《高考基础写作》PPT课件.ppt

高考专题 基础写作 1 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活 2 信息点多 但只能用5句话表达 3 信息呈现方式多为表格 图表等 4 以翻译为基础 注重考察表达能力 一 题型特点 二 能力要求 1 审题能力2 处理信息的能力 信息组合 排列合理3 表达能力 语法正确 句式灵活 信息内容表达准确 完整 语篇连贯 三 表达能力训练 1 写好简单句简单句的五种基本句型 1 主语 不及物动词 S V 2 主语 及物动词 宾语 S V O 3 主语 系动词 表语 S V P 4 主语 及物动词 双宾语 S V O O 5 主语 及物动词 宾语 宾补 S V O C Ex 改正下列病句 MyfavouritesubjectsincludingEnglishandChinese Lastweekweholdadiscussionaboutthistopic Thefuturelifewillbecomemoreandmorebetter Thefiredestroiedtheirhouses 5 HespendstwohourstostudyEnglisheverynight 应改为include 应改为held 应改为betterandbetter 应改为destroyed 应改为studying 6 Hecosttendollarsforthebook 7 Hefeltconfused hedidn tknowwhattodo 8 HewatchedTVforawhilebeforewenttobed 9 Sheisconfidenceandpatience 10 Inhisopinion getfatisaterriblething 应改为paid 应改为 He 应改为going 应改为confidentandpatient 应改为gettingfat 2 如何做到句式灵活 1 并列句2 复合句 定语从句 状语从句 名词性从句 3 强调句型4 非谓语动词5 倒装句6 其他句型及结构 Ex 按要求改写下列句子 1 Englishiswidelyusedintheworld MostbusinesslettersarewritteninEnglish 合并为并列句 EnglishiswidelyusedintheworldandmostbusinesslettersarewritteninEnglish 2 Peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblem Thesesolutionsdidn twork 合并为并列句 Peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblembutthesesolutionsdidn twork 3 IsuggestthatyouvisittheGreatWall Ithasahistoryofmorethantwothousandyears 合并为定语从句 IsuggestthatyouvisittheGreatWall whichhasahistoryofmorethantwothousandyears July11hasbeennamedtheSailingDayinourcountrysince2005 ZhengHebeganhisfamousvoyageonJuly11 合并为定语从句 July11 whenZhengHebeganhisfamousvoyage hasbeennamedtheSailingDayinourcountrysince2005 5 Iwillnotbeabletomeetyouattheairport Ihavesomeexperimentstodothatday 合并为状语从句 IwillnotbeabletomeetyouattheairportbecauseIhavesomeexperimentstodothatday Theproblemwascomplicated Hesolveditinonlytwohourswithacomputer 合并为状语从句 Thoughtheproblemwascomplicated hesolveditinonlytwohourswithacomputer 7 Inthepastfiveyears therehavebeenchangesinpeople sdiet Itisafact 合并为名词性从句 Itisafactthatinthepastfiveyears therehavebeenchangesinpeople sdiet 8 Theweatherwasfine WewenttovisittheZhongShanPark 独立主格结构 Theweatherbeingfine wewenttovisittheZhongShanPark 9 Youshouldnevergiveupwhenyouarefacedwithdifficulties 倒装句 非谓语 Nevershouldyougiveupwhenfacedwithdifficulties 10 众所周知 吸烟危害健康 一句多译 10 众所周知 吸烟危害健康 一句多译 a Itisknowntoallthatsmokingdoesharmtopeople shealth b Asisknowntoall smokingharmspeople shealth c Everyoneknowsthatsmokingisharmfultopeople shealth 四 如何使文章连贯 a 并列 and aswellas b 转折 but however c 递进 besides apartfrom inaddition what smore worse furthermore moreover tomakethingsworse better d 原因 because becauseof as since forthatreason e 结果 so therefore thus asaresult f 让步 though although inspiteof What smore ofcourse asisknowntoall first therefore lastly Whichisbetter newspapersorwebsites newspapersandwebsitesaretwomajornewsmediainthepresentworld Theybothhavetheirstrengthsandweaknesses 1 Asisknowntoall 阅读短文 选择适当的过渡性词汇填空 newspapersbelongtotraditionalnewsmediawhilewebsitesarereallynewmedia Besides manynewspapersareprinteddailyandcanofferthereadersreliableinformation theinformationonthewebsitesisalsofrequentlyupdated butit sapitythatmuchinformationisfalse newspaperscanbeeasilycarriedandreadinanyplaceatanytime 2 3 4 First Ofcourse What smore However withoutacomputerconnectedtotheInternetitisnotconvenientforpeopletogetinformationfromwebsites theirexpressionstylesalsodifferfromeachother Theinformationofnewspapersisexpressedinwordsandpictureswhiletheinformationofwebsitesisexpressedinnotonlywordsandpicturesbutalsoaudiosandvideos 5 Lastly 6 Clearly newspapersandwebsitesbothhavetheiradvantagesanddisadvant ages itisfreeforyoutochooseeitherofthem Therefore 五 基础写作的推荐步骤 1 认真审题2 归纳 排列信息点3 确定短语和句型 连词成句4 组句成篇5 检查修改 某报设有一个求助信箱 请根据以下表中列出的信息 以高三学生李华的名义给Mr Helper写一封英文短信 信的开头和结尾已写好 不计入五句话 DearMr Helper I masenior3student IamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseIcanhardlystandthegreatpressure Iamlookingforwardtoyouradvice Yourssincerely LiHua 写作步骤 第1步审题 记叙文 第一人称 一般现在时 6项 1 2项整合 第2步整合信息 译成英语 1 每天在校时间约10小时 每天完成作业时间3 4小时 Everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons Wespendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework 2 每天几乎没有时间娱乐 消遣 a Wehardlyhaveanytimeforrelaxation b Hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant 3 每天睡眠时间不足 不利于健康 a Wedon thaveenoughtimetosleep whichdoesharmtoourhealth b Wesufferfromlackofsleep which inthelongrun isnotgoodforourhealth 4 负担过重的原因是面临高考 a Themaincauseofourheavyburdenisthepressurefromthecollegeentranceexamination b Thereasonwhywearecarryingsuchaheavyburdenisthatwearefacingthecollegeentranceexamination 5 父母对我们的期望很高 a Ourparentsexpecttoomuchofus b Ourparentshavehighexpectationsofus DearMr Helper I masenior3student IamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseIcanhardlystandthegreatpressure Everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons spendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant Wesufferfromlackofsleep which inthelongrun isnotgoodforourhealth Thereasonwhywearecarryingsuchaheavyburdenisthatwearegettingthepressurefromthecollegeentranceexamination Ourparentshavehighexpectationsofus Iamlookingforwardtoyouradvice Yourssincerely LiHua 第3步连句成篇 and Asaresult What sworse Inaddition Let stry 假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖 该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动 电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见 请按照以下要求以书信形式给予答复 1 选择适合你的时间并说明理由 2 解释你只能参加其中的两项活动 听英语讲座和教外宾学中文 虽然你认为所有的活动都很有意义 3 说明你选择的理由 听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息 教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国 I mgladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp 08样题 DearSirorMadame I mgladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp I vedecidedtogotoBeijingfortheEnglishsummercampduringthetimefromJuly15 22 becauseI llhavetostaywithmyparentsfortherestofthesummervocationinAmerica Iwillchoosetwoactivitiestotakepartinthoughallofthemaremeaningfulandinteresting whicharelisteningtoEnglishlecturesandteachingforeignersChinese IthinkIcanlearnmoreaboutBritishandAmericanliteraturesbyattendingthelecturesandspeeches Andthe2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingsomanyforeignfriendswillcometoChinaatthattime IwanttoletmoreandmoreforeignersknowbetteraboutChina Thankyouverymuch Yourstruly LiPing DearSirorMadam I mgladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp Thankyouverymuchforarrangingsomanyactivities suchasattendingEnglishcorner havingEnglishlectures seeingEnglishfilms learningEnglishsongs actingEnglishplaysandhelpingforeignerslearnChinese Iamsurealltheactivitieswilldoalotofgoodtousstudent