大学英语病句改写全套

1 改写病句 串句 串句 错误将两个独立的分句串在一起 不用连词 标点 误将两个句子当成一个句子 类型 1 用一个逗号把两个独立的句子连接起来 2 什么标点符号都没有使用 破句 破句 是一组词由于缺少主语或动词无法表达完整意思的错句 只是句子的一个从属部分 类型 从属词破句 分词 不定式破句 附加细节句 无主破句 1st 修改串句 4 ways 分成两个句子 误 The local tire plant shut down for the holiday everyone had two weeks off 正 The local tire plant shut down for the holiday As a result everyone had two weeks off 误 She didn t feel particularly well she went to bed 正 She didn t feel particularly well Therefore she went to bed 误 He tried many times to give up smoking he never managed to 正 He tried many times to give up smoking However he never managed to 用连词 and but for or nor so yet 连接两个句子 连词之前加逗号 误 Don t tease the dog you might get bitten 正 Don t tease the dog or you might get bitten 用分号连接两个句子 1 He tried many times to give up smoking however he never managed to 2 The local tire plant shut down for the holiday as a result everyone had two 2 weeks off 用从属连词把一个分句化为从句 修饰或限定主句 After we walked over to the waterfall slowly we sat down to admire the beauty of the falls There is no school tomorrow so they will go on a picnic 最佳方法修改串句 首选逗号加并列连词 用于两句之间有逻辑关系的句子 其次选择分号 用于两句中有表示连接关系的副词或副词词组时或后句是前句的说明时 最后考虑句号 用于两句没有逻辑关系或角度表化等情况 2nd 修改破句 4 类 类 1 从属词破句 误 Smokers claim the right to smoke in public places While nonsmokers claim the right to clean air 正 Smokers claim the right to smoke in public places while nonsmokers claim the right to clean air 误 Examinations remain as primitive as ever before No matter how advanced our science and technology have become in this modern society 正 Examinations remain as primitive as ever before no matter how advanced our science and technology have become in this modern society 误 After I arrived in Chicago by bus I checked into a room Then I went to a dinner to get something to eat 3 正 After I arrived in Chicago by bus I checked into a room and then I went to a dinner to get something to eat 误 My daughter likes to make paper boats Which she floats in the tub during her nightly bath 正 My daughter likes to make paper boats which she floats in the tub during her nightly bath 正 My daughter likes to make paper boats She floats them in the tub during her nightly bath 类 2 分词和不定式破句 修改方法 1 让破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来 使语义完整 2 增添主语 把现在分词改成动词的正确形式 3 把 being 改为 be 的恰当形式 4 将不定式部分与前面句子连接起来 误 Starting at the clock on the far wall I nervously began my speech I was afraid to look at any of the people in the room 正 Starting at the clock on the far wall I nervously began my speech I was afraid to look at any of the people in the room 误 I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday Trying to find a garage to repair my car Eventually I had to have it towed to a garage in another town 正 I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday trying to find a 4 garage to repair my car Eventually I had to have it towed to a garage in another town 误 I plan on working overtime To get this job finished Otherwise my boss may get angry with 正 I plan on working overtime to get this job finished Otherwise my boss may get angry with 类 3 增加细节引起的破句 especially specially for example such as for instance like also as well as except but besides 后接 n 时 不能单独存在 只能是句子的部分 修改方法 1 与其前面具有完整意义的句子连接起来 2 增加主语和谓语动词 3 改动 使其成为前句的一部分 误 My aunt likes watching daytime television shows Especially old movies and soap operas 正 My aunt likes watching daytime television shows especially old movies and soap operas 误 Student cheating is still widely practiced In spite of the fact that the violators get severe punishment once they are caught 正 Student cheating is still widely practiced in spite of the fact that the violators get severe punishment once they are caught 误 He failed a number of courses before he earned his degree Among them English Economics and General Biology 5 正 Among the courses he failed before he earned his degree were English Economics and General Biology 误 Cotton grows well in their county Particularly in Vanguard Commune 正 Cotton grows well in their county particularly in Vanguard Commune 类 4 缺少主语的破句 改正方法为 a 使破句依附于前面的句子 b 增加主语 该主语往往是代词 指代前句中的主语 误 They take an active part in social activities On holidays frequently do temporary jobs 正 They take an active part in social activities and on holidays they frequently do temporary jobs 误 One example of my father s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital And takes along get well cards with a few dollars folded in them 在慰问卡里塞钱 正 One example of my father s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital and takes along get well cards with a few dollars folded in the 正 One example of my father s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital He takes along get well cards with a few dollars folded in them 误 Sarah looked with admiration at the stunningly attractive model And wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning 正 Sarah looked with admiration at the stunningly attractive model and 6 wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning 3rd 错误平行结构 1 词与词间的平行 名词 形容词 副词 动名词 分词以及不定式等 A wedding anniversary is a celebration of love trust partnership and tolerance Kate is not only beautiful but also intelligent Tom works carefully and diligently Working or resting she always enjoyed herself The soldier preferred to die rather than surrender 2 词组间的平行 That s one small step for a man one giant leap for mankind We prefer camping in the open to playing football in the field 3 分句间的平行 The love of liberty is the love of others the love of power is the love of ourselves Take your books out and put them on the desk He paid more attention to what he ate than to what he wore 4 句子间的平行 Militarily Great Britain was shockingly weak in 1941 Socially however the country was surprisingly strong 误 Kate has been a waitress a nurse and taught school 正 Kate has been a waitress a nurse and a teacher 系列中的每个平行成分都应 7 是名词 误 The governor is facing the difficult task of developing industry but how to not destroy the environment 正 The governor is facing the difficult task of developing industry but not destroying the environment 平行成分为动名词短语 误 Recent movies reflect major improvements in not only photograph but also in editing 正 Recent movies reflect major improvements not only in photograph but also in editing 平行成分为动名词短语 误 In fact flying is often less dangerous than to drive a car 正 In fact flying is often less dangerous than driving a car 被比较的成分都 应为动名词形式 误 Jane is a beautiful and the kindest woman I have never met 正 Jane is the most beautiful and the kindest woman I have never met 误 When the weather gets cold drafty and rains a lot it is especially important to keep your feet well covered 正 When the weather gets cold drafty and damp it is especially important to keep your feet well covered 前两项都是形容词 因此第三项不能用动词 必须 改为形容词 常用的句子结构有 and but either or neither nor not only but also both and whether or although though yet if then 8 not but would had rather than prefer to as as not as so as 结构不平行的情况有 3 种 1 并列结构中的不平行省略 误 Most of us lack knowledge or comfort with science 正 Most of us lack knowledge of or comfort with science 2 比较结构的不平行 误 Mars is nearer to us than Pluto 正 Mars is nearer to us than to Pluto Mars is nearer to us than it is to Pluto than 前为句子 后为单个词 所以造成句子的不平衡 在写比较级的句子时 一定要 注意 than 两侧的文法结构是否一致 3 连词两侧的结构不平行 误 The math teacher not only irritates me by his high pitched voice but also I began to hate the math class 正 The math teacher not only irritates me by his high pitched voice but also makes me hate the math class 4th 修饰语错置 修饰语错置是因将修饰语与被修饰语之间摆放的位置不恰当 通常是相互之间间隔得太远 就是移位置 Bill yelled at the howling dog in his underwear 9 Bill in his underwear yelled at the howling dog The final scene unites two characters who in the beginning had hated each other in a beautiful way The final scene unites in a beautiful way two characters who in the beginning had hated each other Alice could see a lot of cars running fast outside through her window Through her window Alice could see a lot of cars running fast outside He gave the rose to the lovely actress that he had bought for his wife He gave the rose that he had bought for his wife to the lovely actress 1 像 only just almost nearly 这样的修饰语时 尽量靠近被修饰语 且一般放在被修 饰语前面 2 表示时间 地点 方式的状语从句放在句首 3 状语修饰语难以在句中找到恰当的位置时 句首是个好地方 The mayor was able to cut the ribbon and then the band played when someone found scissors 动作顺序违反自然规律 When someone found scissors the mayor was able to cut the ribbon and then the band played 4 以 which 或 that 开头的从句 要跟在被修饰的词后面 10 The house was in the woods that burned last night The house that burned last night was in the woods 5 不要把修饰语放在可以修饰句中两个部分的位置上 以避免模棱两可 People who walk normally are healthier than those who don t People who walk are normally healthier than those who don t 或 Normally people who walk are healthier than those who don t 5th 悬垂修饰语 误 Opening the cupboard a skeleton fell out 正 When I opened the cupboard a skeleton fell out 误 Discouraged by low grades dropping out made sense 正 Discouraged by low grades I thought dropping out made sense 误 When bathing the baby the water should be warm not hot 正 When bathing the baby you should be sure the water should be warm not hot 误 Running along the high way my ears felt frozen 正 Running along the high way I felt as if my ears felt frozen 2 垂悬动名词 还是找主语 误 Approaching the guard rail 围栏 on Lookout Mountain a vast expanse of farmland could be seen 正 When we approached the guard rail on Lookout Mountain a vast expanse of farmland could be seen 11 误 In talking with my students they told me of their suggestions 正 When I was talking with my students they told me of their suggestions 误 While reading the paper last night an article on solar energy attracted my attention 正 While reading the paper last night I became interested in an article on solar energy attracted my attention 3 垂悬不定式短语 都是改不定式后面半句 都是加个主语 误 To pass the examination work hard is expected 正 To pass the examination you are expected to work hard 误 To write well repeated revision is necessary 正 To write well you must revise repeatedly 误 To learn English well much practice is necessary 正 To 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