2012高考英语考前冲刺Ⅳ专题26 短文改错

用心 爱心 专心1 20122012考前冲刺英语考前冲刺英语 专题专题2626 短文改错短文改错 1 下面短文中有10处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写上该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写上修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 2012 02 2012 02 桐乡模拟桐乡模拟 The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school I was having trouble get along with my parents I had about fifty dollar in my pockets and so I thought about leaving home It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons being more responsible more decisive and more creative Because of I m on my own I get to deal with my duties without being told I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices In the other hand I could make my own future plan I have made rules for me to follow Rose wanted a job She went to many offices and she didn t like any of them One day she saw a board in an office read This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute Rose was exciting When Rose went to the manager s office the man was writing something Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head Do you need a typist asked Rose Yes he said Rose clapped her hand She couldn t help saying OK How much will you 用心 爱心 专心2 pay for me every month The manager thought for a while and said I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month Rose smiled and answer Great I will come and work here three months late The manager was speechless V 短文改错 Rose wanted a job She went to many offices and she didn t like any of them but One day she saw a board in an office read This office needs a typist whom can reading who type 200 words a minute Rose was exciting When Rose went to the manager s office excited the man was writing something Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head Do you need a typist asked Rose Yes he said Rose clapped her hand his hands She couldn t help saying OK How much will you pay for me every month The manager thought for a while and said I will pay you 77 dollars for first three the months Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month Rose smiled and answer Great answered I will come and work here three months late The manager was speechless later 3 2012 宝鸡一次质检 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌 写 用心 爱心 专心3 told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her At the same time he apologized to me for his lateness Moved by his word I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named Mother for the students From then on I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them Do you think so I m looking forward to your reply 4 2012 西安一次质检 I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer It was good trip at te beginning and something unexpected happened half way One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldn t 用心 爱心 专心4 move any far Nobody knew what to do it One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone but there was no signal in the mountain area Lucky we had brought a tent with us We put it up and let him rested in it He took some medicine Then he drink some water and ate some food After while he felt much better and we walked on We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain 5 2012 02 2012 02 桐乡模拟桐乡模拟 你的同学刘芳乐于助人 helpful 积极乐观 positive 她 在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人 请根据题示 用英语写一篇短文向英语 报English Times投稿 简要叙述她做好事的经过 并谈谈你的感想 What happened an old man seriously hurt in the leg what Liu Fang did Your opinion misunderstanding or even trouble or the right thing Nowadays a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others However Liu Fang acted differently 用心 爱心 专心5 6 2012 西安五校一模 The winter holiday is coming which made me excited I have been looking forward at relaxing myself I d like to go skating climb mountains and see several movie I think I can play the basketball with my classmates How a wonderful time I ll have during the winter holiday However my parents think different They don t want me go out They are afraid I ll be knocked down by a truck fallen off a tree or fight with others Besides they are afraid I will lose my way I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage To get more freedom so I will try to persuade them The winter holiday is coming which made me excited I have been looking forward at makes to relaxing myself I d like to go skating climb mountains and see several movie I think I can play movies the basketball with my classmates How a wonderful time I ll have during the winter holiday the What However my parents think different They don t want me go out They are afraid I ll be differently to knocked down by a truck fallen off a tree or fight with others Besides they are afraid I will lose fall my way I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage To get more freedom so I will try to kept so persuade them 7 2012 辽宁重点中学协作体期末 On Saturday afternoon Li Hua and Wang Ping members from Green Eyes was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a 用心 爱心 专心6 bird on the ground They picked it out and found it wounded Thinking it should die without timely help they took it home Under their treatment and care the lucky bird got recovered soon When time came for them to fly the bird they felt a bit of pity but very delightful I think it s worthwhile for him to do such a thing Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it 答案 On Saturday afternoon Li Hua and Wang Ping members from Green Eyes was having an were environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground They caught picked it out and found it wounded Thinking it should die without timely help they took it home Under up might could their treatment and care the lucky bird got recovered soon When time came for them to fly the bird they felt a bit of pity but very delightful I think it s worthwhile for him to do such a thing Here I call on the 去掉 of delighted them public to show respects for the nature Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we 去掉 the in which that 去掉 get along well with it 8 2012 2012 郑州预测郑州预测 Our English teacher is a middle aged woman who had been teaching English for more than 20 years She is always working hard For a model teacher for many years she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us In class she always encourages us speak and read English as much as possible She is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting In her spare She In time she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short plays She loves us so 10 much as she is 用心 爱心 专心7 always ready to help us In the fact she is 9 2012 南阳期终 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的 以下作文 文中共有 10 处错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修 改 增加 在缺词处加上一个漏词符号 并在此符号下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 The day is my Dad s birthday This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown and bought present for him Then I took the subway train to home Sitting on the train I thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the present At the next station an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train and stood in front of me She looked tiring I hesitated for a moment and then offered my seat to her The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down Seen her smile I felt happily I will always ready to help others in the future 第二句 present 前加 a 第三句 home 前的 to 去掉 第四句 will 改为 would she 改为 he 第五句 bag 改为 bags into 改为 on 第六句 tiring 改为 tired 第九句 Seen 改为 Seeing happily 改为 happy 第十句 always 后加 be 10 2012 2012 银川一中模拟银川一中模拟 I just come back from Britain last week I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb 16 to 28 We paid a visit to many places like London Oxford or 用心 爱心 专心8 the Lake District I learned much about British culture and history in London where was my favorite I also liked Oxford in which I saw much more old buildings The Lake District was beautiful but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there 11 20122012 陕西澄城期末陕西澄城期末 Nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health but how to keep health First it is necessary to take any exercise every day Research shows that get plenty of exercise makes the heart beat fast and the lungs work harder Second eat more fruits vegetable and less meat Third getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthy Smoking and alcohol drinking injures one s health a great deal and therefore should be given up If people follow these three ways of keeping fit they ll great improve their health 参考答案 第一句中的 concerning 改为 concerned 考察词组 be concerned about sb sth 关心 挂念某人 某事 health 改为 healthy 因为 keep 为连系动词 后面要跟形容词 第 二句中 any 改为 some any 一般用于疑问句或否定句中 在肯定句中意为 任何 用心 爱心 专心9 第三句中 get 改为 getting 在句中作宾语从句的主语 fast 改为 faster 与 harder 保持一致 第四句中改为 vegetables 这是可数名词 第五句中 as 改为 like as 作介词用意为 作为 当 时候 like 作介词用意为 像 比如 诸如 之类 important 前加 an 因为 way 是可数名词 第六句中 injures 改为 injure smoking and alcohol drinking 为并列主语 动词要 用复数 第七句中 great 改为 greatly 修饰动词 improve 要使用副词 12 2012 杭州十四中期中杭州十四中期中 One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike He was badly hurt Many people crowded around us Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside so Tom disagreed He has learned first aid He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first At that time the old man wasn t breathing Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man s breathing use the mouth to mouth way Within five minutes the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived They said that we had done was correct I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference while when us him so but has had checked check call in 去掉 use using little 前加 a that what really real 13 云南省部分名校高云南省部分名校高 20122012 届第一次统一考试届第一次统一考试 玉溪一中 昆明三中 楚雄一中玉溪一中 昆明三中 楚雄一中 Like many teenagers in China most of my spare time was spent doing my homework As a result I don t have enough times to do that I m interested in even on weekends or on holiday The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music It s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study When I listen to music it is like go to another world Sometimes the words of the songs seem to express exact how I m feeling Besides I m also interested in a fashion and I m always searching something special that can reflect my personality 1 was spent is 2 enough times time3 do that what 4 thing which that5 spare minute minutes6 their study my 用心 爱心 专心10 7 like go going8 express exact exactly9 in a fashion 10 searching something for 14 The water we drink and use was running short We all have to learn what to stop wasting water One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it Today in the most large cities fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused But even if every large city purified and reused it s water we still would have enough water 参考答案 15 20122012 苍南中学期中苍南中学期中 One day I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt When I got there I told that the ticket had all been sold out Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent 用心 爱心 专心11 that he had a spare ticket I didn t know that if I could believe him or not After hesitate for a while I decided to take it So as soon as the man left I began to regret If he was not honest what shall I do On a third day I went to the station to see my aunt away As I was waving goodbye to her I saw the man sitting next to my aunt smiling at me 参考答案 One day I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt When I got there I told that the for was ticket had all been sold out Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent tickets strong that he had a spare ticket I didn t know that if I could believe him or not After hesitate for a 去掉 hesitating while I decided to take it So as soon as the man left I began to regret If he was not honest what But shall I do On a third day I went to the station to see my aunt away As I was waving goodbye to should the off her I saw the man sitting next to my aunt smiling at me 16 In recent years the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people especially among youngsters More and more school in China require students to take part community service during the vocations Students are often seeing to sweep the streets plant trees and visit orphanages Community service is of the great benefit to both those in need and society Moreover community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility As modern middle 用心 爱心 专心12 school students we should get active involved in community service By participating we can learn what to work well in a team how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability Undoubtedly both of these are important to our development Therefore they should treasure all such chances In recent years the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people especially among youngsters More and more school in China require students to take part community service during the vocations Students are often schools in seeing to sweep the streets plant trees and visit orphanages Community service is of the great benefit to both those in seen need and society Moreover community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility As modern middle social school students we should get active involved in community service By participating we can learn what to work well actively How in a team how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability Undoubtedly both of these are important to skills all our development Therefore they should treasure all such chances we 17 2012 宁波八校测试宁波八校测试 例如 It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you Luckily I the was completely free then so I ll to say yes I ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday am on Nowadays people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic It has serious influenced people daily life and economic development To solve the problem some pieces of advice is put forward Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built By this way the traffic density can be reduced thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars 用心 爱心 专心13 Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars This can decrease the traffic flow But on the other hand this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded In my opinion the number of private cars should be put under the control And at the same time buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles Nowadays people in many big cities are complaining aboutabout the heavy traffic It has seriouslyseriously influenced people speople s daily life and economic development To solve the problem some pieces of advice areare put forward Some people suggest that more streets and roads should bebe built InIn this way the traffic density can be reduced thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars This can decrease the traffic flow But on the other hand this will affectaffect the consumption and makemake buses more crowded In my opinion the number of private cars should be put underunder control control And at the same time buses should have their own special routes which thatwhich that cannot be used by other vehicles 18 2012 开封二模 用心 爱心 专心14 19 After watch English TV last Sunday morning I phoned to my classmate and asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon Before the film was over we returned to school to do our lessons While we are having a rest in the corridor I saw Mr Liu my head teacher He told me that we had made some progresses in English but my Chinese lagged behind especially my Chinese composition He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well to improving composition writing That was really good idea What they said was quite right and I should follow their advice 20 Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu One Monday morning when she entered in the classroom we found that she was young and beautiful lady Then she introduced herself and said they shouldn t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu Late she let us go the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn When it was my turn I felt too s hy that I didn t dare to say anything before the class She went up to me and said kind Don t be afraid I believe you can do it well At last I went to the blackboard She praised me for that I had done 参考答案 Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu One Monday morning when given she entered in the classroom we found that she was young and beautiful lady Then she 去掉 in a 用心 爱心 专心15 introduced herself and said they shouldn t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu Late she let us go to she Later 去掉 to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn When it was my turn I felt say too shy that I didn t dare to say anything before the class She went up to me and said kind Don t so kindly be afraid I believe you can do it well At last I went to the blackboard She praised me for that what I had done 21 2012 届乌鲁木齐一中高三二次月考 After shopping mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch I notice mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple They ate silently and it was clearly t