英语四级记叙文要点

记叙文写作方法与技巧记叙文写作方法与技巧 二 六大要素二 六大要素时间 time 地点 place 人物 character 事件的原因 cause 经过 process 和 结果 effect 不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头 否则文章会显得单调沉闷 The results of the college entrance examination came I tore open the envelope As soon as I saw the score tears streamed down my face I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day All was over What is the meaning to live on earth For the first time I thought of death of being a vagrant and of being single all my life I was only seventeen Wasn t it cruel to me My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace He was angry beyond words My mother kept silent and often I saw her in tears Horror filled the house 4 尽量多使用表示转折 顺接 因果和时间的连接词尽量多使用表示转折 顺接 因果和时间的连接词 如first second moreover for one thing for another on the one hand on the other hand等 名词化手段 用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分 然后使这个名词 或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分 以达到合并句子的目的 如 We were very much surprised Mary refused the invitation We were very much surprised at by Mary s refusal of the invitation 2 定语化手段 根据语义关系 可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分 分 词短语 定语从句等 如 The winnerwas in no mood for speeches The winner was hot and tired Thewinner hot and tired was in no mood for speeches 转换成形容词短 语 七 范文分析七 范文分析 Directions Now you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the title My Best Friend You should write at least 100 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese 1 简要介绍你最好的朋友 2 你们之间的故事 3 你对朋友的理解 范文 范文 My Best Friend Upon the words best friend a figure Jumps into my mind jump 这个词使一个人物形象 活灵活现地展现在读者眼前 Zhang Ye my schoolmate in senior high school and also my best friend During the three years in high school we shared countless moments of laughter and tears joy and sorrow 排比句式能使表达更有力度 而且将与朋友的共同经历描绘得丰富多 彩 She is of medium height and slim figure Though not strong she is really a girl with amazing stamina 毅力 Despite the similarities in our outlook on life and living it is always she the physically weaker one who encouraged and urged me to finish some tasks when I attempted to give up When we were preparing for the National Entrance Exam she cheered me up emotionally and would give me a hand whenever I was in trouble But for everything she did for me I couldn t have had this opportunity to give a decent job with a decent pay After the exam she got enrolled by Tsinghua University in Beijing while I went to a college in south China 对 3 年中两人共同 勉励 共同奋斗经历的叙述为读者展示了一段难忘的人生时光 确实不愧为 best friend For the past several years we have been in touch and share everything we are experiencing sad or happy dull or exciting True friendship lasts life long Friendship is a magic It can melt the ice in one s heart and blow away the mist on one s mind It can inspire others and outdo the self 再次应用排比句式表达了对友 谊真谛的理解 感人至深 I believe the friendship between Zhang Ye and me will be the life time beacon for both of us 八 参考模版八 参考模版 中心模板英文模板教师笔记 一 背景描述段 1 每个人都有挥之不去的难 1 Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it 2 To 一 背景描述段要点 1 精辟开头 说明背 忘记忆 2 对我来说 这件 事发生在 时间和地点 我 对整个过程仍记忆犹新 3 当时 我正在 我 在做 什么 me it happened 时间和地点 I still remember the whole process vividly 3 At that time I was 我 在做什么 景 指明事件性质 插入现在进行时的 动词词组 二 说明过程段 4 那天天气很好 在发生那 件事之前一切都很 形容词 5 然后 事件吸引了我 的注意力 6 我看见 详细 说明当时情况 令我 表达 感受的名词 当事人正在 正在进行的动作 7 整个 过程持 续的时间并不长 但给予我的印象却相当深刻 我将 自己的感受 4 It was a sunny day and things were awfully 形容词 before it happened 5 Then 事件drew my attention 6 I saw 详细说明当时 情况 and to my 表达感受的名 词 当事人was 正在进行的动 作 7 It did not last very long but it impressed me so deeply that I would 自己的感受 二 说明过程段要点 按时间顺序讲述事情 发生的过程 可以添 加自己的感受 表述事情的发展状 况 插入名词 插入 人 动词的分 词形式 表主动 用 现在分词 表被动 用过去分词 宾语 主动 by 名词 被 动 三 观点总结段 8 每当我回忆起那天的事 我都觉得 理应采取的措施 或态度一是对的 9 首先 没人能否认它 他 她 对当 事人评价的名词或名词词组 10 其次 理应采取的措施 或态度二对我们来说很重要 8 Whenever I look back on what happened that day I think it is right to 理应采取的措施或 态度一 9 First of all no one can deny its his her 对 当事人评价的名词 10 Furthermore it is important for us to 理应采取的措施或态 三 观点总结段要点 通过事情的回忆 提 出自己看法 并进行 总结 动词词组 动词用原 形 动词词组 动词用原 形 11 我将一生珍视这段回忆 度二 11 I will cherish all these memories forever 例文例文 1 题目题目 AnAn Eye witnessEye witness AccountAccount ofof a a TrafficTraffic AccidentAccident Directions for this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic An Eye witness Account of a Traffic Accident You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below 1 车祸发生的时间及地点 2 你所见到的车祸情况 3 你对车祸原因的分析 中心模板英文模板教师笔记 一 背景描述段 1 每个人都有挥之不去的难 忘记忆 2 对我来说 这件 事发生在 上周日上午 我 对整个过程仍记忆犹新 3 当时 我正 走在人行道上 1 Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it 2 To me it happened on the morning of last Sunday I still remember the whole process vividly 3 At that time I was walking on the sidewalk 一 背景描述段要点 1 精辟开头 说明背 景 指明事件性质 插入现在进行时的 动词词组 表示正要 做什么的词组还有 be ready for doing be about to be going to 二 说明过程段 4 那天天气很好 在发生那 件事之前一切都很 顺利 5 然后 巨大的撞击声 吸引了我的注意力 6 我看 见 一个女人被一辆快速行 驶的车撞倒了 令我 惊愕 的是 那辆车正 试图逃 4 It was a sunny day and things were awfully smooth before it happened 5 Then a loud crash drew my attention 6 I saw a woman knocked down by a speeding car and to my astonishment the driver was trying to drive away 7 It did not 二 说明过程段要点 按时间顺序讲述事情 发生的过程 可以添 加自己的感受 表述事情的发展状 况 若要表示顺利或 好的意思可用 smooth all right 离现场作 7 整个过程持续 的时间并不长 但给予我的 印象却相当深刻 我将 在 马路上更加当心 last very long but it impressed me so deeply that I would be more careful on the street 插入名词 插入 人 过去分词 表被动 by 名词 被动 三 观点总结段 8 每当我回忆起那天的事 我都觉得 处罚那些不负责 任的司机是对的 9 首先 没人能否认 其正确性 10 其次 限制驾驶速度对我 们来说很重要 11 我将一生 珍视这段回忆 8 Whenever I look back on what happened that day I think it is right to punish those irresponsible drivers 9 First of all no one can deny its rightness 10 Furthermore it is important for us to limit the driving speed 11 I will cherish all these memories forever 三 观点总结段要点 通过事情的回忆 提 出自己看法 并进行 总结 名词后还可以接不 定式 to 名词 来表 示 做 是正确的 等等 例文例文 2 A Special Social Practice Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it 2 To me it happened during my last winter holiday I still remember the whole process vividly 3 At that time I was working as an assistant in a computer company 4 It was a sunny day and things were awfully dull before it happened 5 Then my colleagues drew my attention 6 I saw them celebrating and to my delight they was talking happily about a great success of a project 7 It did not last very long but it impressed me so deeply that I would pursue the same profession 8 Whenever I look back on what happened that day I think it is right to pursue success 9 First of all no one can deny its ability to bring happiness 10 Furthermore it is important for us to cooperate with colleague 11 I will cherish all these memories forever 十一十一 记叙文中常用谚语 格言记叙文中常用谚语 格言 以字母为序以字母为序 1 A friend to everybody is a friend to nobody 人人是朋友 没有真朋友 2 A good book is a best friend who never turns his back upon you 好书如挚友 永远不相负 3 A good example is the best sermon 身教重于言教 4 A good fame is better than a good name 美名胜于美貌 5 All roads lead to Rome 条条大陆通罗马 6 All t