2012届高考英语 考前冲刺精品复习讲义写作（八） 北师大版

用心 爱心 专心 1 20122012 届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义 北师大版 写作 八 届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义 北师大版 写作 八 日记的写作 所谓写日记就是用文字记述自己一天生活中发生的有意义或重要的事 用来描述自己对某些 事的感受以及自己未来的打算等 格式上一般要求写清日期及天气 年 月 日和星期写在日记第一行的左上角 天气情况写 在日记第一行的右上角 日记一般总是用第一人称来写 时态则多用一般过去时 现在完成 时或一般现在时 如要强调写日记的地点 则可将地点写在日期的后面 日记中常用的词语 有 today this morning tonight now till now I have first then at last there hold attend take on foot by bike happen to help be late do on one s way to across climb feel happy delighted sorry sad 等 写好英文日记应注意以下几点 1 把握好事情要点 写出有意义的 大事 来 写作时 要把握好重点 不要写成记 流 水账 的日记 否则日记就失去意义 无可读性可言 2 把握好日记所要求的时态 日记是记述当天已发生的事 因此在时态上应体现一般过去 时的特点 当然在具体描述时也可能用到过去进行时 如 He was then writing an article for a newspaper when we went to invite him to join us 甚至在日记结尾时还要用一般 现在时 如 Now I feel very happy because I have learned 3 开好头 结好尾 英文日记往往记述一件有一定意义的事情 开篇时可简单地介绍一下 这一事情 如 Today I visited a farm belonging to my uncle It is my birthday today 而日记的结尾常常要谈谈自己对今天所经历或所发生的事情的感受或认识 故有 Today I felt sad because I saw I feel really delighted that I decided to 等结 尾性语言 4 用好过渡性语言 使文章流畅自如 在具体操作时 不能只顾记述事实 而忘记语句间 的连贯 日记以记述事件过程为主 因此往往以时间为写作线索 这样表示时间的过渡 性语言的使用就显得尤为重要 如 first then at last finally at that 用心 爱心 专心 2 time now in the morning at night at noon 等 范例 下面一段文字叙述了你在 2010 年 9 月 1 日 星期三 天气晴 在班里所经历的事 新学期开始了 你们班级转入了一名父母在北京工作的美国男孩 Jack 的到来给班级注入了 新鲜血液 同学们与 Jack 热情沟通 由于语言的限制 大家交流起来有一定的困难 请写一篇日记记录此事 并谈谈自己的感受 词数 100 左右 思路导航 1 文体信息 这是一篇记述当天班级所发生的事情的日记 在叙述时应用一般过去时 人称主要 是第一人称 人物主要有我 Jack 同班同学等 2 列出简要提纲 1 今天班里转入一名美国男孩 2 描述与男孩的交流过程 3 谈内心感受 3 充实提纲 拓展内容 4 选词造句 列出所需单词和短语 join our class be curious about ask questions draw pictures it is that communicate with 5 组句成文 把简单句变成复合句或特殊句式 1 He came to China together with his parents His parents would work as engineers in Beijing He came to China together with his parents who would work as engineers in Beijing 用心 爱心 专心 3 2 We communicated with each other in English It was in English that we communicated with each other 6 温馨提示 1 注意时间顺序 2 可适当增加细节 以使文章意思连贯 3 感想的表达不宜过多 应控制在两句话之内 范文赏读 September 1st WednesdayFine Today an American boy named Jack joined our class He came to China together with his parents who would work as engineers in Beijing All of our classmates were curious about him and his life in America Jack was also curious about China We asked lots of questions about each other It was in English that we communicated with each other because Jack knew little about Chinese Of course we couldn t understand Jack sometimes We even drew some pictures to help express our ideas Wasn t that funny And I realize that to make China a country that is willing to communicate with other countries the Chinese have to grasp foreign languages well 佳句诵读 1 It was in English that we communicat