短文改错专项训练(一)

短文改错专项训练短文改错专项训练 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线下划一横线 并在该词下面该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 第一篇 The winter holiday is coming which made me excited I have been looking forward at relaxing myself I d like to go skating climb mountains and see several movie I think I can play the basketball with my classmates How a wonderful time I ll have during the winter holiday However my parents think different They don t want me go out They are afraid I will be knocked down by a truck fallen off a tree or fight with others Besides they are afraid I will lose my way I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage To lose more freedom I will try to persuade them 第二篇 Two years before I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car Unfortunate I had an accident and hit another car and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week I called my parents so I did not tell them what had happened I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away and that my mother would not sleep if she knew Therefore I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result nobody knew truth I still think that it was the right thing to do 第三篇 One day my whole family went to climb the big hill My father and mother told my elder sister and I that the first one to get to the top of the hill would be give a toy Hear this we began to run up At first I kept ahead but a few minute later my sister was ahead me However I didn t give up I reached the top firstly in the end We enjoy the beautiful scenery and had a picnic on the top of the hill I was the most happiest one all the time because I not only won a toy and also learnt that one shouldn t give up easily 第四篇 Dear Miss Li How are you Are you still busy at your work at that school I m writing to tell you anything about my new school here This is a beautiful school with many trees and flowers in it The classrooms were big and bright The modern library is full of books on different subject Every Wednesday afternoon we can go there and lend books Teachers here are strict in their work and this is what the school is famous Classes and homework don t take up all your time After the supper we usually gather to see the CCTV news so that we can learn that has happened in this world How luckily I am to be a student in such a wonderful school 第五篇 When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in 18th century people thought they were harmful So a king of Sweden decided to find out whether this was true and not It happened that there were two brothers who were in prison at the time The king ordered one of them drink tea every day and the other coffee Both of him lived many years without any problem At last the one who had drink tea every day died at the age of 83 and the other one lived even long Because of this today Sweden is one of the country where many tea and coffee are drunk 第六篇 Dear Bob I m glad to hear of you I ve found suitable house for you The house is on Fang Cao Street that is not far from Jianxin Chinese School It is a flat on the third floor of a building It has three rooms a living room a bathroom or a kitchen The mirror the basin and the bathtub is very conveniently for you In the living room there is a bed a sofa and a desk with two chair The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month Will you be satisfied with this a flat or you want other one Just let me know I ll try my best to helping you See you Yours Li Hua 第七篇 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month It is in the downtown area but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport We lived in a comfortably double room with a big bath What I like best were the free high speed Internet connection in the room I checked my email messages every day I also shared for my frien