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原创原创 20152015 年高考英语全国年高考英语全国 I I 卷写作阅卷评分标卷写作阅卷评分标 准及各档次作文示例准及各档次作文示例 2015 11 23 原创原创 20152015 年高考英语全国年高考英语全国 I I 卷写作阅卷评分标准及各档次卷写作阅卷评分标准及各档次 作文示例作文示例 作文题 作文题 假定你是李华 你校英文报假定你是李华 你校英文报 外国文化外国文化 栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生 活的短文 请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿 要点如下 活的短文 请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿 要点如下 栏目介绍栏目介绍 2 2 稿件内容稿件内容 3 3 稿件长度 约稿件长度 约 400400 词词 4 4 交稿日期 交稿日期 6 6 月月 2828 日前 日前 注意 注意 1 1 词数词数 100100 左右左右 2 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 3 开头语已为你写好 开头语已为你写好 DearDear Peter Peter I dI d likelike toto askask youyou toto writewrite anan articlearticle forfor ourour school sschool s EnglishEnglish newspaper newspaper 20152015 年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准 评分总则 评分总则 1 1 本题总分为 本题总分为 2525 分 按分 按 5 5 个档次给分 评卷组各档次要求 个档次给分 评卷组各档次要求 5 5 档清清爽爽 档清清爽爽 四四 档整整齐齐 档整整齐齐 3 3 档马马虎虎 档马马虎虎 2 2 档糊里糊涂 档糊里糊涂 1 1 档一塌糊涂档一塌糊涂 2 2 评分时 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线 评分时 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线 1515 分 然分 然 后确定其所属的具体档次 以该档次的要求来衡量 最后给分 后确定其所属的具体档次 以该档次的要求来衡量 最后给分 其所属档次 然后以该档次的要求来衡量 确定或调整档次 最后给分 其所属档次 然后以该档次的要求来衡量 确定或调整档次 最后给分 3 3 词数少于 词数少于 8080 和多于和多于 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