Unit2TravellingaroundtheWorld

M Mo od du ul le e O On ne e T Tr ra av ve el ll li in ng g U Un ni it t 2 2 T Tr ra av ve el ll li in ng g a ar ro ou un nd d t th he e W Wo or rl ld d 1 课堂导学案课堂导学案 一 导学 跟随老师的脚步 欣赏旅途的诗歌 学习有用的表达 Most of Egypt the northeast of Africa and part of it the southwest of Asia I took many activities there I did the Pyramid the Sphinx the hot air balloon items or goods the ocean of flowers myself in the hotel the fresh air from the ocean find a to a sunbath the diver the jeep the camel the world full of sand the Egyptian temple the pictograph the the the soft wind I wrote some little poems during my journey Love hate sacrifice revenge victory failure All has been drowned in the ash of time Sahara is full of sand Going around with wind I m hanging in the dessert Leaving my light footed print Along the Nile River A long Nile river Alone the Nile River The sunshine over the Nile River Life is peaceful But if you dance There will be wind 二 昆明拥有全中国最美的十个湿地 在那里你可以看到和做到 三 题型示例 M Mo od du ul le e O On ne e T Tr ra av ve el ll li in ng g U Un ni it t 2 2 T Tr ra av ve el ll li in ng g a ar ro ou un nd d t th he e W Wo or rl ld d 2 秘密 启用前 考试时间 5 月 6 日 15 00 16 40 昆明市 2016 届高三复习适应性检测 英 语 第二节 书面表达 满分 25 分 假定你是李华 你的英国网友 Peter 对你上传在 QQ 空间中的湿地公园照片很感 兴趣 他想了解更多信息 请根据以下要点给他回复 1 位置与交通 市区东部 离市中心 20 公里 2 设施与环境 3 休闲活动 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头和结尾已为你写好 参考词汇 湿地公园 wetland park Dear Peter Yours Li Hua 四 如何审题 考虑以下三点 1 2 3 五 如果你是改卷老师 下面这篇习作你给打几分 I m happy to tell something about the wetland park to you It is shown in my photos My photos were posted online the other day The park was built in the east of our city It is about 20 kilometers away from the city center It can be got to easily by bus or subway It is a good place to see different flowers water plants fishes and seabirds The park is built with shops and a medical center So the travelers can look at very beautiful sights and join in easy activities such as boating taking pictures and eating a picnic there If you come to the park I will go there together with you 思考 如何改进得高分 六 实际改进 Step 1 为下划线部分找替换词 I m happy to tell something about the wetland park to you It is shown in my photos My photos were put online the other day The park is in the east of our city It is about 20 kilometers away from the city center It can be got to easily by bus or subway It is a good place to see different flowers water plants fishes and seabirds The park is built with shops and a medical center The travelers can look at very beautiful sights and join in easy activities such as boating taking pictures and eating a picnic there If you come to the park I will go there together with you Step 2 使用定语从句 非谓语 倒装结构 强调句型 虚拟语气改写下文中的句子 I m delighted to introduce something about the wetland park to you which is displayed in my photos which was posted online the other day Located in the east of our city being about 20 kilometers away from the downtown the park can be approached to conveniently by bus or subway Not only is the park a paradise to appreciate various flowers water plants fishes and seabirds but also is equipped with groceries M Mo od du ul le e O On ne e T Tr ra av ve el ll li in ng g U Un ni it t 2 2 T Tr ra av ve el ll li in ng g a ar ro ou un nd d t th he e W Wo or rl ld d 3 and a medical center It is there that the tourists can catch a glimpse of breath taking scenery and take part in relaxing activities including boating photographing and having a feast for mouth Should you pay a visit to the park I would keep you company Step 3 好的逻辑结构需要包含 想一想下列哪个开头最好 为什么 A As your good friend I am glad to introduce the wetland park to you since you are interested in it I took photos of it and posted it online the other day B As your good friend knowing that you are interested in the wetland park which is displayed in my photos posted online the other day I m more than delighted to introduce it to you as follows C Fortunately I can have a chance to inform you of something about the wetland park which was taken pictures of by myself I posted the photos online the other day and attracted your attention 使用有效的连词连接下列细节 located in the east of our city being about 20 kilometers away from the downtown the park can be approached to conveniently by bus or subway not only is the park a paradise to appreciate various flowers water plants fishes and seabirds but also is equipped with groceries and a medical center it is there that the tourists can catch a glimpse of breath taking scenery and take part in relaxing activities including boating photographing and having a feast for mouth 想一想下列哪个结尾最好 为什么 A As your good friend I am glad to introduce the wetland park to you since you are interested in it I took photos of it and posted it online the other day B As your good friend knowing that you are interested in the wetland park which is displayed in my photos posted online the other day I m more than delighted to introduce it to you as follows C Fortunately I can have a chance to inform you of something about the wetland park which was taken pictures of by myself I posted the photos online the other day and attracted your attention 欣赏下列范文 As your good friend knowing that you are interested in the wetland park which is displayed in my photos posted online the other day I m more than delighted to introduce it to you as follows To start with located in the east of our city being about 20 kilometers away from the downtown the park can be approached to conveniently by bus or subway What s more not only is the park a paradise to appreciate various flowers water plants fishes and seabirds but also is equipped with groceries and a medical center Last but not least it is there that the tourists can catch a glimpse of breath taking scenery and take part in relaxing activities including boating photographing and having a feast for mouth According to my introduction above there will be no doubt that you are eager to wander in the park in person Should you pay a visit to the park I would keep