题目：焦虑症读写任务

书写很重要-字迹漂亮的确可以掩盖很多语言上的不足；字体书写的原则：整洁、让人看得懂；内容、语言形式很重要作文的灵魂，切忌太空太泛细节很重要 出现明显语法错误的作文拿不到高分；审题很重要,读写任务阅读材料体裁：说明文题材 ：考试焦虑症,Examination anxiety is a common phenomenon affecting the academic, emotional, personal and social lives of almost 80% of students across the US. These students experience examination anxiety before, during, or after an exam. For some students, this kind of anxiety may be a powerful motivator which can have a good effect on their performance in exams. However, for most students, this anxiety negatively affects their study and life before exams, and performance in exams.,I very frequently come across students who suffer from examination anxiety. As exams approach, they cant sleep well and become nervous and emotional. According to their description, when they entered the classroom, their heart was beating faster and their muscles were tense. By the time the paper was handed out, their hands were cold and clammy. And then, they began to wonder if they have studied enough to get a high score in the exam. Such emotion is around the students throughout the exam.,Examination anxiety appears before taking an examination and generally develops during the lead-up period of preparation and study. It usually produces symptoms such as insomnia（失眠症）, a feeling of inner tension, difficulty in concentrating, memory gaps, obsessive worry about the exam and other psychosomatic（由精神压力引起的） symptoms.,Summary Most students in the US suffer from examination anxiety. Examination anxiety brings them many negative symptoms before, during and after an exam. The students are badly influenced by it both physically and mentally.,Summary 1. Most students in the US suffer from examination anxiety, which brings them many negative symptoms before, during and after an exam. They are badly influenced by it both physically and mentally.,Most students in the US experience examination anxiety before, during and after the exam, which affects their life and cause some psychosomatic symptoms. 詹咏桐,典型错误As far as Im concerned, examination anxiety will makes students cannot finish exam to the best of their abilities. examination anxiety will lead to/cause a problem that students cannot do their best in their exams. examination anxiety will lead to students poor performance in exams.,For example, they cant show the real level in the examination. Before the exam, they will lose some important things which school carry to the exam. (Chinglish)For example, they will be too nervous to remember anything they have learned ,so they cant perform well in the exam.,Most of students have examination anxiety because they are afraid of their studying not enough to get a high score. (Chinglish)Most students have examination anxiety because they are worried too much about the results of their exams.,The most important thing is that they are not brave enough and unprepared to face difficulties.(GOOD) Whether anxious or not is depend on themselves. (Chinglish)Whether they will suffer from examination anxiety or not depends on themselves.,From my angle to say, the reasons of student examination anxiety including many factors. (句子结构混乱，无谓语动词)the causes for the exam anxiety are various. the reasons why most students suffer from exam anxiety are various.,原因The reason why students are disturbed by examination anxiety is that they have little confidence for themselves so that they become nervous and emotional throughout the exam. Additionally, they are afraid that they cant live up to their parents and teachers expectations.,原因From my personal point of view, I believe that it is the great mental pressure that causes students examination anxiety. A lot of students dont know how to treat exams correctly and how to relax themselves. Moreover, they worry a lot about their scores of the exams. 刘礼钰,不良影响In my view, examination anxiety negatively affects students life and study. For one thing, such emotion will produce a feeling of inner tension, which makes students have difficulty in focusing on their study. For another, students sleeping quality will be destroyed，doing harm to their body. 刘瑜,不良影响Because of the examination anxiety, students may not gain the best results form the exams. Also, mental and physical problems may occur among students. Worse still, some students may be afraid to attend examinations and give themselves up as hopeless. 胡婧,建议In order to reduce the negative influences caused by examination anxiety, there are some things we can do. Above all, we can talk to our parents and friends, from whom we can gain encouragement. Besides, we can take some physical exercise to relax ourselves before exams. Last but not least, we should always tell ourselves we are the best to build up our confidence. 陆 欣,建议To avoid examination anxiety, keeping a good and relaxed emotion is the most effective. Those who have a good attitude towards exams will do the best. Only when we relax ourselves and get well prepared can we win. 王弘棋,建议To avoid examination anxiety or relieve yourself from the great pressure, there are several solutions to follow. Firstly, its vital to transform pressure into motivation, which can be beneficial to our study. Secondly, we can take part in some outdoor activities in order to get rid of our worries and tension. Last but not least, we can turn to our teachers and parents when faced with too much anxiety. 刘瑜,1.为什么焦虑？ It is widely acknowledged that the majority of students may suffer from examination anxiety and the reasons are obvious. For one thing, they always worry that they cant pass examinations or that they cant live up to their parents expectations. For another, their insufficient preparation before exams is also a cause of their examination anxiety.,2. 有哪些不良影响？ In my view, there is no denying that worrying about the examination too much may cause/ lead to / result in a great many problems. First, it causes some students not to have a good appetite or sleep well, which is bound to harm their health. Second, examination anxiety can lead to students poor performance in exams and interfere with students study.,3. 建议： To help students avoid or decrease examination anxiety, I think the following suggestions may work out well. To start with, students should make a proper revision plan so that they can be confident in the examinations. Also, during the examination period, students should not stay up too late so as to make sure they are energetic and able to perform their best in exams.,To sum up, too much examination anxiety does more harm than good to students, but it can be overcome by good preparation, familiarity with test details and a positive attitude.,Styles of passages,understanding,topic sentences,key words,set sentence patterns,summarize/rewrite,the writing sty