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每个正文段的第一句话要清楚地表达你这段的观点 要具体 不要写得太含混 举例的时候 要向听众说明你的例子 如大禹 要说明大禹是谁 因为外教不举例的时候 要向听众说明你的例子 如大禹 要说明大禹是谁 因为外教不 清楚 清楚 每次拿到每个每次拿到每个 saying 的时候 要找重点词 重点的意思去阐述 的时候 要找重点词 重点的意思去阐述 通常后半句通常后半句 才是重点 才是重点 尤其是句子中有转折意思的时候 尤其是句子中有转折意思的时候 在阐述的时候 要尽量保持人称的一致性 如果用在阐述的时候 要尽量保持人称的一致性 如果用 we 一直用一直用 we how we spend their 应为 应为 our time 尽量不要使用过去式 除非你是在讲过去的事情 尽量不要使用过去式 除非你是在讲过去的事情 when we go to school we were 应为 are taught the knowledge from the books by teacher 单复数要一致 We may learn a lot from it 应为 them which would really do good to our life But there are 应为 is much more important knowledge exist in the world 7 不要写中式英语 But there are 应为 is much more important knowledge exist 应为 existing in the world 梁梁 Remember that a person s name is to that person the sweetest and most important sound in any language Good morning ladies and gentlemen Today the topic of my impromptu speech is remember that a person s name is to that person the sweetest and most important sound in any lamguage 先解释一下你对 这句的意思 As to this saying I couldn t help agreeing with it any more From my standpoint My reasons are as followings In the first place the name as for a person is so vital and it contains special meaning so it shows respect and attention to the person if you can remember his or her name Your own name shows the roots of your own idendityidentity and in the same way the other people s names indicate the idendity of themtheir identity Therefore remembeing a person s name is not the name itself but is a kind of respect and attention to that person That has crucial significance For instance my name Liang Wenbo Liang Wenbo does not just mean that these three Chinese characters are lined together It stands for foe me this the personhuman who is tough optimistic confident and kind For these reasons this it is given special meaning and very important to me Now if you could remember my name and call me Hey Liang Wenbo how are you doing For me I would say Wow Wonderful he remembers my name That s so sweet And this would make me happy all day long That s the magic of remembering a person s name And also In the second place for a teacher remembeingremembering the students names is also a very effective way to improve their teaching That can narrow the gap that exists between the teacher and the students and they can establish a close relationship In this way the atmosphere in the class room will be more relaxed and comfortable and the students will be more active and interested in learning I believe that many of you will agree with me that a foreign teacher s class is often more atractive and active Why I also asked myself this question and by observing I found out the secret What is that The secret is name In the first class the teacher knows the students names but and at the second time he can call student s names correctly That s wonderful The students like that they receive the information of respect and attention from the teacher calling their name so they are more willing to be cooperative in calss Hence it is of significant meaning to remember people s names Finally to sum up it is fantastic to notice realize that it is very important to someone remembers your name and it is also very important to try to remember other people s names remember people s names and be remembered So let s remember each other s name Thank you 单数可数名词不能单独存在 name 不能单独存在 如果存在一定是 a name the name her name names 等 但绝对不能是 name Be not angry that you can not make others as you wish them to be since you can not make yourself as you wish to be Good morning ladies and gentlemen Today the topic of my impromtuimpromptu speech is that be not angry that you can not make others as you wish them to be since you can not make yourself as you wish to be In my opinion it means that 不要说太多无关紧要的话 直接解释这 句的意思 表达的时候不要绕弯 Well frankly speaking at my first glance of this saying it likes that there is a sonorous thunder sounds in my ears It wakes me up I am lightened And I believe that many people have the same feeling as me That is I totally agree with this saying Here are some of my arguments Regarding the wish I want to say that don t dream of expecting others to be what you want them to be Why Since mMost of the time you yourself can not make yourself as you wish to be If we are sensitive enough it will be not difficult to find that many things that has happened around us have prove d this saying is a truth Many people are doing these useless things However they have no idea that what they are doing is harmful to those who they love as well as harmful to themselves Therefore these scenes can pfthen be seen in public A parent a child the parent tries to persuade the child to a tutorial class The child does want to go he wants to enjoy the right to be a child Nevertheless in the name of love the parents would say baby I love you so much All these things that I did are just good for you I want you have a bright future I want to see that you can enter a key university or go abroad In tears and unwillingly the child is pushed into that boring tutorial classroom At any time I witness this occasion I feel painful the parents say that they love the child but they don t know that this love may ruin a child s happy childhood For this reason I have to say that this love bears too much the weight of the parents wishes Entering key university going aboad or any thing else all just the parents unaccomplished dreams and now they impose these dreams to the next generation in name of love If the children can not achieve what they want the parents would be disappointed so that punish or scold the children Another family tragedy will quickly on show All the reasons are rooted in the fact that these parents are too ignorant to know the truth that be not angry that you can not make others as you wish them to be since you can not make yourself as you wish to be Finally ladies and gentlemen we must keep this truth in our mind Be not angry because you can not control the fate of others so just be good to yourself first do want you should do That s enough Thank you 这篇的整个结构太乱 这句话的两个重点是 不要期望别人能想你想的 那样 因为你自己本身就不能做到你想的那样 所以你的论点应该围绕这两点 来写 至于父母孩子的这个例子 我认为并不是很有说服力 因为父母有指导 性的职能 指导孩子的未来 因为孩子毕竟较小 但是你可以说父母让孩子上 辅导班是好的 但是有些父母自己并不能做到他们想做的 却强迫孩子来做 重新组织这篇的语言 Home is where the heart is Good morning ladies and gentlemen Today the topic of my impromtu speech is that home is where the heart is When I first saw this topic I was a little bit excited because it reached the softest part of my heart 直接进入主题 Home is the harbor of both our body and mind Home is the never ever changed inner sustenance There is no need to mention the significance of home Many people may say that where there is home there is heart but I want to say that where there is heart there is home 这两句的差别是什么 Concerning this saying I have three points to back me up Regarding the first point if only we have love and care for the parents in our heartsincerely then home is just there near us We still can be together if our hearts are connected The reason why home is so important to us is that there are our blovedbeloved parents waiting for us No matter how far we are away from home their solicitude is always there In the same way whether we are near at hand or far away in at the end of the world This let me think ofTake an ancient Chinese flood combatting hero Da Yu for example At that time Da Yu was assigned to preventcombat the flood throughby water control He passed his home for three times but never went in for a secondfor a look Didn t he want to go in I din t don t think so I believe he miseed missed his family so much in his heart but he knew what the more important thing was Therefore he put his home in his heart and regulated waters forstfirst AcordinglyAccordingly we can see that as long as we have a caring heart home is not distant from us Now moving to the nextSecondly if onlywhere there is love and affection in your heart then there must beis your your home Take To illustrate San Mao a Taiwanese writer and her husband as an example she and Hexi lived in the Sahara Desert happily Though they lived in the harsh environment and they didn t have enough food supplies they were still contented with what they had ve got Neither San Mao nor He Xi was the original resident there but for love in their hearts they treated there as their home That s can be best explainedThis fully explained why San Mao finally left the Sahara after He Xi s death Still because of love If love has gone then the home will not exist any more Lastly if only there is dream in your heart then mhome is along side too Think of the international communist soldier Bethume he was a Canadian but in order to help the liberation of China to pursue his dream resolutrly he came to China and devoted himself to the career He shouldn t have any relevance with China before he came Nevertheless love pushed him to and he really took China as his home and he did all these unconditionalyyy So no matter where you are as long as your dream is there there will be your home Bringing this my arguments to a close heart is the starting pointharbor of home Only if we are full of love towards our families home is always there with us no matter how far it is geographically 举例的时候 要说明是什么人 因为听众不一定都对你举的例子很熟悉 所以要先说明一下 Unless we put home in our hearts then even if we live right in the home we ll still wonder where we are where the home is When it is dark enough you can see the stars Today the topic of my impromtu speech is that when it is dark enough you can see the stars I cann tcan t agree with this saying any more In my opinion Darkness is about the frustrations enough is about the effort and the stars are the hopes dreams or success So this saying teaches me three things making my objective and direction clear being prepared for wrestling with frustrations and difficulties and importantly keeping in faith So I have three points to support my opinion First we should make our objective and direction clear before we set out We can t see the stars during the day time Is it because that there are no stars here Of cause not The stars are over there in the sky all the time We can t see them because they are hidden behind the sunlignt So we shouldnot waste our time Rather we should turn to the night to find our stars So before we set out for our dreams It s very important to know what exactly we want and which direction to go to find it 要保持 人称的一致性 如果是第一人称 尽量都用第一人称 这段写得非常好 很有 说服力 Second we should be prepared for wresting with frustrations and difficulties We can t expect that the way to our objective are smooth and easy In the darkness we may feel cold lonely and be afraid of some unexpected frustrations just as on the way to our dreams and success But only in darkness could we see the stars Similarly only by experiencing harships and setbacks can we be clear about our goals and objectives So we should be not afraid of the difficulties we have to experience Rather we should hold a positive attitude to fully prepared for them The last but not the least point is that we should keep in faith and don t give up Sometime we may feel disappointed after having been working hard for such a long time but still can t reach our dreams But we shouldn t give up and instead we should just keep in faith May be our efforts are not enough We need to work hard and keep waiting for a little bit longer and we will see the hope soon To conclude if we choose the stars we should be aware that we choose the darkness too if we want to enjoy the stars make every efforts we can to defeat our fear to the darkness and keep in faith on ourselves In the end we will surly see our own stars 注意全篇的人称 老师 这是重写的 Today the topic of my impromptu speech is that victory won t come to me unless I go to it My understanding of this quotation is that we must be positive if we don t make efforts we will never gain victory I totally agree with this sentence My reasons are as follows First of all Since victory is the thing of stillness it won t come to you on initiative There is a saying going like this there s no such thing as a free lunch so we have to earn bread with our own hands The bread is here but it would not come to us unless we go to it So in short it s no use sitting here waiting victory to come to us If we want it we have to make efforts to earn it In Addition to that we should realize that the process of going to victory is not easy As an illustration Liuxiang the famous Chinese athlete won the gold medal in the men s 110 m hurdles final on August 28 2004 at the Athens Olympic Games He claimed the victory but victory didn t come easily He has to be trained everyday It has included hundreds of sit ups holding the barbell doing squat stand up and crossing countless column He gave up all his leisure entertainment and only aimed at the victory Hard work has been paied off and finally he succeeded Therefore victory won t come easily and in the process of going to it we have to make great efforts to achieve it To conclude where there is a will there is a way victory won t come to you but if you make efforts to go for it it will finally be yours 这是新的 这句话的意思是 教育最主要的目的 不是教你挣得面包 教育最主要的目的 不是教你挣得面包 而是使每一口面包都香甜 而是使每一口面包都香甜 The topic of my impromptu speech is the primary purpose of education is not to teach you to earn your bread but to make every one mouthful sweeter 解 释一下 Well I partially agree with this sentence and my tow reasons are as follows In the first place I don t think the primary purpose of education is not to teach students to earn their bread Rather the primary purpose of education is to equip the students with abilities so as for them to make a living after they go to the society Everyone receives education people go to primary schools high schools then universities or even further the graduate schools The knowledge they have learned in school has enabled them to know this world including nature science and civilization Only when they are taugh the basic knowledge can they be able to live in this world and make a living So it cannot be denied that the primary purpose of education is to teach people to earn their bread However I agree with the second half of the saying that the primary purpose of education is to make every one mouthful sweeter 这部分才是这 句话的重点 要重点解释 In conclusion I think the primary purpose of education is not only to teach you to earn your bread but also to make every one mouthful sweeter Education is really beneficial to us primary education lead us to earn bread further education teach us to make every one mouthful sweeter 这个理解 是错误的 这句话的意思是教育的主要目的并不是教会学生生存的本领 而是 教会学生做人的道理 让学生懂得珍惜他们所拥有的 教会学生积极的生活态 度 So we must look on education from different aspects and you ll find the real primary purpose of education includes both The topic of my impromptu speech is education is an admirable thing but it is well to remember from time to time that nothing worth knowing can be taught In my perspective education is great it equips us with knowledge but what is really worth known cannot be learned from the textbooks so I totally agree with this quotation and I have two reasons to back up my point First of all 不要一开始就用 above all above all 的意思是 most importantly education is do useful but not useful enough 这个句子写得不具体 每段的第 一句话要清楚地表达你这段的观点 要具体 when we go to school we are taught the knowledge from the books by teacher We may learn a lot from them which would really do good to our life But there are much more important knowledge existing in the world which education cannot teach us For example how to manage a family how to cherish a friendship and how to enjoy our whole life So we should not depend on education completely we should remember that what really worth knowing can not be taught by education In addition to that we must have this in mind that to get the valuable knowledge in life needs our own efforts from other resources For example Thomas Jefferson the American president once remarked that a free man obtains knowledge from many sources besides books and it serves my point just fine Some kind of knowledge can only be obtained from experiences and then we will learn the true essence of it In conclusion what is really worth knowing cannot be taught we have to get it from other sources or experience it by ourselves Only in this waycan we totally understand it and make it our own 剩下的是手写版 我周一上午会放在 9 号楼门卫处 麻烦老师了 In my opinion the mostimportant words in this saying are dark enough stars Darkness is about the direction and the frustrations enough is about the effort and the stars are the hopes dreams or success So this saying teaches me three things making my objective and direction clear being prepared for wrestling with frustrations and difficulties and importantly keeping in faith First we should make our objective and direction clear before we set out We all know that we can t see the stars during the day time Is it because that there s no stars here Of cause not The stars are over there in the sky all the time We can t see them because they are hidden behind the sunlignt So don t waste your time turn to the night to find your stars So before we set out for our dreams It s very important to what exactly we want and which direction to go to find it Second we should be prepared for wresting with frustrations and difficulties We can t expect that the way to our objective are smooth are easy In the darkness we may feel cold lonely and be afraid of some unexpected frustration just as on the way to our dreams and success We should be prepared for them Don t be afraid of them work hard and wrestle with them The last but not the least thing is that we should keep in faith and don t give up Sometime we may feel disappointed after having been working hard for such a long time but still can t reach our dreams I should say don t give up just keep in faith May be our efforts are not enough Try to work hard and keep waiting for a little bit longer you will see the hope soon If you choose the stars you should be aware that you choose the darkness too if you want