广东省2012届高三英语二轮复习 专题训练 写作（11）

用心 爱心 专心1 广东省广东省 20122012 届高三英语二轮复习专题训练 写作 届高三英语二轮复习专题训练 写作 1111 第一节 基础写作 假设你是校刊的通讯员 上星期天你们班组织四组同学四组同学分别参加几个志愿者活动 请 根据以下四幅图所提供的信息 给校刊的 英语园地 投稿 报道你们的活动及感受你们的活动及感受 人民公园 公交汽车站 广场 养老院 写作要求 1 只能用 5 个句子表达全部的内容 2 注意 文章开头已经写好 参考词汇 希望工程 Hope Project 养老院 Old People s home 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 Last Sunday our class organized some volunteers activities in which all of us took an active part 第二节 读写任务 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 A grand memorial service was held Wednesday October 28 2009 in central Hubei province to honor three college students who died rescuing two children from the Yangtze Rive on October 24 Thousands of people holding chrysanthemum 菊花 flowers went to the Jingzhou Memorial House to see off the teenagers all 19 year old students from the Yangtze university based in Jingzhou City The three were Chen Jishi He Dongxu and Fang Zhao More than 10 students from the Yangtze University formed a ladder with one student holding another s arms to rescue the two boys in the river on the afternoon of October 24 one of the student lost his grip 控制 on his cclassmates and all of them were in danger Several members of a winter swimming team nearby came to help Chen Jishi He Dongxu and Fang Zhao were swept away in the river but others were saved People touched by their selfless act had donated more than 500 000 yuan to their relatives on Wednesday Millions of Internet users made online 用心 爱心 专心2 comments to show their grief 悲伤 I am also a college student I feel sorrow for you said Liu Zhuoya from northwestern Xi an City However some questioned the sacrifice Sacrifice three and rescue two is that worthwhile asked Tiaozhantianya on the forum of www 163 com Rescue can not be blind as they could not swim 写作内容 1 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点 2 以约 120 个词就 救人是否要考虑自身安全 这个主题发表你的看法 至少包括以下要 点 1 当别人有难时 你是否会马上伸出援手 为什么 2 救人时你是否会考虑自身的安全 3 假如你当时在场 你会怎样做 写作要求 1 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点 也可以参照阅读材料的 内容 但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 参考答案 第一节 基础写作 One possible version Last Sunday our class organized some volunteers activities in which all of us took a active part Croup 1 went to the People s Park where they planted trees watered flowers and cleaned the grasslands to make it more beautiful Group 2 made their greatest efforts to give the bus station a thorough cleaning after which the station took on a new look Group 3 helped to raise money in the square for the Hope project so that more children in poor areas can afford their schooling Group 4 went to the old People s home to present wonderful performances to make the aged there happier As far as I am concerned I think it was a meaningful day because these volunteers activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of personal values as well 第二节 读写任务 One possible version Three college students from the Yangtze University who lost their lives in order to rescue two drowning children were honored as heroes in many ways Their behavior drew public attention and wide discussion As to me I will help the people in trouble without hesitation Just as the saying goes life is difficult Everyone may face difficulties that they cannot overcome by themselves so an instant help is important Moreover if you often try your best to help others you will be helped when in trouble in 用心 爱心 专心3 return However I will first consider my own safety before I can rescue someone in danger because it is not worthwhile to lose one more life in case I fail Therefore if I had been on the spot I would have jump