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Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceonhowtodevelopthehabitofreading 5 IamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonthecomingEnglishparty 6 IfIwereyou Iwouldchoosetoworkinafarawaycity 7 Whenitcomestosuchasituation Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldgiveupthejob 8 Inmyopinion itwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayinaseasidecityfortwomonths 9 Allinall everyeffortisrewarding 10 Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount consideration 11 Iwillbehappytoseeyourimprovementsinthisregard 12 Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals suggestions recommendationspractical useful helpful 写作指导一 运筹帷幄1 审题 确定写作体裁 时态和人称 阅读所给材料可知 此处要求学生写一封建议信 属于应用文 时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 人称以第一人称为主 2 确定文章结构建议信多属于半开放性作文 大多要求考生根据所给的材料 给出有针对性地解决办法或提出合理化建议 本文写作要符合英语信件的基本格式 一般来说建议信正文分为三段 第一段 表明写信目的 陈述要解决的问题 第二段 提出建议及其理由 第三段 对提出的建议进行总结 或向对方表达愿望 二 调兵遣将1 首先 根据题目要求 归纳要点和确定写作顺序 简要写出写信的目的 提出合理化建议 培养独立意识 处理好师生关系 保持良好心态 正确看待失败 养好良好的学习习惯 合理饮食并积极运动 希望对方接受自己的建议 2 一句多译 我愿意就如何快速适应高中生活给你提一些建议 Iwillgiveyousomesuggestionsonhowtogetusedtothelifeinaseniorhighschoolquickly 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