在职英语历年范文解析

在职英语历年范文解析在职英语历年范文解析 大学英语English1997年在职研究生作文Part Writing 30minutes 15points Directions In thispart you areallowed30minutes to write a position ofno lessthan100words onThe problemsI have in myEnglish study Your positionshould bebased on the followingoutline given in Chinese Outline 遇到哪些困难 产生原因 如何克服Th eproblem sI haveinm yEnglish stu dy Duringmy studyof English I meetwith someproblems 主旨句 These problemsare as follows 过渡句 First of all when Iread orlisten English I alwaysencounter wordsand expressions 解释句一 So vocabularyis atroublesome problem 要点一 Secondly with afairly largevocabulary I amstill notable towrite avivid andfluent position 要点二 Thirdly and alsothe mostannoying thingis afterso many years studying I couldnot municatewith peoplein English 要点三 There are many reasons for theseproblems 段落主题句 For ohing I haveno studyplan toenlarge vocabulary andrearrange whathave learnedbefore 要点一 For another in theprocess I havenot summarizeda pleteset ofmethods whichwill instructme in the futurestudy 要点二 Beyond theseobvious reasons however liesa deepercause when Istudy English I havenot createdan environmentto practiseand useit 要点三 For thereasons givenabove I feelthat inorder toovere them above all I shouldmake astudy schedule for example when Iwould finishConcept English when Iwould goover theformer contentsetc 解释一 对应上段要点一 The schedulekeep anEnglish diarymore efficientand goal specified 作用一 At thesame time I shouldkeep anEnglish diaryand trybest tofind opportunitiesto practiseEnglish 解释二 The purposeof diaryis notonly topractise thinkingand writingin English but alsoprovide usan opportunityto summarizestudy methodswhen you are free 作用二对应要点二和要点三 only inthis waycould Icultivate thehabit of thinking in English andusing English 小结句 写作解析第一段首句直接点题 提出在英语学习 过程中遇到一些问题 然后简练过渡 引起下文 本段的写作也可以同第二段结合在一起 如采取这样的句型结构 I havebeen studyingEnglish formanyyears and yetthere arethree whichhave always been holdingback myprogress One is that another isthat the thirdisthat 这种写法的好处是充分利用英语的现在完成进 行时的语法功能 加强语气 然后列举问题 条理清晰 是考生应 该思考借鉴的方法 第二段呼应提纲第一项要求 仍然以陈述句列举出产生困难的原因 在叙述原因时 有很多成熟和固定的句型 结构可以选择使用 第三段本段针对上面产生的原因逐一困难产生的原因 其内容层次 有浅入深 由表面原因 学习无计划性 到 不掌握学习方法 直 至 忽略了语言学习的规律具有一个语言学习环境 写作中 作者也是采用固定句型 整体读来 层次分明 有条不紊 第四段以 For thereasons givenabove I feelthat inorder toovere them 轻松过渡到阐述解决方法上来 本段写作要注意对应上文 即上面提出的原因 下面就需要给出办 法 此类文章难度不大 考生只要根据提纲 将问题 原因 解决方法 陈述清楚即可 因为属于说明文范畴 大量的因定句型 词组 衔接结构可以选择 使用解释原因 分析影响的常用句型和例句说明1 There aremany different several various reasons for this matter change decrease growth For ohing For another In addition Furthermore 例句There areseveral reasons for hisdecision ofstudying ofstudying law For ohing he isvery interestedin socialaffairs andit seemsthe bestway toenable him to engagein theseactivities For another his fatheris alawyer who has always encouragedhimto do somethingsimilar In addition he issure thathe canget ajob aftergraduation 2 A number of factorscontribute to lead to result in aount for and what s more 例句A number of factorscontribute tochanging moralvalues self indulgence the lackof socialconsciousness andthe degenerationof the society itself 3 We mayconsider regard think of take the change phenomenon decrease development the suddenlyrise asasign symbol evidence landmark of but thetruth isthat 例句We maytake thechange asa symbolof socialdevelopment but thetruth isthat it will onlylead tosocial corruption 4 The explanationfor thematter decrease rise change phenomenon of involves many different plicated puzzling factors reasons aspects 例 句The explanationfor thephenomenon of the risingteenage suiciderate involvesmany plicatedfactors Some attributethe riseto anoveremphasis onearly suess others pointto mountingpeer pressure and stillothers toconfusion overchanging socialvalues 5 The reasonsfor aremany but for the mostpart centeron concentrate on focus on 例句The reasonsfor thephenomenon ofthe risingteenage suiciderate involvesmany plicatedfactors Some attributethe riseto anoveremphasis onearly suess others pointto mountingpeer pressure and stillothers toconfusion overchanging socialvalues 6 There areseveral causesforthissignificant growthin first second finally 7 W e havereason tobelieve that 8 This can be expressedasfollows 9 Perhaps theprimary reasonfor is 10 It ischiefly responsiblefor1998年在职研究生英语考题partIII Writing 30minutes 15points Directions In thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition fno lessthan100words underthe titleof Why WeWork Your positionshould bebased on the followingoutline giveninEnglish Outline 1 Some peoplelive to work2 Other peoplework to live3 Your opinionWh yw ew orkThroughout history work andlife alwaysappear ascontradictory things 主旨句 指出work和life存在冲突 且冲突由来已久 伏笔 文中会针对两种想法展开叙述 people holdingdifferent attitudessacrifice themselvesto oneortheother 过渡句 Some peoplelive to work 本段主题句 照应提纲第一条 In theiropinions work isan essentialelement in life No matterhow hardit is they devoteall energyand timeinto it During their working life they discoverpleasure realize dreamand enjoyhardness and suess Even 加强语气 they meetdifficulties they considerthem asmeaning andflavor inlife While 转折 there arealso somepeople whowork tolive They areforced by their circumstancesor bytheir viewtoworkfor living They regardwork asa kindof meansto supportfamily andthemselves Therefore 段落小结句 these people cannot balancetheirworkingtime andsalary these people can t exploretheir capacityand enthusiasm even these peoplecan t explainwhy theywork whenthey getrich 排比句式加强语气 From mypoint ofview I prefertoworktolive 点明自忆的观点 Being anoptimistic person I hopethat lifeis goodenough foreveryone tofind happinessin work Once youapproaches workfor enjoyment you createthe possibilityof findinghope inlife Serving theothers andthesocietywill definitelymake yousuessful bothinlifeand inspirit 写作解析第一段作者通过自古以来就存在的生活与工作的 冲突 点明不同观点的群体将两者对立处理的情况 这种写法的好处是让读者感受到所讨论问题有价值 并不自觉的考 虑到自己是怎样处理上述问题的 第二段和第三段针对提纲 一 二开始叙述不同观点的人处理问题的方法 这两种观点的着眼点都集中在 怎样看待工作 上 即持 live towork 观点的人 将工作看成生活的方式 采取 be forcedby 的态度 截然相反的观点对比强烈 第二段中 作者用 During Even 句型举例第三段中 作者用 Therefore these peoplecan t these peoplecan t even thesepeoplecan t 排比举例 都凌漓尽致的将两类观点的特点突 出出来 第四段作者通过 Being anoptimistic person happiness hope definitely 和 suessf ul 等充满激情 活力的词 明确了为社会 人民付出才能使个人 的生活和工作更加和谐 统一的观点 整段写作句型多变 用词恰当 说服力大增 1999年在职研究生英语试题Part Writing 30minutes 15points Di rections For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition ofno lessthan120words onThe qualitiesofthe Cross century Talents You shouldwrite aordingto thethree point outlinegiven below Please writeit clearlyon theANSWER SHEET 2 Outline 跨世纪人才应具备哪些素质为什么需要具备这些素质怎 样才能成为跨世纪人才Qu alitiesofth eCross Cen tu ry Talents Withthe rapiddevelopment ofeconomics andsociety and increasingnumberofpeople eto realizethat the most importantfactor inpetition isthe cross century talents qualities 主旨句 突出问题的重要性 Since 承接上文 the cross century talentsplay sucha crucialrole innext century what are the qualities 引起读者兴趣 同时对应提纲第一条内容 From mypoint ofview they shouldbe good health noble characterand wideknowledge 本段主题句 简要说明 是什么 的问题 Health isthe foundationof strugglingandsuess As thefamous proverbgoes Good healthis abovewealth 要点一 Second cultivating andowning goodand noblecharacters isof greatimportance Only thosewith noblecharacter strong perseverance a senseof responsibilityand regularworking andliving habitscan surelydedicate themselvesto thepeople 要点二 Third the cross century talentsshould alsohave profound most updatedknowledge anda openmind 要点三 To gain the abovequalities 点明第四段主题 即解决问题 one shouldalways bearin mindthat thecross century talentsarethepillars of our nation They shouldvalue theirhealth they shouldmaintain abroad visionto theirduties they shouldkeep afresh mindto absorbknowledge 排比句式加强语气 写作解析第一段本段作为整 篇的主旨突出了跨世纪人才的重要性 其作用是为提纲的三点内容 定了个基调 在类似题目的写作中 考生可以充分利用这种方法 即找出问题的 关键 重要性 严肃性 影响性 观点差异性等贾亦叙述或评论 篇幅限于 一 两句 起到引领全文 画龙点睛之用 第二段和第三段解决了提纲第二条的要求 本段是测试考生写作段 落的功底 因此写作时要注意变换句式 疑问句 陈述句和倒装句 配合 适当举例 As thefamous proverbgoes 结构分明 As thefamous proverbgoes Second Third 第四段本段采用排比句 式强调了怎样才能成为跨世纪人才的问题 四个 should 和三个 动词 value maintain keep 回应上篇内容 用语经济 结构严谨 值得考生琢磨和模仿 2000年在职英语试题Part Writing 30minutes 15points Directio ns In thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition ofno lessthan100words onwhich is more important wealth orhealth You shouldwrite aordingto thethree point outlinegiven below Please writeit clearlyontheANSWER SHEET 2 Which is more important wealth ofhealth When facedwith thequestion of wealth and health 主旨句 引述问题 quite afew peopleclaim that wealth ismore important but otherpeople considerit differently 点明不同观点 I preferthe secondview 表明自己的想法 Surely 暗含可能有所转折的意思 w ealth hasalwaysbeenthe thingpeople longfor 段落主题句 It istrue thatwealth bringshappiness andfreedom especially in the modernsociety 解释句 Different kindsof products recreations andservices presentpeople awonderful world Owning themmake our life morecolorful andfortable 举例证明 No doubt wealth beesthe mostimportant thingin somepeople s life 段落小结句 But Ibelieve thatthesepeopleignore adeeper andmore basicfact thatwithout healthwhere iswealth 转折 将问题关键引导到本段叙述的重点上 When wealthis spent you canearn itback however when healthis gone itwillnever e 进一步解释上句内容 Health ismore preciousand valuablethan wealth 段落主题句 Firstly with agood health you canfully enjoylife withyour family You won t worryabout diseasesand extraburden onmore efficientand fruitful Lastly with agoodhealth you willeasily havea largecircle offriends because peoplealways trusthealthy men All inall health bringsyou happiness opportunities andsatisfaction 排比句式和固定结构的使用加强文章的说服力 T herefore I stronglyremend thatpeople shouldvalue theirhealth andtake actionsto keepfit 写作解析第一段本段采用简练的句型结构引出问题 点明 不同观点 并表明自己的态度 这种写法即经济又明白 有很多成熟句型可以套用 第二段在本段写作中 首先提出人们渴望财富 因为财富可以带来 快乐和自由 然后进一步解释这种财富和自由是建立在物质基础上 的 最后小节财富成为这些人心目中最为重要的东西 写作时可以突出财富带给人们的便利 也可以描述很多人为财富而 不惜牺牲健康等等 第三段笔锋一转 着力说明健康重于财富之处 第四段小结全文给出建议 再次突出保持身体健康的重要性 xx年在职英语式题Part Writing 30minutes 15points Directions For thispart you aretowrite aposition of120 150words onthe followingtopic The Greatest Invention in the Past Century Inyour position you shouldclearly stateyour opinionand givereasons tosupport yourargument Write yourposition onthe ANSWEETSHEET Th eGreatestIn vention inthePastCenturyOf allthe inventionsand discoveriesin thelast century nothing canbe moreinfluencing thanthe inventionof Inter 主旨句 突出 greatest 的量的优势 People whoemphasize eitherthe advantagesor disadvantageshave toacknowledge that Inter beethe essentialpart of our dailywork andlives 扩展说明 突出 greatest 的质的优势 Inter isthe bestinformation center 主题句 It iswidely agreedthat by usingInter we canget aessto informationmore easilyand quickly For example we canread thelatest newson Inter instead ofbuying alarge pieceof newspaper we canget the information aboutthe universitywe intendto knowinstead goingth erein person we canalso dealwith ourstock sharesonthe Interinsteadof sittingthere allday long 举例说明 In short the convenienceprovided bytheInterhelps usall 小节 Inter alsoserves asa newway of munication 主题句 It ismuch cheaperthan atelephone call especially along distancecall it ismuch quickerthan aletter it isalso mucheasier thana visit 排比句式突出说明优越性 It isone ofthemostconvenient andmost widelyused meansofmunication 小节句 Of course it alsohas somedetrimental influence 主题句 For instance some unhealthfulinformation isspread andis sentto especiallythe teenagers 举例说明 However nothing couldbe perfect 转折回转强调 It isfirmly andwidely believedthatInterwill dous moregood thanharm tous aslong aswe useit carefully 总结句 写作解析第一段本段开篇点题 说明网络在众 多发明中起到最有影响力的作用 然后指出尽管人们对网络优缺点 有诸多评论但不容争辩的事实是网络已经成为我们工作和生活不可 缺少的部分 这种写法直指主旨 greatest 作者用词考究 从 ofall n othing canbe moreinfluencing than the essential 无处不体现出网络重要性 第二段本段着重说明 网络是信息中心 这个段落主题 从简便易得 经济实用的角度突出网络信息中心的作用 三个排比使得叙述层次分明 内容详尽 考生可以充分体会简单内容如何用排比组合以达到最好的效果 第三段通过三个比较 说明网络作为交流方式的优点 同传统的信件交流 电话交流比较 网络更为便宜 快速和容易 第四段作者用一句话举例说明了网络存在的缺点 但世界上没有十 全十美的事物 笔锋一转 告知读者支要运用得当 就会是网络发 挥更大 更好的作用 整篇文章一气呵成 用笔经济 没有一词一句的繁冗 是我们大家 认真研读体会的范文 xx年在职英语试题Part Writing 30minutes 15points Directions In thispart youareallowed30minutes towriteapositionofno lessthan150words onthe increaseintheNumber of Chinese TravelingAbroad Study thefollowing chartcarefully andbase yourposition ontheinformationgiveninthe chart The increaseintheNumber of Chinese TravelingAbroad Ascanbeclearly observedfrom the chart above 引用图表 有据可依 the trendof Chinese traveling abroad is goingup theseyears 主旨句 总体叙述变化情况 In thepast threeyears the numberofChinesetraveling abroadwas ona steadyrise Aording tothechart 引用图表 the numberincreased from7 5million in1999and to12 1million inxx I