广东省揭阳市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（10）VIP

1 揭阳市揭阳市 20142014 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 1010 附参考范 附参考范 文文 短文改错专项训练短文改错专项训练 此题要求改正所给短文的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行右边 横线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 该行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜 线划掉 该行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 该行错一个词 在错的词下划一个横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没 有错的不要改 Li Ming who has been working as postman for 1 two years always wears a suit of green uniforms 2 He worked with care as well as with effort He 3 serves for the people heart and soul Every day he 4 gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines 5 He is so careful and he has never been wrong 6 One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened 7 to be raining hardly outside But he set out immediately 8 He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9 he tried to hand the letter to the right person 10 参考答案参考答案 1 postman a postman 2 uniforms uniform 3 worked works 4 for 删去 5 or and 6 and that 7 8 hardly hard 9 after before 10 tried managed 结束 光明中学英语俱乐部最近在招聘英语角的组织者 假设你是李华 想申请成为英语角的组织 者 请按下列要点写一封申请信 1 擅长英语口语 参加过许多英语活动 2 2 有信心做好这项工作 3 申请成功后的打算 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 Dear Sir Madam Yours Li Hua 参考范文 参考范文 Dear Sir Madam I am Li Hua a student in Senior One I m writing to apply for the position of the organizer of the English Corner I m good at spoken English and often take part in various English activities I am sure that this job will bring me a lot of experience in organizing activities and communicating in English I believe I can be a successful organizer If I become the organizer I will organize a series of activities such as English Song Singing Contest English Lecture English Movie Week and so on I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance Yours Li Hua 结束 第二节 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 5 分 满分 15 分 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行右边横 线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划 掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一个横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Everyone can do something for our environment For me 76 I should try to save electricity in our daily life For example 77 if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening 78 I will always remember to turn on the lights In order to 79 protect our forests I will use paper wise I should try80 to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible I would81 not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks 82 because they are made of wood I believe that by doing all83 these small things will improve our environment but help84 make our world the much better place to live 85 3 答案与解析 76 77 our my 代词的错误 这里与主语保持一致 用 my 表示 在我的日常生活中 78 leave 前加 to 非谓语动词的错误 这里用不定式做定语修饰 the last person 79 on off 动词短语的错误 语境表示把灯关掉而不是打开 因此用 turn on 80 wise wisely 副词的错误 用 而不是形容词做状语表示方式 81 would will 时态的错误 这里与语境保持一致 用一般将来时而不是过去将来时 82 cup cups 名词的错误 用复数名词 cups 表示泛指 83 by 删除 从句子结构看 这里的v ing 结构做句子主语 应该将介词删除 84 but and 连词的错误 这里表示顺接和递进关系 用连词 and 而不是 but 85 the a 冠词的错误 这里表示 一个更好的地方 用 a better place 而不是 那个 更好的地方 注意后面的 place to live 是正确的 可以将掉尾介词 in 省略 结束结束 高考英语书面表达讲义 高考英语书面表达讲义 议论文写作议论文写作 7 7 The Most Important Thing in the World money is everything Directions A Title The Most Important Thing in the World B 提示 有人认为 世界上最重要的东西是 钱 许多人不同意这个看法 请就这个问题谈谈你的意见 C Time limit 30minutes D Word limit 150 200words E Your composition must be written clearly on the Composition Sheet The Most Important Thing in the World In my opinion the most important thing in the world is TIME However long one may live his life consists of a certain number of years and a year has only12months a month30days and one day24hours Once you waste one hour you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it Even though you are the richest person in the world you can not afford to waste your time because it means that you are wasting your life Even though you are the most powerful person in the world one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money In their opinion if you have enough money you will have everything you want I would like to ask them a simple question Can you buy time The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency If you work with high efficiency you can do more in a certain period of time than other people 结束 4 3 下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题 请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇 短文 描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法 参考范文 3 The two pictures look so similar at one glance but they are totally different In the first picture a peasant boy carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw hopes to have a school to attend In the second picture a student is on his way home from school a heavy bag of books on his back He wishes he didn t have to go to school any more The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China In the poor countryside there are no buildings for classrooms let alone good teachers They are sometimes forced to leave school because their families cannot afford the necessary fees However although the children in the cities can have regular education they have to face endless homework which puts so much pressure on them that some students don t want to continue their studies Therefore measures should be taken to deal with this problem For one thing things must be done to ensure that children in the poor areas can receive education For another We should try to reduce the pressure on the students In a word the whole society should work together to make some contributions to our education 结束 假如你是新华中学的一名学生 你校拟招聘一名外籍教师 请根据下面的要求写一篇招聘启 事 对应聘者的要求 1 母语是英语 大学毕业 2 身体健康 交际能力强 3 有教学经验者优先 工资面议 工作条件 1 学校交通便利 环境优美 2 每周工作五天 提供住宿 5 有意者请在八月底之前联系李老师 联系电话 010 88663528 或发邮件至 Mrli2011 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 参考词汇 应聘者 applicant English Teacher Wanted 参考范文 参考范文 English Teacher Wanted Xinhua Middle School plans to invite a foreigner to work as a teacher of English The applicant should be a native speaker of English and has gr aduated from university He or she should be healthy physically and mentally with great ability to communicate with students Teaching experience is preferred He or she has to work 5 days a week Xinhua Middle School lies near the center of the city so the traffic is very convenient There is an apartment for foreign teachers to live in If you are interested please contact Mr Li at Mrli2011 before the end of August 2012 The salary can be discussed during the interview 结束 201 成都检测 My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1 and August We will travel for about two months but2 will tour the United States and parts of the Canada We3 have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4 as vacationing in hotels but we had to plan carefully I5 think the car what we are going to drive is very small so6 we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7 and as few camping things as possibly We will take some8 medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us and also9 some food for picnics I m sure that we will have fun 10 答案与解析 1 am are 本句的主句是 my father and I 所以谓语动词用复数形式 2 but and 此处表示的是顺承关系 而不是转折关系 3 删去第二个 the 一般情况下 表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词 4 spend cost 本句的主语不是人 而是 it 所以用 cost 5 had have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况 6 what that which 或删去 what that which we are going to drive 是定语从句 修饰先行词 the car 关系代词在从句中作宾语 可以省略 7 them us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲 因此应用 us 8 possibly possible as as possible 表示 尽可能 9 prevent 前加 to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语 6 10 结束 写作指导 多使用过渡性词语 这样使文章更加连贯 更具有逻辑性 1 表示增加的过渡词 also and and then too in addition furthermore moreover again on top ofthat ano