2017高考(新课标)英语二轮专题复习 -专题强化训练 专题五 短文改错 Word版含答案

专题五专题五 短文改错短文改错 训练训练 1 A At present I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like As a senior three student I study hard every day and live it at the full It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams When I recalled the happy things happened to me the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties So I made up my mind to win the scholarship hoped to lighten my parents financial burden After making tons of painstaking effort I succeeded At the ceremony my mum was the most poorly dressed woman and with the brightest smile on her face 答案 答案 At present I am happy because I am doing what I e ex xt tr re em me e e ex xt tr re em me el ly y like As a senior three student I study hard every day and live it the a at t t to o full It feels good to study hard with my classmates to d de et te er rm mi in ni in ng g d de et te er rm mi in ne ed d fulfill our dreams When I recalled the happy things happened to me the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped all It was a time when my family going i it t t th he em m i is s w wa as s through financial difficulties So I made up my mind to win the scholarship to lighten my parents financial burden After h ho op pe ed d h ho op pi in ng g making tons of painstaking I succeeded At the e ef ff fo or rt t e ef ff fo or rt ts s ceremony my mum was the most poorly dressed woman a an nd d y ye et t b bu ut t with the brightest smile on her face B On September 29 the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum At 8 00 we leave for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus At 8 30 a guide introduced them to us briefly and told us how we should pay attention to during our visit Ten minutes later we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit Some students took notes carefully as if they visited All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements in science and technology Three hours had gone by after we knew it At 11 30 we returned to our school This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly interest in science and technology 答案 答案 On September 29 the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum At 8 00 we for China l le ea av ve e l le ef ft t Science and Technology Museum by school bus At 8 30 a guide introduced to us briefly and told us we should pay attention t th he em m i it t h ho ow w w wh ha at t to during our visit Ten minutes later we were divided into five groups began our separate Some students took notes carefully as b bu ut t a an nd d v vi is si it t v vi is si it ts s they visited All the students were at the rapid achievements a am ma az zi in ng g a am ma az ze ed d in science and technology Three hours had gone by we knew a af ft te er r b be ef fo or re e it At 11 30 we returned to our school This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my interest in science g gr re ea at tl ly y g gr re ea at t and technology C This morning I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench I picked up and checked the contents Inside it I found some money or a card with a phone number Believe that the owner would be worried I immediately tried the number A man answered it in an amazing voice Hearing that I had his wallet he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away Ten minutes late the man arrived After confirming he was an owner I handed the wallet back to him With his thumb up he expressed his gratitude to me repeated Seeing the smile on her face I felt happy that I was able to help 答案 答案 This morning I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench I picked up and checked the contents Inside it I found some money a card with a phone number that the o or r a an nd d B Be el li ie ev ve e B Be el lieving owner would be worried I immediately tried the number A man answered it in an voice Hearing that I had his wallet he a am ma az zi in ng g a am ma az ze ed d with relief and told me he would return right away Ten minutes s si ig gh hs s s si ig gh he ed d the man arrived After confirming he was owner I handed l la at te e l la at te er r a an n t th he e the wallet back to him With his thumb up he expressed his gratitude to me Seeing the smile on face I felt happy that I was r re ep pe ea at te ed d r re ep pe ea at te ed dl ly y h he er r h hi is s able to help D When it comes to the TV there will be different word in different people s minds Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax Firstly we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports Secondly watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time Finally we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared Therefore every coin has its two sides There is also disadvantages of watching TV Not only do it do harm to our eyesight but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life Definitely TV plays a big role in our life We should treat to it in a right way 答案 答案 When it comes to the TV there will be different in different w wo or rd d w wo or rd ds s people s minds Some people think that TV is a good way to w wa at tc ch h w wa at tc ch hi in ng g relax Firstly we can broaden our horizons know more about the or and world by watching latest news and reports Secondly watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time Finally we can predict may t th ha at t w wh ha at t happen in the future and be prepared every coin has its two sides There also T Th he er re ef fo or re e H Ho ow we ev ve er r i is s a ar re e disadvantages of watching TV Not only it do harm to our d do o d do oe es s eyesight but it also has a bad on our studies and everyday a af ff fe ec ct t effect life Definitely TV plays a big role in our life We should treat it in a right way 训练训练 2 A My name is Li Hua I was born in Qingdao Shandong Province on February 1995 I started the school in 2001 when I was six I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007 After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese maths English physics chemistry and computer I like English and computer best but I am very good at it Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter 答案 答案 My name is Li Hua I was born in Qingdao Shandong Province o on n i in n February 1995 I started school in 2001 when I was six I studied in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007 After that I h ha ap pp py y h ha ap pp pi il ly y went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and last g gr ra ad du ua at te e g gr ra ad du ua at te ed d summer The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese maths English physics chemistry and computer I like English and computer best I am very good at Last year I but and i it t t th he em m first prize in the school computer competition In my spare time w wi in nn ne ed d w wo on n I enjoy listening popular music and collecting My favourite s st ta am mp p s st ta am mp ps s sports swimming in summer and skating in winter i is s a ar re e B One day I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snow covering road Many people passed by and no one took action Some of them said it was none of their business others worried that if they helped him they might got into a difficult situation Seeing what had happened I called 120 immediately While waiting the ambulance I took down my coat to keep the old man warm In no time did the ambulance came Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance I felt relieved In my opinion this is our duty to help those who are in troubles 答案 答案 One day I was walking home after school when an old man fell onto the road Many people passed by no h he ea av vy y h he ea av vi il ly y s sn no ow w covering snow covered a an nd d b bu ut t one took action Some of them said it was none of their business others worried that if they helped him they might into a difficult g go ot t g ge et t situation Seeing what had happened I called 120 immediately While waiting the ambulance I took my coat to keep the old man d do ow wn n o of ff f warm In no time the ambulance came Having helped the doctors carry him into ambulance I felt relieved In my opinion is a an n t th he e t th hi is s i it t our duty to help those who are in t tr ro ou ub bl le es s t tr ro ou ub bl le e C I m going to study in the senior middle school on September I can live either at school and at home But I can t decide because both has advantages and disadvantages At home I have my own room but I can have a good sleep However I have to share one room with 5 6 student at school Maybe I can t sleep good It s a problem Although I can have better food at home I enjoy eat with my classmates I think it s a great fun and I can make more friends If I live at home I ll have ride to school It s a waste of time and not safely It s so hard to make a decision 答案 答案 I m going to study in the senior middle school September I can o on n i in n live either at school at home But I can t decide because both a an nd d o or r h ha as s h ha av ve e advantages and disadvantages At home I have my own room b bu ut t s so o a an nd d I can have a good sleep However I have to share one room with 5 6 at school Maybe I can t sleep It s a problem Although I s st tu ud de en nt t s st tu ud de en nt ts s g go oo od d w we el ll l can have better food at home I enjoy with my classmates I e ea at t e ea at ti in ng g think it s great fun and I can make more friends If I live at home I ll have ride to school It s a waste of time and not It s s sa af fe el ly y s sa af fe e so hard to make a decision D Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture But several years ago visitors behave badly Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere Some picked flowers cutting down trees and hurt animals And even better some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods Luckily things has changed Rubbish is always put into dustbins People are friendly at animals Everybody smokes in the woods All these changes make us happily As student I think we should know it s our duty to protect the environment Let s to change our behaviour when we travel 答案 答案 Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions Every year many come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture But t to ou ur ri is st t t to ou ur ri is st ts s several years ago visitors badly Some talked loudly in public b be eh ha av ve e b be eh ha av ve ed d and threw litter everywhere Some picked flowers down trees c cu ut tt ti in ng g c cu ut t and hurt animals And even some painted on the walls and b be et tt te er r w wo or rs se e smoked in the woods Luckily things changed Rubbish is always put into h ha as s h ha av ve e dustbins People are friendly animals smokes in a at t t to o t to ow wa ar rd ds s E Ev ve er ry yb bo od dy y N No ob bo od dy y the woods All these changes make us As student I think we h ha ap pp pi il ly y h ha ap pp py y should know it s our duty to protect the environment Let s change our behaviour when we travel 训练训练 3 A 导学号导学号 59430108 Dear Friend As you got up this morning I watched you and hoped you would talk to me asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday But I noticed you were too busily I waited again When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello but you were too busy At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting in a chair Then I saw you jump to your foot I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend Love always Your Friend Jesus 答案 答案 Dear Friend As you got up this morning I watched you and hoped you would talk to me my opinion or thanking me something good that a as sk ke ed d a as sk ki in ng g happened in your life yesterday But I noticed you were too I busily busy waited again When you ran around the house getting ready I knew would be a few minutes for you to stop and say hello but i it t t th he er re e you were too busy At one point you to wait fifteen minutes with h ha av ve e h ha ad d nothing to do except in a chair Then I saw you jump to your s si it tt ti in ng g s si it t I thought you wanted to talk to me you ran to the phone and f fo oo ot t f fe ee et t a an nd d b bu ut t a friend c ca al ll li in ng g c ca al ll le ed d Love always Your Friend Jesus B Recently I got package notice from the post office I was not expecting a package I thought Oh no it s probably a package from some companies that I will not want But I will have to go to the trouble of send it back Late that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything in the mail from him Well my attitude on the package waiting for me at the post office change immediately Because I now knew who had been sent it I went to the post office as soon as I could I was delightful to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend 答案 答案 Recently I got package notice from the post office I was not expecting a package I thought Oh no it s probably a package from some that I will not want I will have to go to the trouble c co om mp pa an ni ie es s c co om mp pa an ny y B Bu ut t S So o of it back that day a good friend mentioned to me that s se en nd d s se en nd di in ng g L La at te e L La at te er r I should be getting in the mail from him Well my attitude a an ny yt th hi in ng g s so om me et th hi in ng g the package waiting for me at the post office o on n t to ow wa ar rd ds s t to o c ch ha an ng ge e c ch ha an ng ge ed d immediately Because I now knew who had sent it I went to the post office as soon as I could I was to get a set of stainless d de el li ig gh ht tf fu ul l d de el li ig gh ht te ed d steel pots from my friend C It was an unusual cold day Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour So a cold front had brought winter s cold back I sit with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square The food were especially good that day As we talked my attention was drawn outside across the street There walking into town was a man which appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back She was carrying a well worn sign reads I will work for food My heart was sank We continued with our meals but his image lasted in my mind 答案 答案 It was an cold day Spring had arrived and everything u un nu us su ua al l u un nu us su ua al ll ly y was alive with colour a cold front had brought winter s cold back I S So o B Bu ut t with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner s si it t s sa at t of the town square The food especially good that day As we w we er re was talked my attention was drawn outside across the street There walking into town was a man appeared to be w wh hi ic ch h w wh ho o carrying all his goods on his back was carrying a well worn sign S Sh he e H He e I will work for food My heart sank We continued with r re ea ad ds s r re ea ad di in ng g our but his image lasted in my mind m me ea al ls s m me ea al l D When I was seven years old and my sister were only four our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week after his twenty seventh birthday Mum was disappointing Although we were really so young to understand what was going on but I knew life would never be quite the same We had a nice home plenty of that we needed but we miss our father About every evening we would go to our grandparent s house for visit My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken His boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later 答案 答案 When I was seven years old and my sister only four our w we er re e w wa as s father was killed in an automobile accident just two after his w we ee ek k w we ee ek ks s twenty seventh birthday Mum was Although we were d di is sa ap pp po oi in nt ti in ng g d di is sa ap pp po oi in nt te ed d really young to understand what was going on I knew life s so o t to oo o would never be quite the same We had a nice home plenty of we t th ha at t w wh ha at t needed but we our father About every evening we would go to m mi is ss s m mi is ss se ed d our grandparent s house for visit My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken boss was a nice H Hi is s H He er r young man named Charles got to know my mother and fell in w wh hi ic ch h w wh ho o love with her later 训练训练 4 A 导学号导学号 59430109 Dear John I heard you were injured in a accident and stay in hospital now I feel so sorry for you The classmates and me plan to see you next week Don t hesitate to turning to us if there is everything we can do for you In addition don t worry at your school work We will help you make it up when you return back to school During recovery in hospital try to keep a good mood which help improve your health What s more eat more fruits or drink more water than usually Always follow the doctors advices It s very important Looking forward to your coming back Yours Li Hua 答案 答案 Dear John I heard you were injured in accident and stay in hospital now I a a a an n feel so sorry for you The classmates and plan to see you next m me e I I week Don t hesitate to to us if there is we can do t tu ur rn ni in ng g t tu ur rn n e ev ve er ry yt th hi in ng g s so om me et th hi in ng g for you In addition don t worry your school work We will help a at t a ab bo ou ut t you make it up when you return to school During recovery in hospital try to keep a good mood which improve your h he el lp p h he el lp ps s health Wha