山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（34）

用心 爱心 专心1 山西省山西省 20122012 高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错 写作 写作 3434 短文改错 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标题号的每一行做出判断 如无错误 在该行右边的横 线上划 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 When I was a child my mom was pushed me to study 1 hard hoping I could get a chance to go to college I experience 2 pressure for the first time I did that my mom expected3 because I didn t want to let her off I was born to a poor4 peasant family but I really know life is not easy All the5 things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6 lead better life in the future As the saying goes no pains no 7 gains I was finally able to meet my mother s expectation and 8 have a chance to go to college Thanks to my mother s push and the 9 pressure I made it Now I no longer think pressure is a good thing 10 书面表达 用心 爱心 专心2 1 短文必须包括以上要点 可适当添加细节 2 词数 100 词左右 开头已经为你写好 不计入总词数 Dear fellow students I d like to introduce you to a new website 短文改错短文改错 WhenWhen I I waswas a a child child mymy mommom waswas pushedpushed meme toto studystudy1 1 waswas hard hard hopinghoping I I couldcould getget a a chancechance toto gogo toto college college I I experienceexperience 2 2 experiencedexperienced pressurepressure forfor thethe firstfirst time time I I diddid thatthat mymy mommom expectedexpected3 3 whatwhat becausebecause I I didn tdidn t wantwant toto letlet herher offoff I I waswas bornborn toto a a poorpoor4 4 downdown peasantpeasant family family butbut I I reallyreally knowknow lifelife isis notnot easy easy AllAll thethe5 5 andand 或或 soso thingsthings mymy mothermother diddid waswas thethe resultresult ofof herher hopehope thatthat I I couldcould6 6 werewere leadlead better better lifelife inin thethe future future AsAs thethe sayingsaying goes goes no no pains pains nono 用心 爱心 专心3 7 7 a a gains gains I I waswas finallyfinally ableable toto meetmeet mymy mother smother s expectationexpectation andand 8 8 expectationsexpectations havehave a a chancechance toto gogo toto college college ThanksThanks toto mymy mother smother s pushpush andand thethe9 9 pressure pressure I I mademade it it Now Now I I nono longerlonger thinkthink pressurepressure isis a a goodgood thing thing 1010 badbad 书面表达书面表达 OneOne possiblepossible versionversion DearDear fellowfellow students students I dI d likelike toto introduceintroduce youyou toto a a newnew website website TheThe purposepurpose ofof settingsetting upup suchsuch a a websitewebsite isis toto developdevelop youryour interestinterest ofof learninglearning EnglishEnglish andand makemake learninglearning EnglishEnglish easyeasy andand enjoyableenjoyable forfor usus students students A A widewide varietyvariety ofof EnglishEnglish materialsmaterials areare availableavailable inin thisthis website website suchsuch asas EnglishEnglish exercises exercises foreignforeign cultures cultures EnglishEnglish shortshort stories stories etc etc AndAnd youyou cancan alsoalso enjoyenjoy chattingchatting inin EnglishEnglish herehere withwith otherother EnglishEnglish learnerslearners soso thatthat youyou cancan improveimprove bothboth youryour oraloral andand writtenwritten English English Furthermore Furthermore ifif you dyou d likelike toto showshow youryour ownown EnglishEnglish writingswritings andand exchangeexchange youryour EnglishEnglish learninglearning experiencesexperiences withwith others others thisthis websitewebsite isis youryour bestbest choice choice Meanwhile Meanwhile youryour EnglishEnglish c