Even worse，college graduates in growing number are in times of the unemployment just after leaving school. 3. 举例论证(普遍示例) 很多学生找工作有难度，从而出国或者考研就是一个例子 A case in point is that having difficulty in finding jobs, many undergraduates go abroad or further their study.2. 列举因素(透析本质/原因结果) 并非为了事业上的成就感，很多人工作是为了生活下去.因此，帮助这些人再就业非常重要。 Rather than the sense of accomplishment in career, many people work just to make a living. Hence, it is quite vital to help them find a job again. 4. 本体喻体 图片中的碗代表中工作机会，很多求职者想要进入那个碗 The bowl in the drawing epitomizes job opportunities, into which many applicants make every effort to get.第三段：1. 客观评价/个人评价2. 提出建议3. 展望未来1. 客观评价 如果高失业率持续下去，整个国家经济和稳定将受到影响 Were the high unemployment rate to continue, the countrys economy and stability would be badly affected.1. 客观评价 情况如此严重，国家发改委还有很长的一段路要走 The present situation being so critical, the National Development and Reform Commission still have a long way to go.1. 客观评价 总之，有必要扭转低就业率的趋势 By and large, it is rather imperative to reverse this disturbing low employment rate trend.1. 个人评价 如果让我评论, 我将会极力支持对于失业人群的帮助 Were it left to me to comment, I would be strongly in favor of helping the unemployed find a job.2.(提问) 我们应该如何解决整个问题？ How should we address this problem?3.提出建议 首先，只有政府投入更多的资金才能缓解就业压力 Initially, only by pouring more investment form the government can the employment pressure be relieved.3.提出建议 其次，待业者应该自己想办法去找到一份工作养活自己 Secondly, the ones who are in need of a job should strive for finding a job to support themselves. 4.展望未来 如果这些措施被采取，那么社会稳定和高就业率将不再遥远 With all these measures adopted, the prospect of social stability and high employment rate will be far from dim. （完成）第二篇作文：勤俭，节约thrifty，frugal, economical文章布局：(一)介绍背景段：人民生活水平提高，忽视了勤俭的美德(二)论证分析段：人们不够节俭的原因，及危害(三)个人评价段：如何能够变得更加节俭写作文章：第一段：1. 介绍背景2. 描述图片3. 介绍文字4. 过渡1、介绍背景在追求更多利润的同时，很多中国人忽略了节俭的美德Pursuing for making more profit, many Chinese people have always been neglecting the virtue of being thrifty. 2、描述图片 如图所示，孩子正在家长的帮助下穿衣服，开心的笑着，他们的衣服都已经被缝补过 As is illustrated in the sketch, a child is wearing a coat, smiling happily，with his clothing sewed.3、文字描述 在图片的中间的碗上写着中文汉字：再就业 Under the cartoon lie some Chinese characters reading: managing a household by being thrifty.4、 过渡 尽管图片很简单，但却生动显示出中华民族的传统美德 Despite its simplicity, it vividly reveals the traditional Chinese virtue.第二段：1. (主题句) 毫无疑问，浪费的行为不利于构建和谐社会 Undoubtedly, the deed of wasting anything will be adverse to building a harmonious society. Undoubtedly, being frugal exerts a profound impact on both individuals and the society. 2. 列举因素(原因结果) It is due to the following two points that Chinese people are not as economical as before. Initially, globalization has bettered peoples living standard. Another point, similarly vital, is that the virtue of being thrifty has not been valued due to the outlook transformation. 2. 列举因素(宏观微观&普遍特殊) Wasting does not only exist in daily life. Even worse, human race are abusing our natural resource. 第三段：1. 客观评价/个人评价2. 提出建议3. 展望未来1. 客观评价 如果浪费的现象持续下去，整个社会将会收到极大的恶劣影响 Were the behavior of wasting to continue, the entire society would be badly affected.1. 个人评价 如果让我决定我是否应该继续保持节俭, 我将毫不犹豫的选择前者 Were it left to me to decide whether the virtue should be maintained or not, I would prefer the former without any hesitation.2.提出建议 首先，相关的教育人士应该通过有效的方式再次唤起民众节俭的重要性 For one thing, educators are supposed to call up the significance of being thrifty by effective methods. 3.提出建议 其次，公民应该节制，不论是在金钱上还是在能源的使用上 For another, citizens should control themselves, not only on money, but also on natural resources. 4.展望未来 如果这些措施被采取，那么构建一个勤俭型社会的前景将非常光明 With all these measures adopted, the prospect of building up a thrifty society will be far from dim. （完成）第三篇：四级冲刺写作1.正反观点阐释2.现象问题分析题型特点： 有些人认为J 然而另外一些人认为L 你认为常见关键词： 是否 相矛盾、相排斥 不一 有好处、有危害(问题) 写作文章：文章布局：(一)表明分歧段：(二)分析观点段(三)总结观点段：第一段：1.以题目为中心，进行背景介绍2(3).概括介绍双方观点1、 以题目为中心进行背景介绍In a world moving on the wheels of 社会背景，话题涉及主要人物 in growing number +具体行为 Whether in workplace or in our daily life, it is inevitable to notice that+ many 话题涉及主要人物 +具体行为 In a world moving on the wheels of globalization, Chinese people in growing number celebrate the western festivals. Whether in our city or in the whole country, many individuals celebrate the western festivals. 概括介绍双方观点 话题涉及主要人物 are always caught in a dilemma that whether or not +其中一方观点（肯定句） Some propose that +观点一. Others,转折副词, maintain that +观点二./hold quite a different viewpoint.第二段：1.反方观点主题句2(3.4)反方观点支持句5.过渡句6.正方观点立论句7(8.9)正方观点支持句1. 反方观点主题句让步副词，话题内容+助动词+have many drawbacks/benefits.Inevitably, celebrating the western festivals excessively does have many drawbacks. 论证方法适用于：2、3、47、8、9实际利益法Pursuing for doing sth,In order to do sth,make more profitMake a livingPursing for making more profit, many businessmenexaggerate the celebration of western festivals. 举例论证法 This can be evidenced by sth/the fact that This can be evidenced by the fact that some adolescents lead a happy Christmas without knowing anything about Jesus. . 普遍特殊法 Even worse/better, Even worse, someone forgets the traditional Chinese festivals.过渡句 Despite the above argument, others take the opposite stand.正方观点主题句 It is due to sth that+完整句子 It is due to the existence of western festival that we get to know the outside world and foreign culture. 举例论证法 This is