河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+书面表达（38）

用心 爱心 专心1 河北省河北省 20122012 高考英语二轮复习专题训练 高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错短文改错 书面表达 书面表达 3838 短文改错短文改错 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行做出判断 如无错误 在该行 右边横线上划一个勾 如果有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 该行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划 掉 该行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 该行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Dear Mr Li I am one of your mobile newspaper user I know your 1 mobile newspaper is a first English mobile newspaper 2 that is designed teenage readers in China It is very3 popular among teenagers You had provided a good service for 4 teenagers Every day we are able to receive the late English 5 news and stories from the mobile newspaper which make6 it convenient for teenagers to learn English However I7 wonder that you can add some new columns 栏目 we 8 teenagers are interested in them We will appreciate being 9 able to reading more in such columns 用心 爱心 专心2 10 Yours sincerely Li Hua 书面表达书面表达 北京时间 2011 年 3 月 11 日 13 时 46 分 日本本州岛附近海域发生里氏 9 0 级地震 强震及引发的大规模海啸己给日本带来巨大的灾难 请你给你远在日本的好友 Alex 写一封 信表示关怀和慰问 内容包括 1 地震和海啸造成了人员伤亡 数万人无家可归 2 表达对好友及灾区人民的关注和安慰 3 鼓励他们渡过难关 重建家园 注意事项 1 词汇 tsunami 海啸 rebuild 重建 2 词数 100 左右 不包括己给出的开头和结尾 Dear Alex I am awfully sorry about the severe earthquake which struck the coast of Japan on March 11th Please remember that I ll always be by your side when you need any help 用心 爱心 专心3 Take care Yours Sincerely Li Hao 短文改错短文改错 Dear Mr Li I am one of your mobile newspaper user I know your 1 users mobile newspaper is a first English mobile newspaper 2 the that is designed teenage readers in China It is very3 for popular among teenagers You had provided a good service for 4 have teenagers Every day we are able to receive the late English 5 latest news and stories from the mobile newspaper which make6 makes it convenient for teenagers to learn English However I7 wonder that you can add some new columns 栏目 we 8 whether if teenagers are interested in them We will appreciate being9 them able to reading more in such columns 10 read Yours sincerely Li Hua 书面表达书面表达 Possible version Dear Alex 用心 爱心 专心4 I am awfully sorry about the severe earthquake which struck the coast of Japan on March 11th I felt extremely upset when the news came that the tsunami caused by the strong earthquake had led to extensive and severe damage in your country causing the loss of lives and leaving tens of thousands of Japanese homeless Faced with such a horrible natural disaster the Japanese people remain so calm and strong willed that we all admire your courage and strength Here in China people are very concerned about the present situation in your country and we are all determined to make every bit of our effort to help I am sure that with a strong determination and the support from every corner of the world you and you country can go thr