五年高考真题--专题短文改错

2015 2011 年各省市高考题 Passage 1 2015 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 When I was a child I hoped to live in the city I think I would be happy there Now I am living in a city but I miss my home in countryside There the air is clean or the mountains are green Unfortunately on the development of industrialization the environment has been polluted Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier Much rare animals are dying out We must found ways to protect your environment If we fail to do so we ll live to regret it 答案 When I was a child I hoped to live in the city I I would be happy think thought there Now I am living in a city but I miss my home in countryside There the air is clean the mountains are green Unfortunately the development of or and on with industrialization the environment has been polluted Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very problem The seriously serious airs air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier rare animals are dying out We must Much Many ways to protect environment If we fail to do so we ll live to regret it found find your our the 1 解析 考查动词的时态 根据前面一句可知 这是发生在小时候的事情 故 用一般过去时态 答案 第 2 句 think thought 2 解析 考查冠词的用法 in the countryside 在乡村 为固定短语 答案 第 3 句 countryside 前加 the 3 解析 考查并列词的用法 那儿的空气洁净 群山葱绿 由句意可知两个分 句之间显然为并列关系 而非选择关系 答案 第 4 句 or and 4 解析 考查介词的用法 with the development of 为一固定短语 意思是 随 着 的发展 答案 第 5 句 on with 5 解析 考查被动语态的用法 众多研究表明 全球变暖已经成为一个十分严 重的问题 由句意可知 studies 和谓语 show 之间为主动关系 故要用主动 语态 答案 第 6 句 去掉 been 6 解析 考查形容词的用法 修饰名词 problem 应当用形容词 答案 第 6 句 seriously serious 7 解析 考查不可数名词的用法 air 作 空气 讲时为不可数名词 答案 第 7 句 airs air 8 解析 考查代词的用法 Animals 为可数名词复数 故用 many 答案 第 8 句 Much Many 9 解析 考查情态动词的用法 情态动词后面要接动词原形 答案 第 9 句 found find 10 解析 考查语境中代词的用法 依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知 your 与上 下文相悖 结合句意应当改为 our the 才能使句意通顺 答案 第 9 句 your our Passage 2 2015 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 One day little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent It was very crowded Tony saw a toy on a shop window He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop After looks at the toy for some time he turned around and found where his parents were missing Tony was scared and begun to cry A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop Five minutes later Tony saw parents Mom said How nice to see you again Dad and I were terrible worried Tony promised her that this would never happen again 答案 One day little Tony went to a shopping center with his It was very parent parents crowded Tony saw a toy a shop window He liked it so much that he on in quickly walked into the shop After at the toy for some time he turned looks looking around and found his parents were missing Tony was scared and to cry A woman saw him crying and him to wait outside begun began telling told a the shop Five minutes later Tony saw parents Mom said How nice to see you again Dad and I were worried Tony promised her that this would never terrible terribly happen again 1 解析 考查名词复数 由第五句中的 his parents were missing 可知此处应当 用复数形式 答案 第 1 句 parent parents 2 解析 考查介词的用法 玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的 故用介词 in 答案 第 3 句 on in 3 解析 考查固定句型的用法 由语境可知 托尼非常喜欢这个玩具 于是快 速走进商店 so that 为固定句型 意思是 如此 以致于 故去掉 very 答案 第 4 句 去掉 very 4 解析 考查省略的用法 After 之后省去了主语 he he 与 look at 之间为逻辑 上的主谓关系 故应当用现在分词 答案 第 5 句 looks looking 5 解析 考查宾语从句连接词的用法 动词 found 之后为宾语从句 从句为系表 结构 意思完整 故将 where 去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的 that 答案 第 5 句 去掉 where 或 where that 6 解析 考查并列谓语的用法 由句子结构可知 begin 与 was scared 并列 因 此 要用一般过去时 答案 第 6 句 begun began 7 解析 考查并列谓语的用法 有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等 由句意可知 tell 这一动作是这个妇女发出的 应当与 saw 构成并列谓语 故 改用 told 答案 第 7 句 telling told 8 解析 考查冠词的用法 表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词 答案 第 7 句 a the 9 解析 考查物主代词的用法 根据句意及英语表达习惯 应当在 parents 前加 上与主语相一致的物主代词 答案 第 8 句 saw 后加 his 10 解析 考查副词的用法 形容词 worried 之前要用副词来修饰 答案 第 10 句 terrible terribly Passage 3 2015 四川 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单 词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每句不超过两个错误 2 每处错误及其修改均仅限一次 3 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Hi Janice It s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing As I tell you last time I made three new friend here We hang out together during lunch and after school We ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars It s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many And I started to see this as a time wasting activity In fact I don t like to go anymore so I m afraid I ll lose their friendship How do you think I should do If you are me would you talk to him Please help with me and give me some advice Grace 答案 Hi Janice It s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing As I you last time I made three new here We hang out together tell told friend friends during lunch and after school We ve been spending a lot of time in karaoke sing singing bars It s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me And I started to see this many much as a time wasting activity In fact I don t like to go anymore I m afraid I ll so but lose their friendship do you think I should do If you me would you talk How What are were to him them Please help me and give me some advice Grace 1 解析 考查动词 want 的用法 want 后用不定式作状语 故加上 to 答案 want 后加 to 2 解析 考查时态 根据时间状语 last time 可知 此句需用一般过去时 故把 tell 改成 told 句意 正如我上次告诉你的那样 答案 tell told 3 解析 考查名词的复数 名词 friend 为可数名词 其前有 three 修饰 需要用 复数形式 故把 friend 改成 friends 句意 我在这儿交了三个新朋友 答案 friend friends 4 解析 考查动名词作宾语 本句考查句型 spend in doing sth 结构 故把 sing 改成 singing 答案 sing singing 5 解析 考查代词 根据句意 指的是花费很多钱 故用 much 而非 many 句 意 那真的花费很多 答案 many much 6 解析 考查连词 上一分句句意 我不想再去 下一分句句意 我怕失去他 们的友谊 两个分句之间有转折关系 故把 so 改成 but 答案 so but 7 解析 考查疑问词的选择 本句中 do 之后缺少宾语 故用 what 答案 How What 8 解析 考查虚拟语气 根据句意可知 此处为虚拟语气 与现在事实不符 故把 are 改成 were 句意 如果你是我 答案 are were 9 解析 考查代词 根据上文可知 作者交了三个朋友 故用 them 句意 你 会和他们说吗 答案 him them 10 解析 考查动词 动词 help 为及物动词 其后接宾语时无需加介词 故去掉 with 句意 请帮帮我 给我一些建议 答案 去掉 with Passage 4 2015 陕西 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 My soccer coach retired in last week I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party My mum makes the better biscuits in the world so I decide to ask her for help Mum taught me some basic step of baking I insisted on doing most of the baking myself I thought the biscuits were really well My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up At a party my coach with a biscuit in his mouth asked surprisingly who made them and joked I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter 答案 My soccer coach retired last week I wanted to do special for anything something him at his retirement party My mum makes the biscuits in the world so I better best to ask her for help Mum taught me some basic of baking I insisted on decide decided step steps doing most of the baking myself I thought the biscuits were really My only well good mistake was that I dropped some on the floor I was packing them up after when while At party my coach with a biscuit in his mouth asked surprisingly who a the made them and joked I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me the biscuits enjoy enjoying with happy laughter 1 解析 last week 上个星期 前面无需加冠词 答案 去掉 in 2 解析 something 用在肯定句中 表示 一些事 anything 任何事 答案 anything something 3 解析 我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干 此处不是比较含义 应是最高级 best 答案 better best 4 解析 全文的时态都是一般过去时 故把 decide 改为 decided 答案 decide decided 5 解析 根据前面的 some step 应该是复数形式 答案 step steps 6 解析 作表语的是形容词 good well 是副词 作状语 答案 well good 7 解析 我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候 掉在地上一些 when while 当 的时候 after 在 之后 答案 after when while 8 解析 此处表特指 at the party 在晚会上 答案 a the 9 解析 动词不定式表示目的 我也许得再退休一次 能吃到更多的饼干 答案 just 后加 to 10 解析 and 连接两个并列的 动 名词 enjoy 是动词 所以改成 enjoying 答案 enjoy enjoying Passage 5 2015 浙江 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单 词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写上该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写上修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view On the left hand side of the class I could easy see the football field In the mornings it was full of students exercising The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them Farther in the distance I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains On the right side of the class was the road I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom I will never forget it 1 解析 考查名词的复数形式 前面有 three 修饰 故要用复数形式 答案 第一句 side sides 2 解析 考查固定表达 be made of 是指不经过加工 能直接看出原材料 be made from 是指经过加工 不能直接看出原料 答案 第一句 from of 3 解析 考查非谓语动词 动词 enjoy 后要接动名词作宾语 答案 第二句 sit sitting 4 解析 考查形容词和副词的错用 修饰动词 see 要有副词形式 答案 第三句 easy easily 5 解析 考查动词的时态 本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室 故要时态保持一 致 用一般过去时 答案 第五句 is was 6 解析 考查代词的错用 代替前面的单数 a beautiful park 要用 it 答案 第六句 them it 7 解析 考查逻辑关系 在更远处 我可以欣赏雪山的美景 答案 第七句 not 去掉 8 解析 考查固定表达 in a hurry 匆匆忙忙 答案 第九句 in 后加 a 9 解析 考查非谓语动词 make sb do 使某人做某事 答案 第十句 felt feel 10 解析 考查状语从句引导词 尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子 但我将永远忘不了它 答案 最后一句 If Although Though Passage 6 2014 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Nearly five years before and with the help by our father my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes 圣女果 in our back garden Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please As result the plants are growing somewhere The fruits are small in size but juicy and taste There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost 1 解析 ago 常与一般过去时连用 before 常与完成时连用 这里谓语是 planted 用的是过去式 故用 ago 答案 第一句中 before ago 2 解析 with the help of 在 的帮助下 答案 第一句中 by of 3 解析 由前面 all these 可知应用 year 的复数形式 答案 第二句中 year years 4 解析 根据时间状语 since then 可知 主句应为现在完成时 所以把 had 变为 have 答案 第二句中 had have 5 解析 as a result 为固定搭配 译为 结果 答案 第三句中 as 后加 a 6 解析 因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽 所以这种植物长得到处都是 everywhere 到处 somewhere 某处 答案 第三句中 somewhere everywhere 7 解析 are 后面应用形容词 and 连接形容词 juicy 和 tasty 答案 第四句中 taste tasty 8 解析 根据谓语 are 可知后面应用修饰可数名词的 many 而 much 修饰不可 数名词 答案 第五句中 much many 9 解析 although 引导让步状语从句 不可与 but 连用 但可以与 yet 连用 答案 第六句中 but 去掉或改为 yet 10 解析 因 tomatoes 为名词应用形容词修饰 所以把副词改为形容词 答案 第七句中 wonderfully wonderful Passage 7 2014 浙江 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单 词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写上该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写上修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 I was taking a train to London s Victoria Station I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people Before long a train inspector comes to check our tickets A passenger realized he couldn t find his ticket but became quite upset Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket owner before Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help If we could show concern to others on need the world would be a better place to live in 1 解析 考查时态一致 文章主体时态为一般过去时 答案 去掉 had 2 解析 考查词性 be 动词后应用形容词 noise 为名词 答案 noise noisy 3 解析 考查时态 before long 后用一般过去时 答案 comes came 4 解析 考查句子关系 一位乘客意识到他的票不见了 他开始不安起来 应 为承接关系 而非转折关系 答案 but and 5 解析 考查固定搭配 search for look for 寻找 答案 searching 后加 for 6 解析 考查代词指代 此处是票的主人用 its 或主人 the owner 答案 his its the 7 解析 考查冠词 上文提到过用 the 表特指 答案 a the 8 解析 考查形容词 副词用法 修饰动词的应为副词 previous 是形容词 答案 previous previously 9 解析 考查前后一致 从上文看 丢票的是一个人 故应用单数 答案 strangers stranger 10 解析 考查固定结构 in need 需要 答案 on in Passage 8 2014 四川 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单 词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每句不超过两个错误 2 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 3 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Hello boys and girls Today I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off If you hear the alarm stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside Stay close to your teacher and classmate Don t panic or get out of line and trying to remain quiet and calmly Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire If it s a false alarm and there is no fire your teacher will lead us back to the classroom If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt tell your teacher immediately 语篇导读 这是一篇实用文体 向读者介绍遇到火警时的正确做法 1 解析 talk with 后面常跟指人的词 意思是 同某人交谈 talk about 意为 谈论 答案 with about 2 解析 表达客观事实通常使用一般现在时态 a fire alarm 为单数名词 故谓语 动词应当用单数第三人称形式 答案 go goes 3 解析 wait 为不及物动词 后跟宾语时要加上介词 for 答案 在 wait 之后加上 for 4 解析 classmate 为可数名词 此处应当用复数形式 答案 classmate classmates 5 解析 根据 and 一词可知本句与前面的祈使句并列 所以应当用动词原形 答案 trying try 6 解析 由并列连词 and 可知本词与 quiet 都作系动词 remain 的表语 故词性应 与 quiet 一致 答案 calmly calm 7 解析 前文已提到火灾 这里特指那场火 答案 a the 8 解析 根据短文意思可知这是老师告诉同学们的一些注意事项 用的均是第 二人称 答案 us you 9 解析 宾语从句中使用了两个连接词 根据句意 如果你们注意到有人失踪 或受伤 可知 when 是多余的 答案 去掉 when 10 解析 如果某人失踪了 就无法判断他受伤与否 这两个词之间是选择关系 故用 or 答案 and or Passage 9 2014 陕西 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven He wanted teach me about animals insects and trees My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting One evening at sunset we sat by the fire have our barbecue Just then a bird was flying over us My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird Neither of the arrows hit the target Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky they were looked like rain We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured That day I didn t learn much about animals insects or trees but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity 1 解析 考查非谓语动词 want to do sth 想要做某事 为固定搭配 答案 He wanted 后加 to 2 解析 考查动词时态 本文的主体时态为一般过去时 答案 come came 3 解析 考查非谓语动词 一个句子只能有一个谓语动词 因此此处应为非谓 语动词作伴随状语 答案 have having 4 解析 考查形容词副词修饰关系 副词修饰后面的动词 jumped up 答案 immediate immediately 5 解析 考查介词的使用 shoot at 朝 射击 下文的 Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky 也给本句提供了答案 答案 on at 6 解析 考查不定代词 根据前文的 arrows 一词可以看出 此处不是只有两只 箭 因此把 Neither 改为 None 表示三支以上 答案 Neither None 7 解析 考查主谓一致 主语为复数形式 arrows 谓语动词应用复数 答案 was were 8 解析 考查语态 look 作为系动词 无需用被动语态 答案 去掉 were 9 解析 考查连词 根据句意 我们跑开了 幸运的是 没有人受伤 可以看 出 此处为承接关系 并非转折关系 答案 but and 10 解析 考查冠词的使用 后面的 impressive 一词第一个读音为元音 因此用 an 答案 a an Passage 10 2014 辽宁 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Dear Jeremy and Alice Although we ve been delighted to have you as neighbors we re hoping to settle something that bothers to us In a word your dog Cleo We ve called several time about Cleo s early morning barking It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she s outside The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby Beside Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day This morning she starts barking even before 5 o clock That is too much for us considering how closely the houses are We appreciate our apologies and goodwill but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter Sincerely Jack and Rose 1 解析 bother 为及物动词 无需加 to 答案 去掉 to 2 解析 当 次数 讲时 time 为可数名词 答案 time times 3 解析 动词不定式符号 to 后跟动词原形 答案 understanding understand 4 解析 主谓一致问题 主语为单数 谓语动词用单数形式 答案 have has 5 解析 besides 除此之外 连词 beside 在 一边 介词 答案 Beside Besides 6 a an 7 解析 考查时态 今天早晨的事情自然用一般过去时 答案 starts started 8 解析 考查形容词 close 和 closely 的区别 房子距离近用 close 具体意义 closely 表抽象意义 答案 closely close 9 解析 考查人称代词 我们感激你的歉意 后句的 you 给本题提供了答案 答案 our your 10 解析 考查固定搭配 figure out 找出 答案 figure 后加 out Passage 11 2013 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 The book I m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain It is said to have started in the early 1800 s Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner that might not be served until 8 o clock at night This custom soon becomes another meal of day Interesting it had a connection by the British porcelain 瓷器 industry Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles When tea got popular in Britain there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits This made for the grow in the porcelain industry 答案 The book I m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain It is said to have started in the early 1800 s tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between Have Having lunch and dinner might not be served until 8 o clock at night This custom that which soon another meal of the day it had a connection becomes became Interesting Interestingly the British porcelain 瓷器 industry Tea in China was traditionally by with to drank drunk from cups without handles When tea got popular in Britain there was a crying need for good