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如何写图表作文 Howdoyouspendyourmoney Imeanyourlivingexpenses Mylivingexpenses Step1认识图表 表格 Table year item 某地区居民近4年的消费变化 曲线图 LineGraph 记忆规律曲线图 BarChart Graph 柱形图 条形图 某校2006 2009年学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查 32 housing other other a PercentageofAverageFamilyExpensesin1997 b PercentageofAverageFamilyExpensesin2002 饼状图 PieChart 下面表格是某地区居民近10年的消费变化 请根据要求写一篇文章 要求描述变化并得出结论 词数100左右 Step2范例引路 范例引路关键词 show change fall increasefrom to ondecrease onrisereasonsononehand ontheotherhand 扩写句子Showchangefall increasefrom to Asisshownfromthetable greatchangeshavetakenplace theexpensesonfood drinkandclothingfellfrom40 to25 Theexpensesontransportandrecreation educationandhousinghavebeenonrise ondecrease onrise reasonsononehand ontheotherhand Thereasonsareasfollows People slivingstandardhasbeenimproved peoplepaidmuchmoreimportancetoeducationandlivingconditions 连句成篇 Asisshownfromthetable greatchanges inpeople sexpensesfrom1998to2007 Theexpensesonfood drinkandclothing from40 in1998 25 in2007 Onthecontrary theexpensesontransportandrecreation educationandhousinghavebeen Fortheformer only10 wasspentonitin1998 buttherate in2007 Thesamealsogoesforthelatter Therate from30 in1998 40 in2007 Fromtheabove wecanseethatpeople slivinglevelhasbeenrisinggreatlyinthepast10years Thereasonsareasfollows ononehand people slivingstandardhasbeenimproved ontheotherhand peoplepaidmuchmoreimportancetoeducationandlivingconditions Asisshownfromthetable greatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople sexpensesfrom1998to2007 Theexpensesonfood drinkandclothingfellfrom40 in1998to25 in2007 Onthecontrary theexpensesontransportandrecreation educationandhousinghavebeenonrise Fortheformer only10 wasspentonitin1998 buttheratedoubledin2007 Thesamealsogoesforthelatter Theraterosefrom30 in1998to40 in2007 Fromtheabove wecanseethatpeople slivinglevelhasbeenrisinggreatlyinthepast10years Thereasonsareasfollows ononehand people slivingstandardhasbeenimproved ontheotherhand peoplepaidmuchmoreimportancetoeducationandlivingconditions 第一步 点明主题 第二步 观察图表中数据的增减总趋势 分类式阐明 第三步 说明原因 得出结论 一 开头简要描述图表 点明主题Describing二 正文分析数据Analyzing三 结尾说明原因 得出结论Comingtoaconclusion Step3总结规律 图表式作文写作分三步 请根据对某校2004 2007年这段时间学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查写一篇文章 要求描述变化并得出结论 词数100左右 Step3实战演练 写作步骤 ProcessWriting1 罗列关键词 Listing 2 展开关键词 Developing 3 打草稿 Drafting 4 修正稿 Revising 5 定稿 Editing 开头常用句型 1 Asisshowninthechart 2 Thegraph chart tableaboveshowsthat 3 Fromtheabovegraph chart itcanbeseenthat 分析数据常用句型 1 Therewasagreat slightincrease risein 2 Itdecreased fell increasedfrom to 3 Thenumber ratehasnearlydoubled 说明原因常用句型 1 Thereasonfor isthat 2 Thereasonsareasfollows 3 Thereareseveralcausesforthechange Firstofall besides what smore Asisshowninthechart therateofstudentswhoownQQsincreasedinthepastfouryearsfrom2004to2007 Backin2004 only20 ofthemhaveQQs oneyearlater theratebecomestwicelarger comparedwithabout50 in2006 theratein2007roseto60 Clearly itistendingtoincrease Thereasonsareasfollows foronething thewidespreaduseoftheInternetmakesitconvenientforstudentstocommunicatewitheachother Foranother QQprovidesallkindsofentertainments suchasplayinggamesandenjoyingmusic What smore QQhasgraduallybecomethemainmeansforthepublictoknowthelatestnews Personally studentsshouldmakeproperuseofandnotbeaddictedtoQQ andonlysocanitserveitspurposebeautifully 根据下面所给两幅图 完成100词左右的一篇短文 首句已给出 参考词汇 expenses n 支出 费用 32 housing other other a PercentageofAverageFamilyExpensesin1997 b PercentageofAverageFamilyExpensesin2002 TheAverageFamilyExpensesTheaveragefamilyincomeintheu s hasincreased Step4课后练习 开头常用句型 1 Asisshowninthechart 2 Thegraph chart tableaboveshowsthat 3 Fromtheabovegraph chart itcanbeseenthat 分析数据常用句型 1 Therewasagreat slightincrease risein 2 Itdecreased fell increasedfrom to 3 Thenumber ratehasnearlydoubled 说明原因常用句型 1 Thereasonfor isthat 2 Thereasonsareasfollows 3 Thereareseveralcausesforthechange Firstofall besides what smore TheAverageFamilyExpensesTheaveragefamilyincomeintheU S hasincreased Thewaytheaveragefamilyspendsit sincomehasalsochanged In1997 25percentsoftheincomewasspentonhousingand18 onfoodanddrink 57 wasusedtomeetingotherexpenses In2002 32 wasspentonhousing abigincrease Foodanddrinkconsumed22 Theremainedexpensesamountto46 It scleanfromthechartsthatasincomesincreasepeoplecanaffordtolivemorecomfortablyandeatmuch TheAverageFamilyExpensesTheaveragefamilyincomeintheU S hasincreased Thewaytheaveragefamilyspendsit sincomehasalsochanged In1997 25percentsoftheincomewasspentonhousingand18 onfoodanddrink 57 usedtomeetotherexpense