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GUIDED WRITING 如何用英语介绍名人如何用英语介绍名人 单元写作呈现 Use the timeline below to write a summary of Nelson Mandela s life or a short paragraph about your ideas on Nelson Mandela Life of Nelson Mandela 18 7 1918born near Transkei South Africa 1937 entered university but did not complete degree 1940 completed law degree at the university 1944 formed ANC Youth League 1952 set up law office to help poor black people in Johannesburg later this year law office closed by government because he attacked anti black laws 1961 government by and for white people set up in South Africa 1962 sentenced to five years hard labour for encouraging violence against anti black laws 1963 ANC began to blow up buildings 1964 sentenced to prison for life on Robben Island for being one of the ANC leaders 1982 moved to a prison in Cape Town 1990 released from prison 1991 became President of the ANC 1993 won the Nobel Peace Prize 1994 became President of South Africa 1999 写作分析 本单元写作要求用英语介绍一位名人 Description of a famous person 写他 她在所处的环境中的作用和影响 如实地表达对名人的所见 所闻 所思 所感 并把这些放在他 她所处的环境中 不虚构 不夸张 不回避 不掩饰 事迹材料是介绍名人的重要依据 要精于对名人事迹的发掘 在发掘到 的材料中恰当地裁剪出名人一生中最能表现其思想性格特点的材料 审题要素 1 确定文体 这是一篇介绍纳尔逊 曼德拉 Nelson Mandela 的记叙文 2 主体时态 用一般过去时 3 主体人称 使用第三人称 4 内容要点 Nelson Mandela s life and achievements Your opinion on Nelson Mandela 思路引导 首先 对纳尔逊 曼德拉出生的时间 地点或家庭背景等进行介绍 时 态用一般过去时 其次 介绍纳尔逊 曼德拉的主要经历 贡献和成就等 写作时通常按 照时间顺序来写 时态常用一般过去时 最后 对纳尔逊 曼德拉给予评价 时态用一般现在时 参考范文 Nelson Mandela Nelson Mandela was born on July 18 1918 near Transkei South Africa He devoted all his life to realizing his dream of making black and white people equal In 1944 he formed the ANC Youth League to call on people to struggle for their rights In 1952 he opened a law office to help poor black people Black people loved him In 1962 Mandela encouraged people to use violence against anti black laws to get their rights so he was sentenced to 5 years hard labour One year later he led black people to blow up some government buildings so he was sentenced to prison for life on Robben Island in 1964 One year after his release he became President of the ANC and won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 In 1994 he became President of South Africa I think he