河南省信阳市第四高级中学2014届高考英语 专题训练 短文改错、书面表达（5）

1 河南省信阳市第四高级中学河南省信阳市第四高级中学 20142014 届高考英语专题训练 届高考英语专题训练 短文改错 短文改错 书面表达 书面表达 5 5 短文改错 201 保定调研 Last Sunday I went to the Bird s Nest Stadium At gate1 I happened to meet some young America tourists I greeted2 to them in English and then we began to chat From the chat3 I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4 but most of them were fond of Chinese culture They were5 busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6 the changes which had been taken place in the past few years 7 After come out of the Stadium we went to the Water Cubic 水立方 8 and had a good time there We exchanged our email address so that9 we could write to each other later They thanked us again and again 10 I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English 答案与解析 1 gate 前加 the 此处表示特指 指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门 2 America American 应该用形容词来修饰名词 3 去掉第一个 to greet 是及物动词 可直接加宾语 不必加 to 4 5 but and 来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折 应用 and 表示并列 6 seem seemed 根据事情发生的时间 last Sunday 和全文的时态可知 此处也应 2 用一般过去时 7 去掉 been take place 无被动语态 8 come coming 介词 after 后要用动名词形式 9 address addresses 交换的是双方的邮箱地址 故此处应用复数形式 10 us me 是 我 帮助了他们 因此用 me 结束 高考英语书面表达讲义 高考英语书面表达讲义 表格作文表格作文 4 4 2525 min min 注意 1 对所给要点 逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 词数不少于 120 3 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名 3 参考范文 OneOne possiblepossible versionversion Good afternoon everyone The topic of my speech today is Being a Good Listener Good listening can always show respect promote understanding and improve interpersonal relationship Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children so they will understand them better and find it easy to narrow the generation gap teachers should listen more to their students then they can meet their needs better and place themselves in a good relationship with their students students should listen more to their classmates thus they will help and learn from each other and a friendship is likely to be formed 结束 经典名句与句式汇总 经典名句与句式汇总 核心句型 开头 正文 结尾 核心句型 开头 正文 结尾 1 1 开头开头 The arguer may be right about but he seems to neglect fail to mention take into account that fact that 4 As opposed to Contrary to widely commonly generally held accepted belief ideas views I believe argue that Although many people believe that I doubt wonder whether the argument bears much analysis close examination The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from carry more weight than those of are much greater than A Although it is commonly widely generally held felt accepted agreed that it is unlikely to be true that There is an element of truth in this argument statement but it ignores a deeper and more basic important essential fact reason that It is true that True To be sure Admittedly but this is not to say it is unlikely it doesn t follow it doesn t mean it won t be the case that The main obvious great problem flaw drawback with in this argument view remark is that it is ignorant of blind to the basic bare fact that It would be possible natural reasonable to think believe take the view that but it would be absurd wrong to claim argue that In all the discussion and debate over one important basic fact is generally overlooked neglected There is absolutely in fact no every reason for us to believe accept resist reject that Logical Valid Sound as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it it appears insignificant absurd when is taken into consideration account 5 On the surface At first thought it this may seem a sound an attractive suggestion solution idea but careful weighing on the mind on closer analysis on second thought we find that Too much emphasis placed on attention paid to importance attached to may obscure overlook neglect other facts The danger problem fact truth point is that What the arguer fails to understand consider mention is that We don t have to look very far to see find out the truth validity of this argument proposition However just logical sound valid this argument may be it only skims the surface of the problem 专题训练与高考预测 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断 如无错误 在刻行右边横 线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 该行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行在边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划掉 该行缺一词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 该行错一个词 在错的词下面划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没能错的不要改 Passage 1 Miss China 6 Guan Qi a 21 years old college student from Jilin 1 Province had won the Miss China 2003 beauty pageant 2 in Sanya Hainan Province on September 21 3 Besides judged on their looks the 32 competitors 4 were tested on their write ability English skills 5 team work and generally knowledge Miss Guan Qi 6 impressed the judges who present with her excellent 7 replies during the question or answer section She will 8 represent 代表 Chinese in the final of Miss World 9 to be holding in Sanya on December 6 10 结束 结束 高考英语 写作综合训练集 写作话题议论篇写作话题议论篇 诚信是处世之本 但是在中学生当中 考试作弊 抄袭作业 欺骗家长和老师等现象屡 见不鲜 请你对以上种种现象作简要描述 并以 How to guarantee honesty 为题 从三个 方面 谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 开头和结尾已给出 不计入总词数 How to guarantee honesty As we all know honesty is always an essential principle of living Much to our 7 regret however Honesty is the best policy which is what we should keep in mind all the time 参考范文 One possible version As we all know honesty is always an essential principle of living Much to our regret however it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams copy others homework and fool their teachers and parents Therefore how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention Personally I think honesty education is necessary For instance courses on honesty can be offered to students activities like story telling and lectures are also worthy trying With the concept of being honest rooted in their minds honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study Besides related rules and regulations should be laid down Detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework tests relationship with teachers and parents Then strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat and consequently they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time 结束 I ll never forget the trip to Europe last year After I left 76 8 a small village in the south of France I drove on to the next 77 town In the way a young man who was very tall stopped me and78 asked me for the lift As soon as he got into the car I said 79 Good morning to him in French and he answered with the same80 language Except for a few words I do not know any French81 at all None of us spoke during the journey I had nearly 82 reached the town while the young man suddenly said very slowly 83 Do you speak English I looked at him in surprising 84 Here was no people speak English Just then I understood that 85 he too was an Englishman 二 76 left had 77 78 In On 79 第一个 the a 80 with in 81 do did 82 None Neither 83 while when 84 surprising surprise 85 speak speaking 结束 下面五幅图画叙述了胡先生 热爱 动物的一段经历 请根据图画内容 写一篇 100 词左右的 短文 描述他的经历并发表一点你的个人看法 参考范文参考范文 Mr Hu is one of the men who like animals in such a way that all he does 9 only causes harm to animals because he likes animals only for the purpose of satisfying his own needs He kept some birds in cages for fun and wore clothes made of wild animals fur and skin Worse still he even ate wild ani mals in restaurants and fixed some heads of rare an