河南省郑州市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（2）

1 郑州市郑州市 20142014 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 2 2 附参考范文 附参考范文 短文改错专项训练短文改错专项训练 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行右 边横线上划一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 该行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划 掉 该行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 该行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 A foreign university exhibition fair held at Zhijiang 1 Hotel on March 18 Over 50 universities from 10 countries 2 open their doors to students who eager to go abroad to 3 continuing their further study More and more middle school 4 students have joined in the tide of going abroad The 5 lower aged group have become the new highlight of this tide 6 And whether early entry into international education means 7 better education nor it pushes the young to leave their family 8 too early to discipline himself is discussed a lot by both 9 parents and educators How do you think of this tide of 10 going abroad 参考答案参考答案 1 exhibition 是 held 的承受者 应该用被动语态 因此须在之前加 was 2 本题是正确的 3 be eager to do sth 为固定搭配 意为 渴望做某事 故在 eager 之前加 are 4 to continue their further study 是动词不定式做目的状语 之后应用动词原型 故 将 continuing 改成 continue 5 join in 通常用来表示加入正在进行的某一项活动 而 join 意指加入到某一行列中来 故去掉 in 6 group 为单数名词 故把 have 改成 has 7 根据上下文的逻辑意义判断 此处是转折关系而非并列关系 故把 and 改成 but 8 whether or 为固定搭配 故把 nor 改成 or 2 9 前文 the young 是指 年轻人们 是复数 故把 himself 改成 themselves 10 问你觉得什么怎么样应用 what do you think of 而不用 how 故把 how 改成 what 结束 良好的人际关系是构建和谐社会的关键 假设你是李华 最近你校组织学生围绕 中学生如 何交友 这一话题展开讨论 请根据下表的提示 为某英语报的 Voice Your Opinions 栏目写一篇稿件 反映你们讨论的情况 并谈谈你对如何交友的看法 为何交友建立良好的人际关系 构建和谐社会 学习上互相学习 共同进步 生活上互相帮助 摆脱烦恼交友对象 情感上互相交流 同甘共苦 如何交友 提出你的建议 注意 1 对所给要点逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 词数 120 左右 开头已经写好 不计入总词数 3 参考词汇 和谐的 harmonious Recently we students had a heated discussion on how to make friends 3 参考范文 参考范文 Recently we students had a heated discussion on how to make friends As well all know good relationship plays an important role in building a harmonious society Many of us think we should make friends with those who can help us with our studies so that we can learn from each other and make greater progress Others believe they should have friends who can help them deal with some problems in life Still others hold that they should have friends who are willing to listen to them and share their joys and sorrows In my opinion to make friends we should be friendly and helpful to others Besides we should learn to care about others and listen to them patiently In brief true friends are like sunshine that brightens our life 结束 四川卷 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 5 分 满分 15 分 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行右边横 线上画一个沟 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划 掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66 Morning and was always late with work His boss wanted to 67 3 fire him if he didn t start coming on time but he went to 68 the doctor for a help The doctor gave him some 69 medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed 70 The man did is told and slept leally will wake up before 71 the alam had even gone off He had time for a properly 72 breakfast and was still the first reach the factory Boss he 73 said that medicine really works I m pleasing to hear 74 it said his boss but where were you yesterday 答案 66 改 troubles 为 trouble 67 改 with 为 for 68 改 but 为 so 69 去 a 70 改 them 为 it 71 改 wake 为 waking 72 改 properly 为 proper 73 reach 前加 to 74 改 pleasing 为 pleased 75 结束 高考英语书面表达讲义 高考英语书面表达讲义 议论文写作议论文写作 5 5 诚实有益 It Pays to Be Honest 1 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2 诚实利人利己 做人应该诚实 这是一篇论说文 从题目看 应从正面论证诚实的益处 第一段 举例说明在社会上存 在的诸多不诚实现象 给社会和个人都造成了极大的伤害 第二段 从正面说明诚实既利人 又利己 通过举例说明做人应该诚实 参考范文 As society and economy develop dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us Manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make more profit Doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients benefit Students may cheat on exams for better scores As a matter of fact dishonesty has become so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty However it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself and to others By being honest manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers which in the long run generates more profit By telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions doctors and nurses enhance their own credibility and honor their profession By giving honest answers to questions not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well Therefore it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be honest 结束 作文 4 下图是你在从部队回家探亲路上发生的一个故事 时间为 3 月 20 日 星期三 天气阴 请 用英语以日记的形式叙述一下此故事 字数 100 120 之间 参考范文参考范文 March 20 Wednesday Cloudy I joined the Army two years ago This was the first time l went home to see my parents I was very glad When I walked by the side of a river I heard someone shouting Help Help I saw three children struggling in the river I jumped into the ice water without hesitation I tried my best to pull two of them onto the bank but the third was washed away So I had to swim hack to save him In the end I pulled the last one onto the hank They were thankful to me and called me hero But I think I just did what I should do 结束 根据下面的图用英语写一个题为 Such a Help 的小故事 故事须包含所有图画内容 可以 适当增加细节 使故事连贯 词数 100 120 个 提示 图中的小孩名叫 Tom 老人叫 MrSmith 参考范文参考范文 Such a Help One day Tom was kicking a ball under some trees He once kicked it so hard that it got stuck between two branches of a tree He was too short to reach the ball Just as he was won dering how he could get it down a man was passing by with an umbrella in his hand Tom went up and asked for help Theman threw his umbrella at the ball and it was knocked down But unfortunately the umbrella was caught on the tree Tom was happy to have his ball back and went away with it He did not even say a word to the man How could the poor man get his umbrella back No one 5 knows 典型题 结束 高考英语书面表达讲义 高考英语书面表达讲义 教育校园话题作文教育校园话题作文 例 3 假如你是李华 是华文中学的学生会主席 为了丰富同学们的业余生活 提高同学们 的英语水平 学生会组织了一个 English club 请你写封邀请信 邀请同学们参加 内容应 包括 1 English club 设立的目的 2 English club 要开展的活动 3 邀请大家参加 English club 注意 开头 结尾已给出 字数 80 120 auditorium 礼堂 Boys and girls I m the chairman of Student Union Li Hua and I have big news for you To enrich our life on campus and improve our English we Student Union set up an English club Obviously besides study there are also other things beneficial to us It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding There goes the plan It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening Apart from that there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening yet the specific topics haven t been settled If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions please let us know I ll highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club You will never regret joining us So just do it Student Union 结束 201 河北部分重点联考 Dear Anish Here are the information about Manchester University 1 It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2 has a very big schoolyard You can live in the school3 or near the school They have all s