河南省郑州市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（3）

1 郑州市郑州市 20142014 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 3 3 附参考范文 附参考范文 201 石家庄质检 I am a very active girl in my class I have many hobby 1 such as writing stories playing piano and singing English2 songs My most favorite subject is English I became3 interested in it when I was very young My dream is 4 to study abroad But now I need to improve my English5 and learn more about west culture as well I will be6 able to improving the friendship between China and7 the rest of the world I hoped my dream will come true 8 And I believe in nobody can change my mind I will work9 harder and follow my heart no matter how happens 10 答案与解析 1 hobby hobbies many 后接复数名词 下文 such as 后列举的内容也是提示 2 piano 前加 the play the piano 表示 弹钢琴 是固定搭配 西洋乐器类名词 前常用定冠词 the 3 去掉 most favorite 本身就是 最喜爱的 因此原句语义重复 4 5 But So 前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系 6 west western 依据语境这里表示 西方文化 应用形容词 western 作定语 7 improving improve be able to do sth 表示 能够做某事 8 hoped hope 这里表示说话人现在的愿望 故应用一般现在时 9 去掉 in I believe that 我相信 believe in 表示 信任 信仰 其后 不能接从句 2 10 how what no matter what happens 无论发生什么 what 充当从句的主语 结束 请根据下表内容写一篇介绍刘国正的英语短文 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 姓名出生地出生时间身高体重职业 刘国正湖北武汉1980 年1 66m 63kg 乒乓球运动员 经历 成 就 特点 1 六岁开始打球 2 1995 年进入国家队 3 训练刻苦 4 曾多次荣获国家及国际大赛冠军 5 特点 敢打敢拼 心理素质好 大赛发挥出色 现况2012 年 1 月 3 日正式成为国乒男二队主教练 参考范文 参考范文 Liu Guozheng a super table tennis star was born in Wuhan Hubei Province in 1980 He is 1 66 meters tall and weighs 63 kilograms When he was six he began to play table tennis In 1995 he was chosen to the National Team He trained hard and was strict with himself Since then he has won several championships in the national and international matches Daring to struggle in the match and having fine quality are his strengths so he performs well in the matches Since January 3rd 2012 he has acted officially as coach of No 2 National Table Tennis Male Team We re sure that our national table tennis will make greater achievements under his guidance 结束 第 套 3 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 满分 10 分 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行做出判断 如有错误 每行只有 一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜 线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 八 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 每行都有一个错误 I was a honest child indeed I didn t dare to tell lies76 because of my eyes often let the secret out I remembered77 telling a lie to my parents and I could hard fix my eyes on78 my father s face let alone my mother eyes I glanced79 here and there up or down nervously 80 However after I came to Beijing I no longer have to 81 worry my eyes because everything I wanted to say82 was sent by letter I found myself often tell small lies I 83 wrote I m fine in Beijing I enjoy the food selling at the 84 university And at the weekends I often buy fried chickens85 or pork to eat 参考答案 短改 76 a 改为 an 77 删去 of 78 hard 改为 hardly 79 mother 改为 mother s 80 or 改为 and 81 have 改为 had 82 my 前加 about 83 tell 改为 telling 84 selling 改为 sold 85 chickens 改为 chicken 结束 仔细观察下面图画 请你给 China Daily 写一篇 100 字左右的短文 描述一下你在路上 所见的事 并就骑车人 李平的行为 简单阐明自己的感想 4 参考范文 One Possible Version One day Li Ping was riding fast when she suddenly saw an old woman before her But it was too late to stop immediately The old woman was knocked down Li Pin didn t help her Instead she scolded her and rode away When Li Ping stopped her bicycle she was surprised to find her new shoes missing She hurried back and found the old woman there holding her shoes in her hands She was sorry for what she had done and apologized to the woman From this I learned everybody should be kind to each other Never do as Li Pin did to the old or you will feel greatly sorry 结束 4 假设你是李华 你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习 七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学 生英语演讲比赛 你在资料搜集 语言运用等方面遇到了困难 请根据以下要点给 Tom 写一 封电子邮件 1 询问 Tom 的生活和学习情况 2 谈谈你的困难并请 Tom 帮忙 3 告诉 Tom 你打算赛后去看他 注意 1 词数 120 150 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 5 参考范文 4 Dear Tom How time flies It has been a month since you came to Beijing How is everything going on with your life and study now What excited me most is that I will go to Beijing to attend an English speech contest to be held in summer holiday in July for middle school students But unfortunately I m encountering many difficulties in collecting materials needed and I also have problems in the application of the language I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties I really appreciate it if you could help me Here is good news for you I ve decided to go to see you after the English speech contest I am looking forward to seeing you Best wishes to you and your parents Yours Li Hua 结束 8 下面图表是对我省某校高三学生选择高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果 请用英语写一篇 简要的报告 并说说你自己的观点 注意 1 文章的开头已经写好 2 词数 150 左右 3 可以适当发挥 结束 passage Dear Anish Here are the information about Manchester University 1 6 It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2 has a very big schoolyard You can live in the school 3 or near the school They have all sorts of course 4 I m sure you will find one you like it I know you 5 are particular interested in human rights So I will 6 see that there is anything on their website 7 I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8 when you arrived You met him a few years ago but he 9 has changed a lot since then Both your aunt or I look 10 forward to seeing you again 参考答案 KEY 6 Dear Anish Here areare the information about Manchester University is It is about 200 miles far away from London and it far has a very big schoolyard You can live in the school right or near the school They have all sorts of course courses I m sure you will find one you like it I know you it are particular interested in human rights So I will particularly see that there is anything on their website if whether I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport to when you arrived You met him a few years ago but he arrive has changed a lot since then Both your aunt or I look and forward to seeing you again 结束 结束 谋篇的原则 7 满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 文章的连贯性 和紧凑感是很重要的 句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合 是无法 达到有效表达的目的 常见的句子之间的连接手段有 使用代词指代上一句中的名词 重复使用上一句中的词 使用连接词 使用平行结构 高考大纲中常用的连接词 表并列补充关系的 what is more besides also as well moreover furthermore in addition 表转折对比关系的 but however yet instead on the other hand on the contrary although different from in contrast to despite in spite of whereas unlike nevertheless not only but also here there years ago today this that the former the latter then now the first whereas the second once now on the one hand on the other hand some others 表因果关系的 since as because of for so thus therefore as a result so that 表条件关系的 if on the condition that as long as unless or else 表时间关系的 when after before until as soon as later afterwards soon lately recently since from then on eventually in the meantime then suddenly at the same time next early this morning year century after an interval now after presently later afterward somewhat later finally at last all of a sudden 表特定的顺序关系 above all first of all firstly first secondly the next finally in the end at last 表换一种方式表达 in other words that is to say to put it another way 表进行举例说明 for instance for example like such as 8 表陈述事实 in fact actually as a matter of fact to tell you the truth 表总结 on the whole in short all in all general in a word in conclusion in closing in summary 结束 0 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 45 个人兴趣35 父母 老师意见20 参考范文 8 Some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on