短文改错专项训练 (2)

文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 1 The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of practice in what you were doing you will be perfect in it If you want improve your study and work remembering that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice For example when learning a language though you can make full use for your talent practice is necessary If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don t do enough exercise it s certain that you can t understand the language perfectly But if you real practise a lot maybe you will understand them much better In this way you can apply that you have learned better 2 Nowadays there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering It s well known that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return It s as the Spirit of Lei Feng However knowing this there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend For instance the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics Moreover we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them Even though some people s career is a volunteer They are ready to helping others Although the volunteers are much more common we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society 3 All of us need friendship An understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other Otherwise it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long As an old saying goes A friend in need is a friend indeed So really friendship should able to stand all sorts of tests And it is wise to have as many good friends that we can The more fiends we have the more we can learn for one another but the more pleasure we can share together 4 Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities Teachers ask students to spend most of their time at studies But if students feel tired they can t pay attention to that they re studying They will be in a bad health It s also not good for his studies In my opinions it s important give students enough time to do outdoor activities Then they will enjoy better health and work hard So please pay more attention to student health and growth 5 My car just wouldn t move any farther It was complete dead and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold wet night I decided walk around a little before accepting I d have to spend the night in the car Maybe I can find a telephone Actually I didn t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully He said he had no telephone and that it wasn t any within walking distance but the old man who offered to go to repair my car 6 We all want to grow up happily and healthy and for this goal we must do several things Firstly we should develop good attitude for life Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard time We should be brave in front of difficulties Secondly we must study hard because of knowledge is power If we have the power we can help to build your country and enjoy life better In order to study well we need to do sport so that we can keep fitness We can go running playing ball games but simply take a walk after a day s study If we do those things well we will be able to grow up happily and healthily 7 Dear John Last summer I take a part time job in the International Camp for children I have told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it How about join us The camp is at the foot of a small hill closely to a river It is so a beautiful place We can hear birds singing happy all around Everybody sleeps in tents that is very exciting We usually work only five hours a day so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience If you have interests in it reply to me soon Yours Li Ping 8 As a student Li Hua works very harder at his lessons so he is always one of the top student in our class He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons so she always helps them after class As a monitor Li Hua has organized some voluntary activities successful We visit a nursing home last month and we pick rubbish in the park near our school every week What we do is warmly welcomed by the community This is how Li Hua is so popular 9 Yesterday I paid a visit to the Hong en Temple Park with my friends The park was full of fresh and beauty flowers When I was enjoying the wonderful scenery around something unpleasant catch my eye A young couple on the grass was eating talking and laughing loudly even if they were the only people in the world What s better they spat and even threw rubbish onto the grass ignoring the sign No littering nearby What a shame Such behavior left me in thought If all visitors to the Hong en Temple Park do as the young couples did the park will be severely polluting and soon turned into a huge dustbin I think both of us should mind our behavior in the public places Only in this way can we live more comfortable and beautiful surroundings 10 I am a 18 year old middle school student I have been busy in my study and seldom helped my parents with the houseworks Feeling quite sorry for that and I begin to think about what to do to help Last Sunday when my parents went out shop I suddenly got an idea why not giving the rooms a throughout cleaning Firstly I collected both the books newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put it in place Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture After that I swept and mopped the floors At this very moment my parents came back and were quite surprising to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining My mother gave me a hug and I see satisfaction in her eyes Tired as I was I never felt so happy 11 Three years ago I became a student in a ordinary school Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly equipped classroom I found the teachers patient but considerate Besides I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class I decide to make the best use for it I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates Whenever I had difficulties they were always helpful Soon I became one of the top student in my class what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are 12 As a middle school student of Senior Three I do sports one and two hours a day such as doing morning exercises playing basketball long distance running and so on I think it is very helpfully in me Take exercise makes me even more healthier so that I won t be ill very often What s more I also get myself relaxing in different kinds of sports Only in this way I do a better job in my study in high spirits For doing physical exercise I m becoming stronger and more confident than ago I did think it is necessary for everyone to spend some time on sports every day so people s health is important in modern life 13 Welcome to our city Now let me to introduce our city to you Our city is a new modern city It set up in the early 1980s But it has been developed very rapidly From here you can travel everywhere by the sea by air or by land Recently another freeway connects with Beijing started being used The places around our city is rich in natural resources And we have enough supply in electricity and energy resources The public order is nice The government will support investors with many ways We wish more foreign friend to invest in our city 14 Last Monday we were having our Chinese class while the teacher suddenly slip and fell We were all worried about her One of the boy carried her on the back under the help of some others to the clinic immediately It turned out that her right leg was breaking and she had to stay in hospital The following day we went to visit her with flowers and fruit Seeing her laying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon Lucky enough this Thursday she returned back to the class in a wheelchair to give us lessons We were both deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher 15 Some peoples hold opinion that wealth can bring happiness to them It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honesty labor They work hardly and overcome many difficulties After doing this they feel very happy and pleasing Even their spend money is a kind of happiness But some people believe wealth can t bring him happiness For example when one makes a fortune the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth for him And afterwards they will quarrel with one another trying to share more In my opinion I think there is no doubt whether wealth brings happiness especially in the modern society But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth Remember money is not anything 16 When traveling to Paris on a bus I became very sick Fortunately a well dressing man on the bus helped me great He took me off the bus found out where the doctor s office and took me there himself The next day he came to visit me Because of I didn t speak French well I couldn t talk with him very much However even we couldn t talk we could communicate I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness and he communicated his concern for my healthy Through this experience I have learned what communication can take place without much actual language at all 17 The Magic Tree House series are among the most popular book series ever writing for children It tells a story of two kids Jack and his sister Annie seem to be very excited about finding a tree house in the woods A tree house is magic and can transport him to various places and various times in history It turned out that King Arthur from Camelot needs help However Jack s head librarians Morgan le Fay sends him and Annie to help They end up go to many different places and time periods through history on their adventures which attract to readers a lot The series so far has had over 40 books and is likely to grow 18 Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities Teachers ask students to spend most of their time at studies But if students feel tired they can t pay attention to that they re studying They will be in a bad health It s also not good for his studies In my opinions it s important give students enough time to do outdoor activities Then they will enjoy better health and work hard So please pay more attention to student health and growth 19 Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both work in same office They often walk together to and from work Once they were walking to home together while it suddenly started to rain Tom quickly opened his umbrella and said proud My wife really has great foresight 先见之明 She said this morning it would rain and tell me to carry my umbrella Dick smiled and walked up to her under the protection of the umbrella said Mine has even great foresight She didn t let me carry one as she knew you d share yours to me 参考答案参考答案 1 1 mean 改为 means 2 were 改为 are 3 添加 to 4 将 remembering 改为 remember 5 将 for 改为 of 6 去掉 the 7 将 exercise 改为 exercises 8 将 real 改为 really 9 将 them 改为 it 10 将 that 改为 what 2 1 a an 2 something nothing 3 as like 4 would 前加 who 5 such so 6 make made 7 warm warmth 8 去掉 though 9 helping help 10 they them 3 1 An The 2 mean means 3 trusting trust 4 him them 5 去掉 to 6 really real 7 should 后加 be 8 that as 9 for from 10 but and 4 1 and but 2 giving given 3 at on 4 去掉 they 5 that what 6 they their 7 opinions opinion 8 important 后面加 to 9 hard harder 10 students students 5 1 complete completely 2 in on 3 增加 to 4 can could 5 the a 6 shone shining 7 delighted delighting 8 but and 9 it there 10 去掉 who 6 1 healthy healthily 2 a good 3 for to 或 towards 4 consist consists 5 去掉 because 后的 of 6 your our 7 sport sports 8 fitness fit 9 playing play 10 but or 或 and 7 1 take took 2 have 和 told 之间加 been 3 fit 后加 for 4 join joining 5 closely close 6 so such 7 happy happily 8 that which 9 把 have a fun 中的 a 去掉 10 interests interest 8 1 harder hard 2 student students 3 very so 4 去掉 the 5 concerning concerned 6 she he 7 successful successfully 8 visit visited 9 加 up 10 how why 9 1 beauty beautiful 2 catch caught 3 was were 4 even as 5 better worse 6 couples couple 7 polluting polluted 8 both all 9 去掉 the 10 加上 in 10 1 a an 2 in with 3 houseworks housework 4 and 去掉 5 shop shopping 6 giving give