英语四六级考试内部笔记

四级写作考试冲刺班内部笔记四级写作考试冲刺班内部笔记 写作的重要性 6 分最低限 只要结构不出错 得分应该为 9 分 评判作文 四级考试作文主要看内容 结构 语言三个方面 内容不跑题即可 注意 1 不要妄图以情动人 2 不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜 结构上牢记总分总 先写主题句 Topic Sentence 再写分论点 最后写总结句 Conclusion 语言最重要 往往使评分产生重大差异 语言要模仿和包装 基本表达 人们认为 It is generally widely believed held agreed that 越来越 Be increasingly adj be on the rise the growing number of 万能理由 Omnipotence 1 方便 Convenient convenience 2 效率 Efficient efficiently efficiency 3 节省和浪费 Save time money space economical thrift waste time money space costly lavish 4 人的心理健康 Independent cooperative competitive considerate confident creative sociable perseverance selfish isolated conservative 5 人的身体健康 Health disease strong strength energetic 6 娱乐 Colorful pleasure joy recreation entertainment relax tired boring lonely 7 环境 Environment pollute poisonous dirty 8 安全和危险 Safe danger risk 9 经验 Experience social experience enter the society 10 人际 Humane fair unfair help assist freedom freely 写完之后修改注意 内容方面尽量不要修改 1 字母大小写 2 怪符号 3 单词拼写 4 主谓一致 5 动词时态 6 名词单复数 实例一 题目 Bicycles An Important Means of Transport in China 提纲 1 为什么自行车在 中国这样普及 2 和汽车的比较 3 自行车在中国的前途 Score 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage They can only afford a bicycle and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive So Chinese usually buy a bicycle and use it to go to work or go to travel and so on The other reason is the large population of China All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport The bicycle compared to the car is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it It doesn t ask to build the garage like car This point is very important to China because of the lack of land It isn t too expensive so Chinese can afford it It doesn t need any oil and it can t cause the prolusion All of these are the good needs compared to the car In the future bicycle will be widely used And it will be in good demand People will produce much more modern bicycles Score 14 Bicycles are very popular in China Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles During the rush hour you can see that thousands of people man and woman old and young ride their bicycles to work and study That is why China is called the kingdom of bicycles 注 1 第一句总写 第二句和第三句分写 最后总写 2 During the rush hour 分词结构开头 3 破折号内容为同位语 句式多变化 Compared with cars bicycles are superior in many ways First they are cheap convenient and easy to ride Second riding bicycle is good for health Third they bring no noise or air pollution Though cars are faster and more comfortable they are too expensive They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air Sometimes it is difficult for a driver to park his car Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents 注 1 Compared with cars 分词结构开头 2 be superior to be inferior to 优于 低于 3 thirst second third 英语语言有层次感 信号词 4 cheap 便宜 最好用 inexpensive 5 be good for health 对健康有好处 万能理由 6 Moreover 表示递进 In my opinion the future of bicycle is very promising Since China is a developing country and has a large population I think riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time 注 promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score 11 There millions of bicycles in today s China Bicycles are very important means of transport in people s daily lives Because to ride a bicycle is very simple to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider s strength bicycles are popular all over the world especially in China 注 第一句应该用 there be 结构 Compared with a car a bicycle is much cheaper It is more suitable for China as a developing country And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has On the contrary a bicycle is too slow it costs more times than a car I think the population of China s bicycle will be kept for the long run Because it will be replaced by a car a bus and so on in some developed areas in China and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that its quality will be improved I 对比观点选择题 1 有人认为 2 另外一些人认为 3 谈谈你的观点和看法 最好写成 4 段 实例二 99 年 6 月真题 Reading Selectively or Extensively Outline 1 有人认为读书要有选择 2 有人认为应当博览群书 3 我的想法 How should we read Should we read selectively or extensively Everyone has his own view Some people think we should read selectively They argue that with the development of modern science and technology more and more books are published It is impossible for us to read all the books What s more there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind and we shouldn t read them Since we can t read all the books and we shouldn t read bad books we must read selectively But others may not agree they emphasize that today s society is not what it was If one man has many kinds of knowledge he will have more chances to succeed If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields he may be useless Since we must have many kinds of knowledge we must read extensively Who s right I think both of them have something right But I think we should read extensively first We should read books in many fields and read selectively in one field 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构 启 Paragraph I 1 引出将要评论的事物或者是观点 2 简明扼要的提出人们在这个 问题上的两种不同看法 Score 14 分 How should we read Should we read selectively or extensively Everyone has his own view 启 注 第一句提出问题 第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构 承 Paragraph II 1 提出一种观点或优点 2 本段的支持性分论点 3 本段总结 可以省 略 Some people think we should read selectively They argue that with the development of modern science and technology more and more books are published It is impossible for us to read all the books What s more there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind and we shouldn t read them Since we can t read all the books and we shouldn t read bad books we must read selectively 承 注 1 本段总分总结构 2 They argue that they think that 3 With the development of 随着 的发展 4 what s more 递进关系 moreover 5 bad pornographic 色情的 2 提出另一种观点或缺点 3 本段的支持性分论点 4 本段总 可以省略 But others may not agree they emphasize that today s society is not what it was If one man has many kinds of knowledge he will have more chances to succeed If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields he may be useless Since we must have many kinds of knowledge we must read extensively 转 注 1 But 转折词 信号词 2 They emphasize that they think that 3 today s society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge a large scope of knowledge much knowledge 获取知识 acquire get knowledge 5 knows nothing little he may be useless he may not be of great use to the society 后者 比前者更委婉 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构 合 Paragraph IV 1 平衡两种看法 2 给出 自己的观点 Who s right I think both of them have something right But I think we should read extensively first We should read books in many fields and read selectively in one field 合 Score 11 分 When it comes to reading some people think that reading selectively is a good way but some other people do not agree with them they think that reading extensively is better 注 结构非常好 可以套用 Those people who think that reading selectively is better believe that good books are as many as bad books Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way So they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books 注 1 People who 应去掉逗号 改为限制性定语从句 2 as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones 3 lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb astray 4 they suggest that they think that 5 touch 碰 闪光点词汇 如教材 P7 shouldering the responsibility of doing sth 肩负起 责任 But the other people who hold that reading extensively is better think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge Even the best book only contains one field of information So they can easily come to the conclusion that to know more to read more So they believe that reading extensively is better 注 1 hold 认为 同样表示 think 的词还有 argue emphasize believe suggest claim insist maintain agree hold 2 the best book 在西方国家是 圣经 的意思 3 to know more to read more 错误 中式英语 To my point we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible By this way we can increase the quality and quantity of reading 范文 22 Is Television a Blessing or a Curse Now it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people s lives But there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse 注 it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为 As is often pointed out by some people television keeps one better informed about current events allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating The most distant countries the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one s room 注 1 As is often pointed out by some people some people think that 2 使 不用 make 而用 keep allow offer However other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing They argue that it has brought about many serious problems The major one is its effects on young people They are now so used to getting their information education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened Even worse than that vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes distort their viewpoints towards human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted In summary television has both advantages and disadvantages Whatever effects it has one thing is certain television in itself is neither good nor bad It is the use to which it is put that determines its value to society 范文 5 Traveling People who like traveling have their reasons They maintain that traveling can help them expand their scope of knowledge especially geographical and historical learning They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have 注 geographical and historical 押尾韵 如 押头韵 clear 2 副词修饰动词 副词修饰形容 词 On the other hand some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework Another required test will only add to their burden Moreover some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck In my opinion a test of spoken English will do more good than harm Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society Whether I take the test or not I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study 范文 21 Should smoking be banned Should smoking be banned Answers to this question vary greatly Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship Therefore they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go 注 1 vary greatly 许多种 2 Be in favor of agree be of the opinion that 3 get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed 使人神清气爽 4 Giving and being given 给与被给 主 被动关系在英文中用现在 过去分词表达 But other people consider it very harmful to people s health They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second And they have heard the doctor s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack In addition smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents Thus it has become a major threat to people s life and property 注 1 They have heard the official reports that 官方报告表明 2 be more likely to 更 有可能 更容易 3 chance 可能 There is some truth in both arguments but human s life and property outweighs anything else If smoking brings us illness and death why not have it banned by the government Without cigarettes can t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed 注 1 outweigh 比 重要 同样的表达 be superior to be inferior to overweight 超重 2 最后用 两句反问句结尾 非常精妙 课后作业 Private Cars 写成 4 段的首段写法 In recent years with fast economic growth private cars have appeared in many families in China People s attitude toward private cars varies widely With the increase in the general standard of living some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car Yet people s opinions of private cars vary from person to person public attitude toward it varies greatly widely is quite of the contrary differs sharply In recent few years the phenomenon issue problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention in the limelight People s views on opinions of owing a private car vary widely 写成 3 段的首段写法 With the development of modern society science and technology With the improvement of people s living standard more and more people can own private cars cars are entering ordinary families the growing number of people people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars 此句是引言 支持段的主题句 Some people claim that As is pointed out that It is generally believed that It is widely accepted that there are some advantages of owning a private car There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely 支持段的分论点 方便 First private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation 舒适 Second it is comfortable for people to travel in especially in changeable weather raining days sand storm 炫耀 Third only a private car can show a person s social status achievement success prosperity in his or her career 否定段的主题句 However Nonetheless Nevertheless But there are some disadvantages of owing a private car Every coin has two sides While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us we should not ignore the problem they create produce introduce make Despite In spite of For all the advantages they brings their own disadvantages problems negative effects Like anything else private cars also have their own weakness limits However private cars are not without shortcomings faults Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought They complain that However private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences 否定段的分论点 占有空间 On the one hand private cars take up occupy too much space 交通事故 On the other hand a driver should be careful cautious while driving otherwise car accidents are more likely to happen 污染环境 What s more In addition private cars give off discharge release CO which pollute the environment air 注意 所谓上义词是指抽象 概括和笼统的 就是比较 super ordinate 的词 而下义词 就是具体的东西 即 subordinate 的东西 第四段 总结段 的写法 Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above I still think that the advantages outweigh are greater than the disadvantages As for the above problem I m sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved Unquestionably the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them so that they will not control us Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be eliminated Anyway Anyhow In any case whether the effect is good or bad one thing is certain private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation our leisure and our life 选择题型变体逻辑结构 My View on Sth 选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构 Paragraph I 1 引出将要评论的事物或者是观点 2 简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题 上的两种不同看法 Paragraph II 1 提出作者观点 本文主题句 2 举例加以论证 Paragraph III 1 总结全文 再次强调作者观点 范文 17 My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life 注 1 consensus 相同意见 2 第一句话可以套用 如范文 18 There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth 3 while 轻微转折和对比 强转折用词 but however 4 master 主人 As far as I am concerned I agree with the latter opinion There is a saying Everyone is the architect of his own future Which means one s fate is decided in his own hands In fact