2011高考英语作文强化

请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 高考英语作文完美炮制法高考英语作文完美炮制法 紧扣高紧扣高考英语作文评分标准考英语作文评分标准 高考作文采用总体评分方式 集中在以下四个方面 覆盖了题目提出的所有内容要点和要求 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 内容比较丰富 在使用复杂结构或高级词汇时允许有些许错误 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 全文结构紧凑流畅 高考英语作文完美行文四步骤 STEP1 确定文章框架 包括 时态 语态 格式 展开方式 开头结尾等 STEP2 确定内容要点 包括 主要人物 时间地点 重要细节 合理发挥等 STEP3 正式开始写作 整理思路成篇 行文连贯 STEP4 及粗心犯下的错误 高考英语写作技巧汇总高考英语写作技巧汇总 一 掌握技巧 一 掌握技巧 1 注意篇章结构 合理布局 开始部分 opening paragraph 说出文中的要点 核心问题 正文部分 Body paragraphs 围绕主题开展叙述 讨论 结尾部分 concluding paragraphs 对全文的总结和概括 要做到全文中心突出 段落之间必须是有机地联系 内容完整 连贯 前后呼应 祛除与主题无关 的内容 详细可以参情况考 ESL 资源网站 http www ESL 里面的 writing 部分 2 确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括 是文章的主旨 它能在文章中起到 画 龙点睛 的作用 通常主题句出现 在一篇文章的开头 而后 全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解 释 扩展 写主题句应注意以下几点 归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 提炼出一句具有概括性的话 主题句应具有可读性 抓住 吸引读者 二 巧用连接词 二 巧用连接词 要想使文章有整体性 连贯性 就要学会正确使用连接词 表示罗列增加 First second third First then next after that next finally For one thing for another On the one hand on the other hand Besides what s more in addition furthermore moreover another also Especially In particular 表示时间顺序 now at present recently after afterwards after that after a while in a few days at first in the beginning to begin with later next finally immediately soon suddenly all of a sudden at that moment as soon as the moment form now on from then on at the same time meanwhile till not until before after when while as during 表示解释说明 now in addition for example for instance in this case moreover furthermore in fact actually 表示转折关系 but however while though or otherwise on the contrary on the other hand in contrast despite in spite of even though except for instead of course after all 表示并列关系 or and also too not only but also as well as both and either or neither nor 表示因果关系 because because of since now that as thanks to due to therefore as a result of otherwise so that such that 表示条件关系 as so long as on condition that if unless 表示让步关系 though although as even if even though whether or however 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 whoever whatever whichever wherever whenever no matter how who what which where when whom 表示举例 for example for instance such as take for example 表示比较 be similar to similarly the same as in contrast compared with to just like just as 表示目的 for this reason for this purpose so that in order to so as to 表示强调 in deed in fact surely certainly no doubt without any doubt truly obviously above all 表示概括归纳 in a word in short in brief on the whole generally speaking in my opinion as far as I know As we all know as has been stated as I have shown finally at last in summary in conclusion 三 掌握常用句型 三 掌握常用句型 台湾英语资源网 http www esl tw 里面有很多 下面只列举比较 常用的 1 in order to 为了实现他的梦想 他学习非常努力 He worked very hard in order to realize his dream 2 in order that 她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪 She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o clock 3 so that 他们太累了 除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了 They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn 4 such that 天气非常冷 以致于街上一个人都没有 It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street 5 would rather do than do 他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说 He would rather listen to others than talk himself 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 6 prefer doing to doing 他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告 He prefers making speeches after careful preparation 7 prefer to do rather than do 比起女人 男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物 Compared with women men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping 8 not only but also 在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程 而且还获得了 博士学位 In just three years she had not only finished all the lessons but also received her doctor s degree 9 either or 如果考试过关 你可以买一个 MP3 或去云南玩一趟 You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam 10 Neither nor 他是一个无聊的人 既不爱娱乐 也不爱读书 He is a boring man He likes neither entertainment nor reading 11 as well as 他善良又乐于助人 He was kind as well as helpful 12 as well 这个小孩活泼又可爱 The child is active and funny as well 13 One the other 你看见桌子上有两只笔吗 一支是红色的 另一支是黑色的 Have you seen two pens on the desk One is red the other is black 14 Some others 每个人都很忙 有些在读书 有些在写作 Everyone is busy in classroom Some are reading others are writing 15 make adj n 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 我们所做的可以让世界更美丽 What we do will make the world more beautiful 16 not until 直到他告诉我发生的事 我才了解真相 I didn t know the truth until she told me what happened 17 as if 他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道 He talks a lot as if he knows everything 18 It is no use good doing 假装不懂规则是行不通的 It s no use pretending that you didn t know the rules 19 find it adj to do 我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记 I find it necessary to take down notes while listening 20 It is time since 我已经有两年没见他了 It is two years since I last met him 21 It is time when 我到电影院时已经八点钟了 It was 8 o clock when I got to the cinema 22 It is time before 不久我们就会再见面的 I won t be long before we can meet again 23 It is that 我最珍视的是友谊 It is friendship that I value most 24 It is n adj that to do 每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机 It is a must that everybody should know how to use computers 写作辅导 写作核心句型 核心句型 1 开头 1 The arguer may be right about but he seems to neglect fail to mention 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 take into account that fact that 2 As opposed to Contrary to widely commonly generally held accepted belief ideas views I believe argue that 3 Although many people believe that I doubt wonder whether the argument bears much analysis close examination 4 The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from carry more weight than those of are much greater than A 5 Although it is commonly widely generally held felt accepted agreed that it is unlikely to be true that 6 There is an element of truth in this argument statement but it ignores a deeper and more basic important essential fact reason that 7 It is true that True To be sure Admittedly but this is not to say it is unlikely it doesn t follow it doesn t mean it won t be the case that 8 The main obvious great problem flaw drawback with in this argument view remark is that it is ignorant of blind to the basic bare fact that 9 It would be possible natural reasonable to think believe take the view that but it would be absurd wrong to claim argue that 10 In all the discussion and debate over one important basic fact is generally overlooked neglected 11 There is absolutely in fact no every reason for us to believe accept resist reject that 12 Logical Valid Sound as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it it appears insignificant absurd when is taken into consideration account 13 To assume suggest that is far from being proved to miss the point 14 A close careful inspection examination scrutiny of this argument would reveal how flimsy groundless fallacious it is 15 On the surface At first thought it this may seem a sound an attractive suggestion solution idea but careful weighing on the mind on closer analysis on second thought we find that 16 Too much emphasis placed on attention paid to importance attached to may obscure overlook neglect other facts 17 The danger problem fact truth point is that 18 What the arguer fails to understand consider mention is that 19 We don t have to look very far to see find out the truth validity of this 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 argument proposition 20 However just logical sound valid this argument may be it only skims the surface of the problem 2 正文 1 Although the popular belief is that a current new recent study survey poll investigation indicates shows demonstrates that 2 Common sense tells us that 3 The increase change failure success in mainly largely partly results from arises from is because of 4 The increase change failure success in is due to owing to attributable to the fact that 5 Many people would claim that 6 One may attribute ascribe owe the increase decrease change to but is not by itself an adequate explanation 7 One of the reasons given for is that 8 What is also worth noticing is that 9 There are many different several a number of a variety of causes reasons for this dramatic marked significant growth change decline increase in First Second Finally 10 There is no evidence to suggest that 11 Why are is do did For one thing For another 12 Another reason why I dispute the above statement is that 13 It gives rise to lead to bring create a host of problems consequences 14 There are numerous reasons why and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones 15 It will exert have produce profound far reaching remarkable considerable beneficial favorable undesirable disastrous effect influence on 16 A multitude of factors could account for contribute to lead to result in influence the change increase decrease success failure development in 17 In 1999 it increased rose jumped shot up from 5 to 10 percent of the total to 15 percent by 15 percent 18 By comparison with 1998 it decreased dropped fell from 10 to 5 percent to 15 percent by 15 percent 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 19 It account for 15 percent of the total 20 There were 100 traffic accidents in April and increase of 5 percent in a five month period 21 By 1999 only less than more than almost about over as many as three quarters 40 percent of one out of five one in four college population graduates housewives as against as compared with last year 1998 preferred to liked 3 结尾 1 From what has been discussed above Taking into account all these factors Judging from all evidence offered we may safely draw reach come to arrive at the conclusion that 2 All the evidence analysis supports justifies confirms warrants points to a n unshakable unmistakable sound just conclusion that 3 It is high time that we place lay put great special considerable emphasis on the improvement development increase promotion of 4 It is high time that we put an end to the deep seated unhealthy undesirable deplorable situation tendency phenomenon of 5 We must look search all cry for an immediate action method measure because the present current situation phenomenon tendency state attitude of if permitted allowed to continue proceed will surely certainly lead to result in the end destruction heavy cost of 6 There is no easy immediate effective solution approach answer remedy to the problem of but might be useful helpful beneficial 7 No easy method solution recipe remedy can be at hand found guaranteed to solve resolve tackle the problem of but the common general public recognition of realization of awareness of commitment to the necessity importance significance of might be the first step towards change on the right way in the right direction 8 Following these methods suggestions may not guarantee the success in solution to but the pay off will be worth the effort 9 Obviously Clearly No doubt if we ignore are blind to the problem there is every chance that 10 Unless there is a common realization of general commitment to it is very 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 likely the chances are good that 11 There is little doubt no denying that serous special adequate immediate further attention must be called paid devoted to the problem of 12 It is necessary essential fundamental that effective quick proper action steps measures remedies should be taken to prevent correct check end fight the situation tendency phenomenon 13 It is hoped suggested recommended that great continuous persistent sustained corporate efforts should be make to control check halt promote the growth increase rise of 14 It is hoped that great efforts should be directed to expended on focused on finding developing improving 15 It remains to be seen whether but the prospect outlook is not quite encouraging that rosy 16 Anyhow wider more education publicity should be given to the possible potential grave serious pernicious consequences effects of 17 To reverse check control the trend tendency is not a light task an easy job and it requires demands involves entails a different state of main towards attitude towards outlook on 18 For these reasons I strongly recommend that 19 For the reasons given above I feel that 现将文中关于爱心这一主题的词汇总结如下 emotional strength 情感的力量 the noblest of human emotions 人类最高尚的情感 no thought of gain 不计得失 the lamp of love 爱心之灯 help the victims of natural disasters 支援自然灾害受害者 donate whatever they can 倾囊相助 help their needy fellow citizens 帮助有需要的同胞 be ready to give a helping hand 随时准备伸出援手 When we use the word love we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex which is a very narrow definition of the word Love is emotional 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 strength which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes In fact throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions As an example of the power of love we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year Although their incomes are still low by international standards people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can be it money or goods to help their needy fellow citizens Moreover they do this with no thought of gain for themselves In my opinion the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers In this way we can help to make the world a better place for the darker the shadows of sorrow become the more brightly the lamp of love shines 常用套语 套语指流行的公式化语言 在写作中适当使用颇有必要 如在商业 信函结尾 期望对方早日回复的表达方式就要遵循套语的基本模式 使表达规范得体 下面试举几个例子 Kindly favor us with an early reply 请早日赐复 Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated 如能及时回复 将不胜感谢 We look forward to hearing from you soon 早日回复 We are expecting your prompt reply 急盼回复 Please have the kindness to answer this letter quickly 请早日回信 Kindly let us have your reply at your earliest convenience 请在您方便时尽早 赐函 We would appreciate it if you could respond right away 如能即刻回复 将不 胜感谢 当前流行应试写作模板 即套语的使用贯穿文章始终 为考生提供 万能公式型的文章主架 每句表达皆由固定套语框定 考生只要背 下套用句型 过渡词语 在考试中根据特定考题填充具体内容 这 种应试策略使写出的文章矫揉造作 生硬刻板 虽可以让考生及格 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 过关 但绝对得不到高分 套语的过多使用不妨可以比作大海中的 救生圈 有了它 仅仅可以让不擅游泳者保全性命 却无法自在畅 游 一展泳姿 一般而言 套语较为空洞 如使用过多 文章容易 流于空泛 言之无物 写作宜虚实结合 形式与内容相统一 下例 是一篇比较在家学习与入校读书谁优谁劣的范文 文中巧妙地使用 了一些固定句式和过渡词语 不仅增强了表达效果 而且实现了形 式与内容的统一 There are two major arguments that can be made for studying at home First as advances in the electronic media have brought the whole world of scholarship into the home via the Internet and educational courses on TV the classroom is no longer the only place for acquiring knowledge Second it is widely held that a person studies better in the familiar surroundings of his own home and when he can arrange his own study time But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are advantages to studying in the classroom too Being surrounded by people of roughly the same abilities and interests can be a great stimulus to acquiring knowledge whereas studying in solitude at home is boring for many people More importantly there can be no substitute for a good teacher who must not only be able to impart facts and theories but also to appraise and encourage his students Given the choice between these two methods of learning I prefer the classroom This is because I am the sort of person who finds it difficult to concentrate on study in the midst of household chores and disturbances from visitors and telephone calls The classroom environment I feel is the only one in which most people feel comfortable applying all their energies to the all important task of acquiring knowledge 关于在家学习 我们可以提出两个主要论点 第一 由于电子媒体 方面取得的进步把整个世界的知识通过互联网和电视上的教育课程 带入了家庭 教室不再是惟一获取知识的场所 第二 人们普遍认 为 在自己家里这样熟悉的环境中 并且能自己安排学习时间 一 个人能学得更好 但是 我们不能忽视在教室里学习也有好处这一事实 周围都是能 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 力相近和兴趣相投的人可能会对获取知识形成巨大的刺激 而对很 多人来说孤独一人在家学习会有些枯燥乏味 更重要的是 没有什 么可以替代一个好老师 他不仅能够传道授业 而且能够评估并鼓 励学生 如果在两种学习方法中选择 我更喜欢在教室里学习 因为我是那 种很难在家务琐事 客人 电话的打扰下集中注意力学习的人 我 认为大多数人只有在教室里才能把全部精力放在获取知识这件十分 重要的工作上 精彩句子 精彩句子指文章中句式优美 蕴含哲理的句子 精彩句子的背诵有 助于写作时的引用和模仿 如在阅读美国前总统约翰 肯尼迪 John F Kennedy 的就职演说 Inaugural Address 时 可以记住诸如 Ask not what your country can do for you ask what you can do for your country 不要问国 家能为你做什么 而要问你能为国家做什么 这样的传世佳句 当 你写关于爱国 patriotism 主题的作文时 则可以适时引用 现仍以上 面谈 爱心 的文章为例 其中值得背诵的句子为数不少 摘录如下 Love is emotional strength which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes 爱心是情感的力量 不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗 爱心都能支撑 我们 People all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can be it money or goods to help their needy fellow citizens 全国人民毫不犹豫地倾囊相助 不管是钱还是物 帮助那些有需 要的同胞 The best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are 表达爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人 The darker the shadows of sorrow become the more brightly the lamp of love shines 悲伤的阴影越黑暗 爱心之灯的光芒就越闪亮 优秀段落 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 请上请上 或上百度或上百度 输入输入 沈阳英语家教吴军沈阳英语家教吴军 查询查询 阅读时 我们经常会碰到一些过目难忘的段落 这些段落或者表达 流畅 文笔优美 或者逻辑缜密 结构严谨 根据表达需要 有不 同的功能段落 如现象说明段 观点陈述段 原因列举段 利弊解 释段 结论归纳段 趋势预测段 措施建议段等 有些优秀段落可 以作为写作的功能段落加以背诵 对于我们拓展思路 规范行文大 有裨益 在背诵过程中 熟练掌握各种功能段落的行文规则 自己 在表达时就能驾轻就熟 下面仅举观点陈述段和措施建议段各一例 观点陈述段 陈述 民族文化应该成为世界文化 的观点 A culture of one nation may become international which is beneficial for all mankind Since China has opened its doors widely to the outside world many people from different countries want to visit China They will come to accept and love Chinese culture as a whole In addition Chinese culture should be shared generously with foreign people who show great interest in it Meanwhile as more and more foreigners come to China they bring aspects of their own culture to share with the Chinese people In this way people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire a be