英语四级作文高分要诀

作文高分要诀作文高分要诀 1 写作高分要诀 1 1 卷面要整洁卷面要整洁 1 2 字数要达标字数要达标 作文字数的要求一般在 150 词左右 作文字数若少于 130 词 该篇作文即使写得不错也很难得高分 但这也并不 是说写得越长越好 因为 1 议论文要求结构严谨 用词正式 语言简练 考 生很难在有限的时间内既要注意以上方面又要语言表达清 楚 2 在篇幅有限的情况下 考生如果开始时 洋洋洒洒 不免会在结尾时 虎头蛇尾 文章的质量就会大打折扣 3 阅卷教师在阅读时既要 保质 又要 保量 如果考 生的作文篇幅大大超过所规定字数 不免会出现前两种情 况 与此同时影响了阅卷教师的阅卷速度 也波及了阅卷 教师的情绪 考试 结果 可想而知 1 3 文体要统一文体要统一 正式文体的文章不宜用非正式的语句 常发现有的考 生在一篇很正式的议论文中用以下的句子结束本文 OK this is what I want to say That s my opinion Do you agree with me That s all thank you 等等 使得文章 不伦不类 1 4 主题要突出主题要突出 标题如果是 Pollution from Cars 或 Air Pollution 以下段落的阐述显得有些赘述 Part of this problem is the world s exploding population A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air Besides land and water pollution has also increased Pollution is in fact threatening our health our happiness and our civilization 尤其是 Besides land and water pollution has also increased 一句 还有点 跑题 1 5 文字要连贯文字要连贯 一篇好文章要注意连贯性 连贯性主要体现在句子与 句子 段落与段落的衔接上 这种衔接要通过过渡词语来 实现 以达到文章通顺 语言流畅 例如 It is clear that television news can vividly bring to us dramatic events of importance such as wars games and so on but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation On the contrary print news excels in its ability to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit though it cannot compete with television visually Besides television is essentially a passive medium such as but because of on the contrary though besides 这些过渡词把句子从语义上连接起来 形成一个有机的整 体 读起来犹如行云流水自然酣畅 Transitional Devices Connecting Words Transitional devices are like bridges between parts of your paper They are cues that help the reader to interpret ideas in the way that you as a writer want them to understand Transitional devices help you carry over a thought from one sentence to another from one idea to another or from one paragraph to another with words or phrases And finally transitional devices link your sentences and paragraphs together smoothly so that there are no abrupt jumps or breaks between ideas There are several types of transitional devices and each category leads your reader to make certain connections or assumptions about the areas you are connecting Some lead your reader forward and imply the building of an idea or thought while others make your reader compare ideas or draw conclusions from the preceding thoughts Here is a list of some common transitional devices that can be used to cue your reader in a given way To Add and again and then besides equally important finally further furthermore nor too next lastly what s more moreover in addition first second etc To Compare whereas but yet on the other hand however nevertheless on the other hand on the contrary by comparison where compared to up against balanced against vis a vis but although conversely meanwhile after all in contrast although this may be true To Prove because for since for the same reason obviously evidently furthermore moreover besides indeed in fact in addition in any case that is To Show Exception yet still however nevertheless in spite of despite of course once in a while sometimes To Show Time immediately thereafter soon after a few hours finally then later previously formerly first second etc next and then To Repeat in brief as I have said as I have noted as has been noted To Emphasize definitely extremely obviously in fact indeed in any case absolutely positively naturally surprisingly always forever perennially eternally never emphatically unquestionably without a doubt certainly undeniably without reservation To Show Sequence first second third and so forth A B C and so forth next then following this at this time now at this point after afterward subsequently finally consequently previously before this simultaneously concurrently thus therefore hence next and then soon To Give an Example for example for instance in this case in another case on this occasion in this situation take the case of to demonstrate to illustrate as an illustration to illustrate To Summarize or Conclude in brief on the whole summing up to conclude in conclusion as I have shown as I have said hence therefore accord 1 6 首尾要呼应首尾要呼应 写作时注意到上述几项可以为文章增色添彩 用阅卷 者的行话为 闪光点 也就是说是加分的因素 除此而外 更重要的一点是要注意文章的完整性 即首尾要呼应 例 如 Health As the proverb says No one knows the value of health until he loses it In other words nothing is more valuable than health In conclusion if you want your wish to come true health is the most important ingredient of your success 文章第一句和最后一句均说明健康的重要性 使首尾 遥相互应 使文章表达主题准确 完整 平时总有很多同学询问同样的一个问题 我怎样才能 够在短期时间内提高我的写作水平 答案其实是否定的 首先我们必须明确 冰冻三尺 非一日之寒 英语学习是 一个长期积累的过程 短期的突击无异于舍本逐末 杯水 车薪 然而 这并不意味着我们不能够通过掌握考试规律 来调整我们的临考状态 提高我们的应考能力 以下 就 如何利用应试规律 是大限度地发挥同学们的写作水平谈 几点看法 1 心理 古人云 不战而屈人之兵 胜败很大程度上取决于心 理因素 随着考试改革的深入 会有更多 更新 更难的 题目出现 这样就要求我们有处变不惊的能力 即使是出 现某种没有预料到的题型 考生也应该及时调整心态 从 容不迫地应答 事实上 历史经验证明 题目要求越高 难度越大 考生的发挥余地也就越大 挑战和机遇是成正 比的 2 评分 知已知彼 百战不殆 熟悉老师的评分习惯对于考生 正常 甚至是超常发挥自身水平也十分有益 正常驻情况 下 阅卷老师要领会贯彻考试规定的评分原则 依照文章 的结构和语言水平进行评分 然而 除此以外 有 两个基 本点 我们也需要给予足够的重视 闪光点和语法点 在 一篇出类拔萃的范文中 我们往往可以看到像提问法 谚 语法 从句 并列句 路线句型 插入语 名词化 被动 语态等等闪光点 而在一篇低分例文中基本的语言错误则 数不胜数 3 审题 磨刀不误砍柴工 在落笔前花两三分钟时间进行构思 既有利于理清行文思路 也避免了差之毫厘 失之千里的 遗憾 即使文章本身瑞不同凡响 语惊四座 最终也只会 是竹篮打水的效果 4 卷面 对于像作文这样的主观题而言 考生与阅览室卷老师 是无形中彼此互动 相互影响 一个考生可以做的 首先 是通过卷面给阅卷老师下意识地传达个人信息 用笔的颜 色 深蓝色使人心情放松愉快 粗细 粗线条给人以安全 感 整齐划一的格式 段首一律顶格或一律空两格 明 了的段落感 每段空一行 清晰的字数感 一行以十字为 宜 工整的字迹都会给任何阅览室读者留下深刻的下面印 象 从而使考生先发制人 取得先机 5 结构 有始有终 首尾照应 是任何一篇好文章的基本标准 之一 考生要给读者展现一个清楚的结构 首段提出观点 中间段阐述理由 结尾段要温故而知新 回顾第一段的大 致内容 6 表达 言之无文 行而不远 语言作为评分原则中的基本要 素之一 在作文评分过程中具有决定作用 有评分老师指 出 重要的并不在于考生写了什么 而在于考生是怎么表 达的 检查 行百里者九十 一篇成功的作文少不了反复推敲 一 再修改 然而 由于考试时间和条件等诸多因素的限制 考生绝对需要慎重对待作文的检查和修改 我们必须明确 考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的即可 拼写正 确 看文章中是否有错字和糊乱涂改 搭配正确 语法正 确 特别是人称 时态 和单复数的三 一致 此外 给阅卷老师留下美好的印象可以帮助考生取得 高分 老师们的阅卷过程是郁闷枯燥的 使自己的文章大 约 1 分钟的阅读时间内 迅速地在他们的脑海中形成较多 的兴奋点 是至关重要的 首先 作文的写作时间为 30 分 钟 合理的时间安排为 8 18 4 前面的 8 分钟用来读题审 题 构思并列提纲 接着的 18 分钟用来按照提纲写作 最 后 4 分钟用来检查及润色 合理的时间安排是写出优秀作 文的必不可少的第一步 其次 卷面的设置很关键 要想让阅卷老师对你的作 文试卷有一种赏心悦目的感觉 作文的排版应该不多于 2 3 不少于 1 3 要留有余地 不要将卷面写得密密麻麻 字体不要过大或过小 字迹要工整 再次 除了形式之外 作文的内容也尤其重要 阅读 老师阅卷一般是从第一段看语言 从第二段看结构 这就 要求考生重视开头部份以及每一段的第一句 不要出现任 何的拼写或语法错误 除了语言的地道之外 还要求作文 有层次感 可以用一系列表示逻辑关系的连词来表示思路 的清晰 如 and however furthermore also what s more 等 此外 还可以用对等的句式结构 如 for one thing for another on the one hand on the other hand 等来增加文章的层 次感 2 常用词汇或句型常用词汇或句型 2 1 常用句型常用句型 典型句型典型句型 1 When asked about the people Other people as I view differently Sample When asked what kind of career they will pursue upon graduation most of college students say that they would choose a job which will bring them a lot of money and a comfortable life Working in a big bank or company is what they desire But I think quite differently I would prefer a career which will help realize my potentials 典型句型典型句型 2 Now people that there is whether overwhelming majority of most quite a few think believe answer regard view see think of quite a bit a lot of the majority of most believe think feel Although Admittedly no little evidence it is questioned 真题真题 1992 My view on Reading Extensively There is some feeling nowadays that reading is not as necessary as it once was Radio and especially television have taken over many of the functions once served by print Admittedly television and radio serve as some functions extremely well But it may be seriously questioned whether the advent of modern communication media had much enhanced our intellectual skills 典型句型典型句型 3 Now it is that They that but I whether 典型句型典型句型 4 Recently the has commonly generally widely accepted recognized acknowledged claim believe argue Wonder doubt Phenomenon of Problem of Rise in draw aroused public world wide attention caused aroused wide considerable international concern 典型句型典型句型 5 Recently the of has been Sample The problem of development vs environment has now been in the limelight Nowhere is the clash more visible than in china where the world s largest population faces pollution deforestation and rain on a large scale 典型句型典型句型 6 Now people in numbers are to that 典型句型典型句型 7 Now there is growing on the part of people of the 典型句型典型句型 8 such is the This has been by more and more people Sample Great minds must be ready not only to take the issue problem brought into focus brought to public attention increasing significant beginning coming accept be aware awareness recognition necessity importance to of Awareness of ignorance is the beginning of wisdom Familiar notions are often those lease examined Genius is 2 percent inspiration and 98 percent perspiration opinion remark made by Bacon Edison One of the great men view remark shared confirmed now time and again opportunity but to make them Colton a great writer once remarked But it still has a profound significance now To a person in whose lifetime opportunities are not many to make opportunities is more essential to his success Sample Education is not complete with graduation Such is the opinion of Mortimer J Adier a great American philosopher Now more and more people share his opinion No college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate and no one should be content to simply end his education with high school education or college education Education is a lifetime study Complaint commented criticized He is hardly alone in the experience Many people have shared the experience like this 典型句型典型句型 9 That s how one Sample All I have learnt in college is junk That s how one college graduate described his frustration in looking for a job He is hardly alone in the experience Actually there are thousands of college graduates who complain that the degree they took away can t help them to secure a rewarding job and commented complaint criticized He is hardly alone in the experience Many people have shared the experience like this the knowledge they acquired in class cant be transformed into useful job skills 典型句型典型句型 10 as But With the people 典型句型典型句型 11 Several ago people Now Why 真题真题 1995 Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part time job in their spare time Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend Several years ago people were often a little surprised when they heard that a college student was doing a part time job Why Maybe he is short of money they thought Nowadays it is not an uncommon occurrence that college students are working as tutors salesmen and tour guides Many students put up advertisements on bulletin boards or lamp posts to search for odd jobs Why do many students show great For years Until recently had been was seen viewed regarded That is changing now People are taking a fresh look at it growing mounting demand for interested in concern over years decades do people has such change taken places interest in a part time or a summer job 典型句型典型句型 12 vary greatly Some as Others Sample Should doctors ever lie to benefit their patients to speed recovery or to conceal the approach of death People s attitude toward the doctor s lie varies from person to person Some see important reasons to lie for the patient s own sake others think that truthful information should not be denied or distorted 典型句型典型句型 13 There are probably reasons for this in Should What Opinions of Attitude toward think of regard view argue believe claim several a number of a variety of dramatic significant marked increase decline growth First Second 典型句型典型句型 14 Why Perhaps the reason is Sample Why is there an explosive growth in general participation in sports One reason is a national hunger for physical fit which is manifested in city parks on early mornings But what accounts for most of the enthusiasm is that sports and games are a healthy but cheap way to fill their leisure time which has increased as working hours have reduced now 典型句型典型句型 15 These factors coupled with the of Sample It is commonly accepted belief that interest in English coupled with the growing awareness of its role in seeking highly paid position in big corporations leads to nationwide enthusiasm for learning English 典型句型典型句型 have did are For one reason To begin with One reason is For another In the second place Another reason is main primary fundamental growth change recognition realization 16 According to 典型句型典型句型 17 More than three quarters people preferred compared with 20 percent last year About 80 percent of the college bound said they still lacked enough facts to make an informal decision as to which college they should apply for Over two thirds wanted to know more about academic programs student activities faculty strengths and weaknesses and living accommodations on campus 典型句型典型句型 18 Sample It is a good thing to extend human life but is it a good to extend human suffering Take the case of a man who is so ailing that he has lost all his faculties He is in hospital in an unconscious state with little chance of coming round but he is kept alive by artificial means for an indefinite period Everyone his relatives and even the doctors agree that death will bring release Indeed the patient himself would agree if he were in a a the new recent latest survey census in 2001 from 1990 to 2001 increased rose dropped x percent at a rate of x percent an average of x percent The most dramatic example of this is This offers a typical example of this As an illustration we may take position to give voice to his feeling Yet everything is done to perpetuate what has become a meaningless existence 典型句型典型句型 19 Just imagine what would be like 真题真题 1999 A major advantage disadvantage of Advertising on TV It is hardly possible not to read advertisements these days And what fun they often are too Just think what a railway station or a newspaper would like without advertisements Would you enjoy gazing at a blank wall or reading railway laws while waiting for a train Would you like to read only closely printed columns of news in your daily paper A cheerful witty advertisement makes suck a difference to a drab wall or newspaper full of the daily ration of calamities 20 We must the fact that 21 There is evidence Sample There is statistical evidence that personal choice in if when without accept admit recognize indisputable undeniable statistical sufficient considerable that to show that in favor of relation to behaviors plays an important role in one s health An estimated 90 percent of all illness may be preventable if individuals would make sound personal health choices based upon current knowledge 22 have that Sample Physically the most important value of exercise is the way it trains your heart Studies have shown that people who continue to exercise late into adult life live longer and are less likely to die from heart attacks 典型句型典型句型 23 we may the conclusion that 典型句型典型句型 24 In it is more we should must Sample In conclusion health is more important than wealth Those who are rich but lose their health are no more happy and fortunate than those who are poor If you want your wish to come true health is the most important ingredient of your Tests Studies Investigations showed revealed indicated From what has been discussed above Taking into account of all these factors Judging from all evidence offered safely reasonably arrive at reach summary conclusion a word important valuable success 典型句型典型句型 25 It might be time to take the of and to put emphasis on the of Sample Years ago some experts warned us that improved standard of living may lead to decline in the moral standard It is high time for all of us to take this message to heart and to lay new emphasis on the national morality while enjoying the richest life we ever have 典型句型典型句型 26 It s that efforts should be Sample College athletics plays such a vital role that it deserves close attention and persistent effort It is suggested that physical training should be regarded as required course wedged into college curricula however crowded it may be and that a fair share of college budget should be devoted to athletic programs We sincerely hope that this suggestion will be a warning advice great considerable improvement promotion development hoped suggested considerable sustained made focused on the attempt commitment that all colleges and universities will take up 典型句型典型句型 27 it still there are ways The most is Another is Still another one is Sample Although the present decline in students class attendance can not be solved immediately maintaining student attention and interest is still a big challenge for the classroom lectures One way for professors to meet the challenge is to brighten the lectures with anecdotes for comic relief Another way is to integrate visuals into classroom activities Still another way is to punctuate the lectures with class discussion 2 2 英语作文活用句型 用于文章主题句用于文章主题句 1 不用说 It goes without saying that 子句 It is needless to say that 子句 It is obvious that 子句 Obviously S V 例 不用说早睡早起是值得的 While Although cannot be solved immediately is affected by many factors is simpler to say than to do common popular way method It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours 2 是不可能的 无法 There is no V ing There is no way of V ing There is no possibility of V ing It is impossible to V It is out of the question to V It is out of the question to V 例 不可否认成功的事业关键在于健康的身心 There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind 3 我深信 I am greatly convinced that 子句 I am greatly assured that 句子 例 深信预防好过治疗 I am really convinced that prevention is better than cure 4 在各种 之中 Among various kinds of Of all the 例 在各种运动 中 我尤其喜欢慢跑 Among various kinds of sports I like jogging in particular 5 是很容易证明的 It an be easily proved that 子句 例 时间最珍贵是很容易证明 的 It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time 6 无论如何强调都不为过 can not be overemphasized 例 交通安全的重要性无论如何强调郡不为过 The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized 7 毫无疑问地 There is no doubt that 子句 例 毫无疑间地近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的 问题 There is no doubt that near Sightedness is a serious problem among the youth our country 8 根据我个人经验 According to my personal experience Based on my personal experience 例 据我个人经验 微笑己带给我许多好处 9 在我认识的人当中 也许没有一个人比 更值得我尊 敬 Of all the people I know perhaps none deserves my respect more than Miss Chang my