高中英语 写作园地3 友谊话题写作 外研版选修61.doc

写作园地友谊话题写作感悟范文良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键。某报社就“中学生交友？”的话题征稿。假如你是王力，你们班对此话题展开了讨论，请你根据讨论的情况以及你对如何交友的看法撰写一篇稿件，以书信的形式发给该报社编辑。注意：词数：120左右。书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear editor，Recently our class have had a heated discussion on making friends between middle school students._ _Yours，Wang Li范文Dear editor，Recently our class have had a heated discussion on making friends between middle school students.A good personal relationship, as we all know, plays an important role in building the harmonious society.Many students suggest that we should make friends with the person who are of great benefit to our studies, so we will help each other, learn from each other and make greater progress in our studies. Some argue that we should have friends related to our life. Whenever we have difficulty in dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid us of the problems.In addition, others hold the view that we are supposed to have some friends who can listen to us attentively and share our bitterness and joy, which can help us get out of trouble.What I want to stress is that each of us ought to have a true friend. When disagreement does occur, its sensible to talk it over with each other.Friendship is to be strengthened by truth and devotion.Yours，Wang Li技法讨论本模块要求写一篇与“友谊”相关的作文，其目的主要是发表一下对友谊的看法。发表对“友谊”的看法属于对某一话题发表观点的作文，该类作文是高考作文常见命题方式。如：2007年广东的以“谁是你的偶像”为题作文、2009年江西的以“Turning a bad mood into a good one”为题的作文、2010年江苏的介绍自己学英语的情况并对学校英语教学提建议等。此类作文的写作步骤如下：1仔细审题，确定文章结构本类作文一般可分为三部分，第一部分引出话题，第二部分陈述友谊的重要性，最后一部分提出自己的观点和建议。2根据需要确定时态本类作文的主题为人际关系、友情，培养学生积极的友谊观及相关的语言技能，因此应以一般现在时为主。 黄金表达A friend that you buy with presents will be bought from you.Without confidence there is no friendship.Good company on the road is the shortest cut.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Without a friend, the world is a wilderness.Friendship is like winethe older the better.True friendship lasts forever.All are not friends that speak us fair.Friendship is to be strengthened by truth and devotion.A little help is worth a deal of pity.Be slow in choosing a friend, slower in changing.A real friend never gets in your way, unless you happen to be on the way down.We shall never have friends if we expect to find them without fault.亮点分析：亮点一：句中运用as we all know引出建立良好的人际关系的重要性。亮点二：句中使用suggest引出一些人提出的交友建议，suggest后的宾语从句以及who引导的定语从句提升了表达的档次。亮点三：句中argue的使用引出了另一部分人交友的观点。亮点四：句中have difficulty in doing sth.结构的运用使得句子的结构更加高级。亮点五：句中hold the view that的使用引出了其他人的交友观点。亮点六：句中stress的使用引出了作者自己的交友观点。亮点七：句中作者使用its sensible to.结构针对产生分歧时给出了相应的建议。类文演练某英文报在开展关于友谊的讨论。讨论中有这样一个问题：“你正在复习功课，你的一个朋友请你陪他上街购物。你去还是不去？”假设你是李华，在昨天下午的班会课上，你们班就这个问题进行了讨论。你的同学李雷和汤姆的观点截然不同。请你根据下表所列的观点，用英语写一篇短文，给该英文报投稿。李雷的观点是朋友就不能拒绝其要求；为朋友即使学习有所影响，也没有关系。汤姆的观点朋友的请求也不能都答应；学习比购物更重要。你的观点注意：1.开头和结尾已经为你写好，但不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3词数：120左右。Dear Editor，_Yours，Li Hua联想词汇1. have a _ on 关于的讨论答案：discussion2. _ ones request 应某人要求答案：at3. _ ones requests 满足某人要求答案：meet4. _ some extent 在某种程度上答案：to5. that _ 视情况而定答案：depends连词成句1. _ with your friend _ while you are going over your lesson?你复习功课时朋友要求与你去购物，你会去吗？答案：Would you go shopping; at his request2. _， either Li Lei or Tom is right_.依我看，在某种程度上李雷和汤姆的观点都对。答案：In my opinion; to some extent连句成章_答案：Dear_Editor，Yesterday afternoon, we had a discussion on the question：“Would you go shopping with your friend at his request while you are going over your lessons？”My classmates Li Lei and Tom had different viewpoints. Li Lei thought that he couldnt refuse his friends requests even though his studies would be affected. But Tom didnt think so. He said he wouldnt meet all requests from his friends, and studying was more important t